Anyone want a poem? (Still doing 'em, come request! Newest - Nigel)

quadraptor's picture
Sudden urge to write something tonight. Just give me a subject/person/random word and I'll try to get something written for you Eye

Not sure how many to take, so open slots for now.
Kasmir's picture

Ah. The player ^^; She's...

Ah. The player ^^;

She's... Very... Helpful. And nice. But right now... Is going through some tough stuff. I wanted a poem or something to cheer her up. And I figured since you were so good with these.. ^^;

But... Uhm... She can be very sarcastic, and almost... Snide xD; But... She's evry kind and helpful. And a strong person. That can work through things... And comfort people very well.

o________o I hope that helps? xD;
Nayu's picture

One for eyestrain? Please.

One for eyestrain? Please.

Siggy by Butterbrot <3
Mr.Sanguine's picture

weiuhoqwr wqiuhfg eue Thank

weiuhoqwr
wqiuhfg

eue

Thank you so much quad, jeebus
I
love thisss

also chai is one of my favorite teas
quadraptor's picture

Kasmir Keep On Shining

Kasmir

Keep On Shining (Pretzil)

Clouds overcast, land shrouded today
The land holds many troubles
It is as if the sky hides all that seems to go wrong
But all is not lost, for there is you
Always there, always willing to shine upon all
You have your own battles to fight
But you'd gladly fight alongside others' in their own
And this is what makes you brave
You are much like the Sun breaking through the clouds
May your light always brighten all
And may you, Pretzil, always...always keep on shining

Quad, these are beautiful.

Quad, these are beautiful.
quadraptor's picture

Honeyfur The Enkindler

Honeyfur

The Enkindler (Phobos)

What is it that fuels him?
Is it anger, hatred, vengeance?
Or something more?
He is strong and proud,
Though he is always looking back.
There is something about him,
As though he is a selfless protector.
They feel the warmth he radiates,
Just in one look of his eyes.
The Enkindler's fiery passion can be felt.
There is nothing to fear from him.
quadraptor's picture

Nayu Heartbeat

Nayu

Heartbeat (Eyestrain)

Stop
Listen
The beating of your heart
It echoes out, it keeps strong
You may not know it
Just
Relax
Let the creativity come
A spark of inspiration will flow
You know you can do it
One
Breath
And here you draw him
Lines of a sleeping, gentle deer
Let him remind you of...
Who
You
Are meant to become
And how to persevere through
The fears deep within
Look
At
Yourself in the mirror
And you will see your deer
He is there with you
In
All
The frustration and fear
And just listen to your heartbeat
It is his heartbeat too
Stop
Listen...
wingeddeer's picture

Ahhhhhhhhhh! That poem of

Ahhhhhhhhhh!
That poem of Phobos is so beautifull <3 You nailed him.And it made me feel better tonight as well.All of them are beautifull.
And thankyou Honey for requesting,gah you're so sweet <33


Honeyfur's picture

That is truely beautiful,

That is truely beautiful, Quad. They all are! Like everyone else said, you truely have a gift 8D <3
ffff you're welcome WD! ;3; <3
quadraptor's picture

Thanks guys, I've been really

Thanks guys, I've been really worried that you wouldn't like them or that I would get a character or player's personality completely wrong.

I'm getting tired of worrying so much though.
Nayu's picture

Lovely! Thank you! Cruhuhu,

Lovely! Thank you!
Cruhuhu, please, do you think you could put the players/deers recently done in the title of your thread? If that not too much to ask...
Meh iz shy like this.

Siggy by Butterbrot <3
Amazon's picture

Quad, look what everyone is

Quad, look what everyone is saying.
You don't need to worry. ♥

Nayu's picture

I second that!

I second that!

Siggy by Butterbrot <3
quadraptor's picture

There ya go

There ya go Eye
Nayu's picture

Thanks Quad, you're awesome!

Thanks Quad, you're awesome!

Siggy by Butterbrot <3
eyestrain's picture

Every single one is just

Every single one is just right.

