wip [violence warning]

cicadia's picture


Found this hiding somewhere from back in...february, i think. Sort of want to finish it, but I'm not certain how to fix it...any pointers? anyone want to do a redline? or maybe i should start from scratch? i really don't know.
Kaoori's picture

SUCH SWEET HUGS i

SUCH SWEET HUGS

i mean
that's amazing. their expressions i love the most. I can't draw human faces for crap and you always master them so well.

I frankly think this is

I frankly think this is badassery and don't need no red lines :I
Your style is too awesome for them.

Who needs red lines when it's

Who needs red lines when it's already awesome? I love their expressions here, you can really see Jack's frustration, and Bright's knowledge that he has the upper hand.