[Art - Sorrel's reference] Critique and opinions [Image heavy]

May 9, 2010 - 8:32am — Freyja

SLAJDIOWJOWIH
VCG ART <3

Ohhh yeah
you like the hair, you know you do
/shot'd

http://i41.tinypic.com/66axdt.png

I'M NOT HAPPY WITH IT >:[
Talking to Ammy....she said something was missing. And I agree.
It also looks kinda funky, in a bad way.
Too...different from the actual in-forest design.
But it's still very nice <3

Ideas and critique please? On the lineart itself and anatomy is fine too.

Messing around:

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May 9, 2010 - 9:43am — Freyja

Comments appreciated.....I

Comments appreciated.....I don't bite :z

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May 9, 2010 - 9:59am — Verycrazygirl

I like the one with the

I like the one with the grey'ish pelt.
She just needs those antlers... :3

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May 9, 2010 - 10:08am — Freyja

Yeah....I accidentally used a

Yeah....I accidentally used a different version of my template, without the antlers.
That's odd xD I like the bottom on the best. But none of them are 100% perfect. The last 4 are way too marbell'd, and the top one is missing stuff

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May 9, 2010 - 11:13pm — Freyja

bamp

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May 9, 2010 - 11:35pm — Spyrre

My favourites are probably

My favourites are probably the grey and the last pelt, they have nice colors and textures. Your deer-line-art is cute too, though the face reminds me a bit of a dog, probably because of the shape of the muzzle. You could try making it a bit thinner from the tip. =)

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May 10, 2010 - 8:40am — Freyja

Thanks

Thanks <3 I'm not going to use one of those....but they're ideas that are helpful :]

I looked at it after I read that and YEAH, they really do look like my wolves. I'll change it when I make the set-in-stone one. Thanks

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May 11, 2010 - 11:05am — Freyja