I don't strive to be the best, but instead I strive to do my best, and always give it my all every time.
-faunet
quadraptor's picture

Quad For Kimi with

Quad

For Kimi with Nuzzles

The world upon your shoulders
The weight continuing to put pressure
You wish things would be better for all
You think the battles you fight are never-ending

Take a moment to look to your sides
We're all here, right beside you
Our weapons drawn as well,
Ready to fight just for you

You're never alone, no matter the odds
You will persevere, you will overcome these struggles
You will thrive and endure, we have faith you will
We're always here, Kimi. For Queen and Country.
quadraptor's picture

Kaoori Wind of Invisible

Kaoori

Wind of Invisible Wonder (Kali)

You show yourself in many different ways
You touch many lives through invisible caresses
A flicker of a candle, the gentle swaying of trees
The rippling of the ocean, the drifting clouds over head
You are the wind that carries sails and birds far
You are the wind that inspires those who feel your touch
You are the wind who brings beautiful days and lovely nights
You are the one who personally makes wind chimes create music
You are the wind that makes every moment incredible
And yet...you are overlooked for more visual wonders
To those reading these words, take a moment and thank the wind
For her devotion, for her gentle works of beauty, for her perseverance
Because you, Kali, are this very wind of invisible wonder
Scythe's picture

Quad, I'm honored. Not only

Quad, I'm honored. Not only because you'd write a poem for me, but because of the words that you chose. I do not deserve them, but I thank you for them. It is encouraging to be seen in such a light.

These are all beautiful.

Thank you, too, Kimi. &hearts
BouncyDeer1's picture

These poems are so

These poems are so beautiful!If you are still making them can you do one for my Rascal?Thanks =)
Here's the link to his bio http://www.endlessforest.org/community/oh-hello-smexy-looking-fawn-over-there-rascal

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
quadraptor's picture

BouncyDeer1 Young Love

BouncyDeer1

Young Love (Rascal)

Sweet fragrance of flowers around
His eyes locked onto another little fawn
The boy's body swaying toward her
Gentle nuzzles and kisses are traded
The butterflies watch the two twitterpated fawns
As they circle each other, dancing and playing
The flowers give a perfume to their fur
The sunlight makes their faces glow brightly
As another little boy fawn approaches
The lovestruck fawn turns toward him, rearing
"Back off! This is my girl!", he cries
And a little hoof strikes the other boy, making him run
The victorious fawn turns to find his prize
But she has run away as well, fearful of him
He lets out a sigh, but then carries on
The smell of flowers masking the fawn's emotions
He will find the love of his life one day
He just knows he will find her very soon
BouncyDeer1's picture

YESSSS!!This so explains

YESSSS!!This so explains Rascal =D Thank you so much!Lol I think that Rascal would be playing with more than just one girl fawn though O.O JK but anyways thanks again =)

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
quadraptor's picture

It's okay that it's just one

It's okay that it's just one girl fawn right? I didn't know, and it's too late for me to change it now.
BouncyDeer1's picture

Yea I was just joking about

Yea I was just joking about how perverted he is lol sorry for stressing you =(

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
quadraptor's picture

No you didn't XD I just

No you didn't XD I just wanted to be sure I got him right. I'm always afraid of people not liking things I write because I don't portray their characters correctly or something, so that was the only reason why I asked.

Glad it was alright Eye
Languid's picture

*quietly summons the courage

*quietly summons the courage to ask QuadRaptor for a poem about Languid*...

I loved the idea of a definition of Languid meaning dreamy or lackadaisical(which in turn meant languidly sentimental). It reminded me of the book about Ferdinand the Bull(one of my favorites). Even though Ferdinand was a bull, not a deer, it still reminds me of the way Languid is on TEF. Just sitting there unassuming, sometimes smelling the flowers, observing the other deer interacting with each other, wondering where their confidence came from, trying to figure out why Languid chose to keep it hidden inside, so closely guarded, quietly dreaming of being a free spirit...

Thankies in advance should there be a poem thought of!

I have been thinking of a bio for quite some time, one of these days. I have been having some difficulty lately being able to connect on endless forest, but I always try to stay hopeful!
Kasmir's picture

Unicorns

Unicorns
Nayu's picture

Quadddd!! can I request a

Quadddd!! can I request a poem with "Colors" as a theme, that I will put on Nayu's bio?
Please Monsieur?

Siggy by Butterbrot <3
quadraptor's picture

Nayu, you mean like actual

Nayu, you mean like actual colors (red,green,blue ect)? Anything in particular you had in mind or just write something about colors?

Or is there a character named "Colors"? I'm a little confused XD
Nayu's picture

lol! Just something about

lol! Just something about colors!
I had nothing in mind, cuz I'm almost brain dead today.
COOOOOOOOOOOOLOOOOOOOOOOOORSSSSSSSSSSSS LOVE, meh want!

