The Encounter IV

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ooc; sorry for the bump! Just changing a few minor things. <3

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Deep within the forest, a little silver doe lay, curled up with her nose tucked against the warmth of her belly. Three little white birds perched on a branch just above her, peering nervously down at the young miss below. Suddenly, a hush fell over the forest. A blue-white mist settled over the three birds, and their eyes turned a ghostly shade of white. One by one, the three birds fluttered down to the sleeping doe, and perched on her soft, peacock-feather head dress. ”Gilda,” they called in unison. The little doe stirred, but did not rise. Gilda!” The birds called again, their voices sweet and serene. The silver doe lifted her head, and the birds fluttered to the ground before her, tilting their heads to peer up at her.

”Gilda, we must act quickly. We are incarnates of the great forest spirits; it has taken us a very long time to find you.”

The doe, known by most as Lemon, shifted her weight with surprise. She began to speak, but was interrupted by the voices of the three little birds.

”There was once a deer named Agrona, who lived akin to the wolf. She lusted for power, and was a greedy spirit. Yet, she accomplished many good deeds during her lifetime, and was permitted to join us as one of the great forest spirits, after she died. However, Agrona longed for power, even as a free soul. She became violent, and grew very powerful. We had no choice but to banish her. We did not know of the existence of the Endless Forest, then; but Agrona did. She discovered the Endless Forest in her banishment, and realized that this was her opportunity to gain the power which she lusted for. She returned to Earth, disguising herself expertly, and stole you from the womb of your mother. She knew that you were destined for great things, as a mortal – and she also knew that she would never be able to gain power in the Endless Forest, without a mortal to speak and act through. So she stole you, and returned with you to the Endless Forest. She raised you, having you believe that she alone was the entire congregation of spirits; when in actuality, she is but one lonely soul. Now she tries to gain power through you, by having you slay the most widely-feared member of this forest. She wishes that all other deer fear you, so that she may control the forest through you.”

Lemon slowly rose to her feet, her mouth fallen slightly agape, shocked at what she had heard. Her ears flattened against her head, the little doe took a nervous step back. For a moment, she merely let the information sink in. Then, on the brink of tears, the young deer tilted her head at the little birds. ”Wh... Why did it take you so long to find me?”

The little birds nodded in unison. ”We thought you might ask. We did not know where you were, for a long time. We knew that Agrona had taken you; but we did not know where. Over the years, we have sent out spirits into many different realms, searching diligently. We finally found you here, just a few moments ago. We three will be returning to Earth, to report your location. You must prepare yourself, Gilda, for we will need to confront Agrona soon. For now, we must take leave – before Agrona knows that we have discovered her hiding place. Keep your strength up, and keep alert. Do not tell Agrona that we have found you. Goodbye, Gilda.”

The three birds collapsed in unison, their eyes returning to a stony grey color. Lemon whimpered, gently nudging the little birds, attempting to awaken them – but soon realized that it was to no avail. The birds had died.

Lemon fell to her knees, suddenly racked with tears.

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Lemon roused from her slumber, woken by the whispers of a familiar voice. ”Lemon?” The little doe lifted her head, blinking away the sleep from her eyes, and flicked her ears into an alert position. ”Lemon?” the whisper came again, and Lemon recognized the voice as belonging to a doe named Kailani. She smiled. Forgetting her wounds, little Lemon struggled to her feet. She winced as she felt a trickle of fresh blood slide down her side, remembering that she had not quite fully healed, yet. ”K-Kailani?” Lemon called, trying to locate the other doe. She heard Kailani stir, and the yellow-eyed doe moved cautiously toward her. By the time she reached the doe, she became aware of the fact that there were two other deer sleeping nearby. One, she recognized as Uio. The other, she recognized to be her mate, Seth. ”It's Seth... he's hurt,” Kailani said, and Lemon froze. She didn't like the strain of fear in Kailani's voice.

It was then, that Lemon became aware of an ominous scent. It was morbid and terrifying, metallic and stale, bringing back unwanted and horrifying memories -- it was the scent of blood. She felt tears sting her eyes as she lurched toward her mate, her heart pounding furiously in her chest. ”Seth!” The little doe cried, nudging against her lover's feathery pelt. She heard the skull-faced dear groan, and stir. Her twiggy legs folded as she lay down beside Seth, resting her head upon his broad shoulders, and attempting to keep the tears from sliding down her cheeks. ”Sweetheart, what happened?”

