A wish, A tail, A rhyme, A fail c:

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One winters morning; No. That's to silly for an introduction of a story. Fine, I'll just change the genre:

The time unknown but known it's morning,
Meaning the day will soon be dawning.
Crisp cracks of ice like shatterd glass,
The warriors of Winter; a metophoric class.
The moisture from my nose goes, frozen by the stinging air,
Not exactly soft, gentle nor sensitive care.
Leaves whisk all around,
The hitting leaves had a russeling sound.
Winter is here,
A chilly time even for deer.
This poem may not appeal,
I am doing this for a festive forest feel.
My cold little nose,
My streched out toes.
Ears lifted and eyes are bright,
This will elongate my height.
See this branch here? I will nuzzle it, to make the snow fall,
Then there it was a bellowed call.
One I have never heard before,
So strange and exciting with shivers, galore.
This sound isn't known,
A tightly wrapped box was then thrown.
My investigated nose gave a tap,
The flowers burst looked like an arranged map.
This was a present, that was for sure,
I had never done this before.
Back to the rhyme? I think so,
This is my attempted go.
Snow near my feet and trotting along,
Be gone old sing-a-longs.
The deers gathered; The community,
Enjoy this festive opitunity <3

~I done one better than this earlier however when I went to post it. It didn't work and I lost it D:
But enjoy! c:

Wooow, I was seriously blown

Wooow, I was seriously blown away when I read this, I didn't know you were this good at poetry. I knew you were good, but this is far beyond amazing.. It'd take me centuries to be able to write something so awesome as this. I think my favourite lines is the one about morning at the top and how you've also talked about ice. It gave me a pretty image in my mind.
You're brilliant at poetry, I could read this over and over again and still get the same feel of amazement to it. I'd be so chuffed if I wrote this lololol <3
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LAWWWL thank-youuuu (8 The

LAWWWL thank-youuuu (8
The other one was better, As i've said but thanks; I appreciate you admiring it so Pinkpaws. The one about ice and morning and unknown times and jazz was in the original one but TEF failed and deleted it so I had to attempt to remeber but I could only remember those two D:
And I am pretty happy about it! I just wanted to say 'Merry Christmas' in a decent way :')
<3