Siggy by Butterbrot <3
quadraptor's picture

Languid A Purpose One would

Languid

A Purpose

One would ask me the purpose of all of this...
What was the meaning for sitting here, watching...
Perhaps I wonder about those who run by...
What drives them, what makes them smile and not worry...
Perhaps I dream about being just like them...
Having a reason to live the way they do...
Perhaps it simply isn't what I am hoping for...
Perhaps there is just more to life than what I see...
Or perhaps I am simply not all you truly see...
What is the purpose of all of this, you may ask...
Well...it could be a simple answer as this...

There are some things locked away...
For none other eyes but mine...
But perhaps one day...these shackles shall release me...
quadraptor's picture

Kasmir A Wish from a

Kasmir

A Wish from a Unicorn

Many have searched, few ever succeed
Though only of pure heart and pure deed
Do they ever see a glimpse of the steed
Whose single horn inspires that they see

Among the forest of trees and vines lush
Her mane glistens in the sunlight brush
An instant captured, a breathless hush
Their eyes meet, startled instincts rush

And without warning, flee her hooves
Galloping quickly, the other in pursuit
One more glimpse, one chance of proof
Is all that is asked of this moment aloof

She skids to a halt, her eyes in a stare
Watching, waiting, for the followers dare
And in capture, she gives one wish rare
"What would you ask of this old mare?"

The wish has been granted, her single horn glows
And above them the sky fills with rainbows
Distracting the other, she flees into the hollows
How wishes are given, only the unicorn knows
quadraptor's picture

Nayu COLORS What is it that

Nayu

COLORS

What is it that your eyes truly see?
What makes up these things we touch, smell, taste, and hear?
Is a flower truly beautiful as it is, or is it the colors on it that give beauty?

Plump, vibrant cherries just asking to be tasted,
Blooming roses whose petals sing in color
And buzzing of ladybugs, bringers of good fortune

The vast sunset that fills the sky
The flutter of butterfly wings offering beauty freely
And ripe tangerines that make the taste buds dance

Vivid daffodils that only wish to be smelled
Beautiful amber that make the mind dream of long ago
And changing leaves that give invitation to Autumn itself

The waving long grasses of an open plain
The scaly textures of frogs, snakes, and lizards
And the wondrous visions of jade and emeralds

The deep secrets of the oceans
Hyacinths of wonder and mysterious beauty
And tiny berries that give life a taste of freedom

Polished amethyst stones that share all their secrets
Thick flowing rainstorms cooling the Earth
And orchids giving the eyes a visual kiss
Nayu's picture

Thank you so much Quad! I

Thank you so much Quad! I love it, made me smile big time! 8D
<3

Siggy by Butterbrot <3
Languid's picture

QuadRaptor!! Almost

QuadRaptor!Exclaim! Almost speechless....sooooo amazed at your beautiful poem capturing the very essence of Languid! Your insightfulness into the nature and spirit of this deer was truly brilliant! What a gifted talent you have! Thank you so much for putting a huge grin on my face, you made my day! :3
Gruffen's picture

i would really like one for

i would really like one for my deer SkyDancer and if you have the time, Zoro and Goddess. they are so pretty, like rivers of words
The sky is not the limit when there are footprints on the moon.
~Gruffen thanks so much MidnightRose! He's so cute! http://endlessforest.org/community/rp-blog-9 RP with me please!
quadraptor's picture

Sure thing, I'll get all

Sure thing, I'll get all three of them done as soon as I can. Eye
Gruffen's picture

Thanks so much

Thanks so much
The sky is not the limit when there are footprints on the moon.
~Gruffen thanks so much MidnightRose! He's so cute! http://endlessforest.org/community/rp-blog-9 RP with me please!
quadraptor's picture

Hey Gruffen, I found

Hey Gruffen, I found information about Goddess and Skydancer, but I can't seem to find anything about Zoro. Could you please give me a link to more info about them or just a short description in the comments here? Thanks XD
Gruffen's picture

Zoro is an antelope pelted

Zoro is an antelope pelted fawn with butterfly antler stubs and a human face she has a huge crush on Rascal so you can use that see bouncydeer1's rp who rascal or natali blog entry
The sky is not the limit when there are footprints on the moon.
~Gruffen thanks so much MidnightRose! He's so cute! http://endlessforest.org/community/rp-blog-9 RP with me please!
quadraptor's picture

Hey Gruffen I haven't

Hey Gruffen I haven't forgotten about you, just been really busy IRL lately. We're doing a yard sale tomorrow.