Seth grunted, twisting his head around to give his mate a gentle, comforting nuzzle. ”Walter,” he muttered. ”We... had a fight. I'm fine.” Lemon tensed at the sound of the elderly deer's name, and her jaw clenched. ”Uio and I are not faring so well, either,” Kailani remarked, her voice grim and quiet. Lemon felt her heart fall. Uio and Kailani were wounded, as well – victims of an old stag's egotistical rampage. Why was Walter so angry? What caused his sudden turmoil? She had never seen a deer so needlessly evil; a deer who had seemed so kind and likable, only days before.

The four deer lay together, wounded by the same evil force. Lemon lay nestled against her mate, while Kailani comforted Uio, who remained in a deep sleep. For quite a while, the deer all remained silent. The only sound between them was Uio's labored breath, and the occasional uncomfortable shift from Seth, as he attempted to keep the pain at bay. Finally, little Lemon broke the silence with a frustrated sigh. ”I just don't understand,” she remarked. ”I thought he was... I just never thought... Everyone always said he was a jerk; but I never really believed them.” Lemon felt Seth nestle a little closer, and realized that he had fallen asleep. The little doe sighed. She had had so much hope for Walter. Now, she wasn't sure what she thought of him...

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The sun was high when Lemon finally moved away from the gathering of wounded deer. Seth had fallen into a deep slumber, and the doe knew that he would not awaken again for some time. So she moved through the forest, her aching legs carrying her slowly through a forest which had suddenly lost its heavenly glow. The forest had always seemed so wonderful and safe, to her. Now, it seemed that every shadow threatened her; every sound was a call of alarm, in her mind. It had been a long time since she had feared the forest, this way. She hated to lurk between the trees like a ghost, unable to join the other deer in their ignorant bliss. Yet, Walter's attack had wounded her deeply – and not merely in a physical way.


Suddenly, Lemon became aware of an ominous sound. She froze, her eyes widening with fear. That familiar snarl, that heavy stomping of large hooves. It had to be Walter. Evidently, the old demon had roused from his slumber, and he now wandered the forest, several hundred yards away from where Lemon stood. And all of the sudden, she felt as if she was drowning in the open air. She could hardly breathe – it was as if her lungs had closed up entirely. Lemon felt her knees buckle, and she hit the ground with a sickening thud. She had been hoping to see Walter in the forest, again – but she hadn't counted on having a panic attack, as soon as she sensed him. Now she lay on the ground, her sides heaving as she tried desperately to pull enough oxygen into her panicking body.

A voice startled her; entering her mind uninvited. The deer froze, surprised. ”Gilda, don't act like a newborn fawn. You know that we will give you the strength you need to confront the demon who haunts this forest. Now get up. And follow your destiny.” Lemon realized, now, that Agrona's voice was much louder, much less comforting, than the voices of the true spirits. How could she have fallen for such a mindless trick? How could she have let Agrona fool her, for so long? Still, Lemon knew that she had to continue pretending to be under Agrona's deceitful spell. Without the spirits to back her up, she would be useless. Wrinkling her pale brow, Lemon took in a deep breath. She slowly lifted herself to her feet, just as Walter let out a threatening roar. Agrona – however much she hated to admit it – was right. Lemon needed to forgive Walter, and to beg his forgiveness in return. If she did not confront him now, she would never have the courage.

Suddenly, Lemon was startled to hear the sound of hooves thundering toward her. She turned, taken aback, and recognized the scent of her dear friend, Raunun. Lemon smiled, lowering her head meekly as the stag approached. ”Raunun,” she sighed, accepting his offered embrace. Raunun immediately picked up on the little doe's discomfort, and he frowned. ”What is it, Lemon?” Lemon felt her lip tremble. ”W-Walter. He's there; can you hear him? I need to speak with him.” She hesitated, closing her yellow eyes. ”He's going to rip me to pieces, isn't he?” Raunun chuckled. He had always found Lemon's dramatic ways to be quite amusing. ”Lemon, you don't need to bother with that old jerk. Let's just stay away for a while, huh?” Lemon shook her head. ”No, I... I just can't seem to wrap my head around this. Something's wrong, I just know it. He liked me, before. We were friends. I don't care what others say; this isn't just a bad mood. Something's wrong with Walter, and I can't just let it go...” Raunun sighed, giving the smaller doe a gentle nudge. By now, he knew that there was no changing Lemon's mind. She was a stubborn deer, when she wanted to be.

”It isn't your job to take care of him, Lemon,” Raunun said. ”And after what he did to you, I hardly think he deserves so much as a second glance.” Raunun's wise words fell on deaf ears; Lemon had already made up her mind. She turned to her good friend, pressing her cheek briefly against his in a half-embrace, before turning to face her fate. The young doe moved quickly away from where Raunun stood, toward the demon who plagued her life.