I'll try my best to get your poems written soon though. Sorry for the wait.
Gruffen's picture

No that is fine! I knew you

No that is fine! I knew you didn't I just assumed u were busy I do that all the time
The sky is not the limit when there are footprints on the moon.
~Gruffen thanks so much MidnightRose! He's so cute! http://endlessforest.org/community/rp-blog-9 RP with me please!
Gruffen's picture

And btw I have a bio for Zoro

And btw I have a bio for Zoro now
The sky is not the limit when there are footprints on the moon.
~Gruffen thanks so much MidnightRose! He's so cute! http://endlessforest.org/community/rp-blog-9 RP with me please!
quadraptor's picture

Gruffen Light of the Forest

Gruffen

Light of the Forest (Goddess)

I am much like the humble flower
I keep to the light, opening up toward the sky
The sun smiles down upon my face
My blue eyes shimmer much like that of ice
Come here, sit by my side
Let the sunlight warm your woes
Let the cooling breeze caress your back
Let the soft ground cradle you
And let me be a shoulder to rest your head upon
There is nothing more to worry about
For you and the rest of the Forest
Because the light is always here


Sky's Story (Skydancer)

Connect the stars together, and you will see
The place I came from, the home of me
They shimmer and glow, though far away
But it is in this Forest that now I shall stay
While I walk on the land, I belong in the sky
But exiled by Leo, my parents had died
I remain here in this forest until the night
That I am ready to return, to take flight
Oh Endless Forest, I have chosen my home
Until the time when I shall return to my throne



Why do you cry? (Zoro)

Here I sit and watch as the great idol cries
I begin to wonder what your tears are for?
What would cause an old god to such a sight?
Are you crying over fear, loneliness, or burden?
Don't you see that you are never alone here?
There is always a deer who will sit by your side
We may share your tears, we may comfort you instead
Great Crying Idol, why do you cry?
Why do your tears make our beautiful pond?
If it ever comes to a time where I must cry too...
I will let my tears join yours here in the stream
Gruffen's picture

OH MY

OH MY GOSH....................I LOVE THEM!Exclaim Thank you soooooooooo much! They are so pretty!!! -dies-
The sky is not the limit when there are footprints on the moon.
~Gruffen thanks so much MidnightRose! He's so cute! http://endlessforest.org/community/rp-blog-9 RP with me please!
quadraptor's picture

Glad you like them, and sorry

Glad you like them, and sorry for the wait Eye

Anyone else interested in one? I'm still writing them
Gruffen's picture

Goddess: "LET ME SPEAK

Goddess: "LET ME SPEAK GRUFFEN!"
Me: "alright sheesh"
Goddess: "Please look at your blog entry Video Mate! Look at my response!!!" Eye
The sky is not the limit when there are footprints on the moon.
~Gruffen thanks so much MidnightRose! He's so cute! http://endlessforest.org/community/rp-blog-9 RP with me please!
quadraptor's picture

Still doing poems. Anyone

Still doing poems. Anyone want one?
quadraptor's picture

The Prophet (A poem about my

The Prophet (A poem about my deer Hex)

Her eyes are fogged, blinded
Yet she still sees all she needs to
The starlight above shines down into her eyes
She sits upon the smooth stones of the playground
Much like a throne for a priestess or a queen
The land around is her court, and all are welcome
Let them enter, let them come and ask for her words
The starlit sky serves as her map, her compass, her sacred text
She raises her blind eyes to the stars, and only then does she truly see
Visions of the future, prophecies for those who seek them
They may take her words to heart, or they may dismiss them
It does not matter to her, she is only the humble fortuneteller
She hears you approach, and with a gentle smile, she asks...
"Shall I read the stars for you?"
quadraptor's picture

Borrowed this idea Song: Big

Borrowed this idea

Song: Big & Rich - Eternity



He stands in the center, wings outspread, ready to take on all of her minions. He's tired, gasping for air, but he alone stands between Iugulare and total Forest domination.

Bursting forward, his light shines on all of those infected. They are cleansed but still writhing in pain. He runs from one to another, healing their wounds while fighting off infected minions.

Iugulare towers above him, the black stoat hissing as her infection was burned by Quad's light. He takes flight and stares her in the eye, hovering close to her face. With one beautiful memory in his mind...remembering Mazey, Axie, and Zephyr standing at his side...he lets out a glorious light burst. He is engulfed in beautiful light, and it destroys all the darkness around.

Iugulare flees, back to her original size, and as Quad's light fades, he plummets to the ground.

But someone catches him, breaks his fall. Those who were infected now approach him, nuzzling his fur.

"Thank you, Quad. Thank you.", they say.