Raunun watched little Lemon go, his ears flattened against his head. He didn't like where this was headed – Lemon had a tendency to keep her head in the clouds, sometimes. She was on an impossible mission, trying to find good where she would never find it. And though it hurt to think of, Raunun knew that it would probably be the death of her, in the end. The trumpet-antlered stag moved slowly after Lemon, taking it upon himself to ensure that the silly girl didn't get herself into too much trouble.

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ooc; I'll end it here, for now. <3 I hope I didn't butcher anyone's characters too badly. x_____x

*shakes fist* curse the

*shakes fist* curse the cliff-hanger ending lol!

*pops popcorn and waits for next installment* 'munch'
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xDD I'm glad you're

xDD I'm glad you're enjoying my chapters! <3

I have to admit, every time I post one, I worry that no one will read it. x____x I worry it's too boring or confusing to read (or just plain poorly written!).
But even if just one person is following Lemon's little story, I'm happy! x3

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Gah, that's just you being

Gah, that's just you being your own worst critic. There's nothing wrong with the story line and it isn't poorly written by any means Sticking out tongue
You can count on me to keep reading, I'm hooked lol!
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I read them!...I hust have

I read them!...I hust have little to add after that XD I'm not good at writing critique or even praise for that matter ;___; <- Lame. I'm also not sure I follow the story 100% so its weird, but I'll keep reading ^^'

Oh! I also want to add...for no real purpose but the fact that I need to say it XD Kail really liked Walter too. She'd spent several days with him in the past, comforted him when he was unsure about Ephra...so she's pretty hurt about the whle thing , especially when he doesnt seem to care one way or another << It just seems like anytime one of my characters give him a chance he turns on them. So I'm done >< If he comes near them in the forest now they will not be nice...

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Myeegh, this is the first

Myeegh, this is the first story Raunun has never been! I really love the way you write, I wish I had your skills.
When you went to Walter, I couldn't help laughing, because Raunun and Corridor were sitting in distance looking like they were watching a movie. I'm sorry if Raun interfered himself too much into Lemon's way.
Hey, keep these coming, I'm one of the readers. 8D

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Terabetha -- Well thank you!

Terabetha -- Well thank you! :') I thought I might improve as I kept writing, but I don't feel that this is the case. x____x But I suppose you're right, about being my own worst critic. <3 Thanks again!

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Shi -- Awww, I understand what that's like. xD I've been trying to put more effort into commenting on other people's stories, lately. It isn't always easy to come up with something halfway intelligent to say. xD But thank you! I'm glad to know you're reading, as well -- even if only sporadically. <3 x)

And yes, I know. :c Lemon really, really liked Walter -- especially since he is the best friend of her "brother", Seed. She even thought they were friends. She's already the type of deer who takes things too personally and over-reacts to situations in which she thinks she's being abandoned. Needless to say, his attack really broke her heart.

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Narina -- Oh no! I loved having Raunun around! :'D And I did see you two standing there, watching. xD I wanted to write Corridor in this chapter, but I've always pictured him as a very quiet deer; so I couldn't figure how I should have him enter into the storyline. But he'll most certainly be in the next chapter; I'll have him join Raunun on the hill. <3

I have a ton of characters to add to the story, in the next chapter. There were a lot of deer there, yesterday! x____x Darcy, Corridor, 21, and Raj, most notably.

But of course, the more the merrier! <3

Anyway, thank you so much! :3 I'm glad you like my writing. <3!

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There are many reasons why

There are many reasons why Walter's so angry all the time. Some of them are known, some of them aren't. ^^

I'm sure when he calms down he'll be all bouncy and loveable again! He's calming down enough to be approached without a hissy fit, but he's not tolerating Seth near him at present. Just don't laugh at him and you'll be fine. <_<

ANNNND.

Keep up the good work you sexy awesome Lemoncake!
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Haha, well I'll be more than

Haha, well I'll be more than glad when Walter is back to being loveable, again! x3 Although it is actually quite entertaining to see how much drama one single deer can stir up.

Anyway, thank you! xDD <3

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Lemon, your story is

Lemon, your story is fantastic! I love reading this stuff, never think otherwise. I know how you feel though, when you worry it's too boring or confusing. I guess that's something every writer has... XD


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-squees and pops candy into

-squees and pops candy into mouth- These are awesome!

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You really are your own

You really are your own worst critic, you're a really good writer. Smiling Kaoori was there when Uio and walter were fighting.. of course she was just cringing. Now she feels like a coward, but she didn't know what to do at the time.

And now I believe she has fleas, because Walter nuzzled her, and she thought he was being nice, but he was really nuzzling random deer because of itching. xO

Sad she'll never learn. Always wanting to be everyone's friend!
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*reels* So... did Agrona

*reels*

So... did Agrona actually 'cause the death of Lemon's mother? Or just take her to TEF after she died? And so... Lemon's always been like "Oh the forest spirits saved me they brought me here before my father could kill me." And that... that was Agrona. Did the real spirits inhabit those birds and then kill them when they left? Or they made them so that they could use their bodies? Or was that like a weird... dream... thing. D... did... JEESH LT. GIVE ME YOUR PLOT TWIST GENIUS.
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Avani -- Thank you! I

Avani -- Thank you! I suppose you're entirely right, about every writer feeling that way. I don't really mind; it's kind of hard for me to show my work, but I really do enjoy writing. It relaxes me, somehow. x) <3

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Peppa -- xD Thanks! <3

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Thank you very much, Kaoori. :3

Yes, Lemon is supposed to be a scaredy-cat; but lately, she's been in more than her share of scuffles (and all of them with Walter, lol). I think that when she has something to stand up for, she becomes empowered. x3 And Lem's itching, too! xDD The whole forest is going to be infected, at this rate!

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Sarita -- Oi, I knew I left something out. xD Agrona replaced Lemon's memories to make her think she was orphaned, and to make her believe that she was indebted to the spirits. Her mother and father are presumably still alive, and her father never tried to kill her. <3 I had a little excerpt about that in there, but I didn't like how I'd worded it, so I took it out.

As for the birds, Lemon's spirit-meetings are usually dream-like states; hence the reason she always 'wakes up', after each meeting. She never simply walks away, she always must wake up after a meeting, even if she does not remember falling asleep. And to her, that's what it's like -- one minute, she was on her knees crying, and the next she was waking up in the forest to the sound of Kailani's voice, all in the blink of an eye.

ANYWAY. More like plot HOLE genius! xDD I'm no professional, that's for sure! I don't even profess to be any good at writing, I just enjoy doing it. x3 luls. Thanks for the comment, though! <333

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Ooo this is very good, idk

Ooo this is very good, idk why I didn't comment on it before... it really clears stuff up.
One thing, why would Agrona set Lemon upon Mystress trail, to help her out?
Or will we find that out sooner or later...?

One more thing, would you mind if I did a bit of Agrona/Lemon fanart? She's just so evil I can't help myself! >:3


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That's a good question,

That's a good question, Mystress! :3 I didn't really think about that, honestly. I added Mystress to her quest originally, because Mystress has been working on befriending Walter, and would actually have been able to help Lemon find good in him.

But here's my theory. Agrona, being not quite as all-knowing and all-powerful as she claims to be, missed Mystress' attempt to befriend Walter, and was perhaps counting on the fact that Mystress would be unaware of Walter's existence, since she is only able to interact with good souls. If Mystress was unable to see Walter, it would mean that he was completely evil, and that would be evidence enough that he was beyond saving.

-shrug- But I dunno. I made quite a few oversights in my plot. @_____@ Like I said, I'm no professional author, I just like to write! xD But I suppose the only direction I can go with my writing, is up. :') This is actually a really good learning experience -- there have been a good few comments which really helped me fix some flaws in my writing, that I didn't notice before.

As for fanart, oh please do! :'D I adore your art, receiving art from you is always an honor! <3

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That's perfect Lemon!! That

That's perfect Lemon!!

That theory is perfect, (I actually didn't see that coming!) it's really good because its un-predictable! Very very smart!

Your writing is very good, and it's true the more you write the beter you get at it. And the important thing is that you love it! It's one thing to write, and no have a passion, because then it doesn't improve so well. But I can alreay see your writing getting more advanced as you keep going.

This is very good Lemon!

Could you give me a brief description about what Agrona (human) would look like? Like age-- and such?

Thanks! :')



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xD I'm glad it makes sense!

xD I'm glad it makes sense! <3
And thank you. :') I'm glad you see improvement in my writing!

As for Agrona, you are free to use whatever artistic liberties you want. x3 I haven't really thought about her human form, but I'll give you what I imagine. I'd imagine her to be fairly small, with a fairly long face (why do I associate evil with long faces? xD) and long, straight, white hair. She'd have the typical white eyes, without pupils or irises. The mother forest spirit's colors are turquoise and white; the same colors that I used for the spirit-deer drawing I did, a little while ago. I'd assume that she would still look fairly angelic, since she did start out as a good spirit. But it's totally up to you, not only because I don't really know what she'd look like as a human, but also because she's a spirit. She can technically look like anything, really. <3

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