My OOC deer, I've had her for a while and only just got around to doing up her design. Her name is Wind. Most likely to have a change in design, too. 'Pretty much, she is literally me in deer form. As a character, however. She can be treated ICly and will react to IC actions. Hopethatmadesense.
She is based off of sambar deer, however for the species she small. Her pelt is grey, darkening at the legs and down to the hooves, which are merely a darker grey although they are not depicted in this image.
Her tail is that of a horse's, grey/light grey. Some strands are white, even. It is long and due to the long bone in it, can be held high or flicked around when she pleases.
In game, she wears the Golden Butterfly mask, however as it is a pain to draw it will probably be left out a lot. Her eyes are a vague reflection of my own, also.
For antlers, Wind usually adorns the top of her head with feathers, based off of wedge-tailed eagle's feathers. However, she can change this to just a normal pair of antlers, although they are quite small (I might remove this 'feature' for lack of a better word, but I was torn between the two ;A; ) .
Ears, a bit smaller than what is customary of the species, however she does have ear fluff, it just looked odd to draw too much.'
Yeah, um, pretty much. That pose killed me, I should do it more often. |D
Fffffffff, Nathanaël thinks she is so nice with him ;A; She seems just adorable to my eyes <33333 Giant track. Nathanaël is the fawn who's acutally with you (:
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Nathanaël looked the grey blue, smiling, and said : "Hello, Miss ! I'm nice to meet you."
Oooh ♥! I just went searching and found you! Nathanaël is simply lovely and adorable.
Thank you C:
-; Her eyes fell downward, resting upon the fawn. Its fluffy fur, brown and spotted and its small stature were enough to speak of its youth, though his words were of a more mature manner. She returned the smile, appreciative that he showed manners. Disrespect in youth, spoilt behaviour, that was something that irked her, especially when there was nothing she could do about it. "Hello, it's nice to meet you too. In fact, I'm glad of it, you're very lovely. She spoke softly, in a manner that could easily be deemed as affectionate.
Oh, and sorry for disappearing, my internet got turned off for a bit there. |D
Haha <3 Forgive my little english, please, it isn't my language
Nathanaël smiled again to the grey doe. He thought she was really nice. The others deers he had met were nice too, but not as the doe was with him actually. "Thank you very much." He blushed about the compliment, because it was the first he had. I'm called Nathanaël. But you can call me Nathan, it's faster !" He giggled. He didn't like his laughing, because it was a fawn laughing, as his voice. And he hated how it was. But he didn't say anything. He felt that the doe was nice, as well he felt she was motherly. He looked the sky, thinking to his family who left him. But then, he looked the doe again, for to forget.
By the way, if you find some big mistakes, could you tell me, please ? So I can progress (:
No problem, I understand, my internet connexion is crashing sometimes for me too XD
Really? I've been told it is quite a difficult language to learn. Heck, I was born into it and it confuses me!
She lowered her head, so their heads were at equal level and she was not looking down on him. "You're perfectly welcome." Her ears perked, intently listening to every word that crossed his lips. "Nathanaël, what a nice name. However, if you prefer Nathan, I'll call you that. Both are lovely - they suit you. My name is Wind... I don't know if you can really shorten that. Call me whatever you please, Nathan.". She couldn't help but smile at him, so young and blissfully innocent. She nuzzled him softly, joining his giggle with a soft laugh. It wasn't really a pretty laugh, at least she didn't think so. When he looked to the sky, she followed his gaze, looking up into the beautiful expanse of blue. Her eyes drifted over the soft clouds, through that blue that never ceased. Never ceased to be beautiful. She let her face part with the sky, smiling thoughtfully and once again faced the fawn.
Okay 8D The plural of deer does not have an 's' on the end. It's just deer.8D English is mostly 'What looks/sounds better?' XD
Also 'He looked the sky' perhaps, 'He looked to the sky'?
'But then, he looked to/at the doe again, for to forget.' (I hope I made sense there. |D)
I'm not exactly sure what you could change that to, but it doesn't make a lot of sense. 'To forget'?
Your English will only get better :3
Those are the only 'big' ones, but even they aren't too bad. The rest is pretty good.
Nathan's ears moved. "Wind is a lovely name too, Miss !" The fawn smiled, always looking the sky with his big green eyes. The clouds looked so soft ! He would like to live in the sky, to fly like the birds, in these moments. He closed the eyes and felt the wind in his fur. "And I love the wind alot !"
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Thank you ! But could you explain me why some plurial words take S and another no ? XD All the plurial words take S in french ;A;
Ooh! French is a beautiful language, from what I know of it (which isn't very much).
By the way, personally has only one n. You're actually learning really well, I think.
-; The compliment touched her, for Wind was very fond of her name, and found it suited her more and more. She liked how their names worked, just like art. "Yes, I think so too." Selfish as that may sound, it was true and felt like it needed to be said. Of course, that didn't mean it did. The sky, an expanse of never-ending comfort. Nathan's eyes were drinking every aspect of it up, and as she watched him explore the wonderful sky, Wind felt her heart warm toward him further. "The Wind loves you. " She smiled as this was said.
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Ohgod, I don't even know. |D English has words derived from many different languages.
Words like the ones I listed below have their singular as their plural.
moose
deer
sheep
bison
salmon
swine
More examples silly plurals: the plural of 'tooth' is 'teeth'. It is not 'tooths'.
(singular) Foot = Feet (plural)
Mouse = Mice
I think words like that are very, very old English. If that makes sense... |D
I'm not an expert on why. I think people just used whatever sounded better, and made that the plural.
Ohmy, it would make so much more sense if all of English plurals ended in 's'. Rather than the -en, -s, -es, -oes, or how they change in the middle, like with 'feet'.
Gosh, I'm sorry I do not explain things well ._.
Haha, someone already told me that, but I forget everytime ü' Also thank you <3 I think the french is a beautiful language as well (:
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He looked at Wind again, a little bit frowning. "How do you know ?" He smiled a little bit. He liked Wind, maybe because she didn't seem to see him as a fawn. All the others deers did this, and he thought it was totally normal. Because he was a fawn physically. Not mentally, though. Or almost not.
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Haha, I understood, thank you (: You're explaining it well !
-; "What reason does it have to think otherwise?" she answered, "Isn't my name Wind?" she asked, tilting her head at him. If children were never treated maturely, how were they to learn? She shook her head, a feather falling from her crown and riding air currents to the ground. Dark brown till the tip, where its colour brightened so that it resembled a wedge-tailed eagle's feathers. She watches it fall in spirals as it descends trough the air.
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Nathan smiled softly. "Yes, it's true..." He saw something flying on Wind's head. He looked at the brown feather. He never saw it on a doe before. He tilted his head, frowning, intriguated, then he asked : "Wow ! Is that your antlers ?" He thought all the doe had no antlers. Wind's antlers looked as eagle's feather. He thought it was pretty beautiful on her.
She returned the smile, and it grew at his reaction to the feathers adorning her head in place of antlers. "Yes, they are my antlers!" she said with obvious pride, and she tried to hide it a little, she did, but the grin would not leave her face entirely. She brought her head down to him so he could take a better look at her feathers. Flicking, grey wisps flew through the air, propelled by her tail's motion, until they gently slapped against her side and fell peacefully again. It had happened out of a reflex, frightening a singular fly into flight. When it settled again, however, she let it be. This time it sat on the top of her rump and was not a bother.
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intriguated,
correct spelling 'intrigued'.
I'm pretty certain that's what you meant <3
fff woah. I've never seen
You always have looked nice.
I love how you drew that
WELL FINALLY. She's
She's beautiful. ;A; -snuggles her and braids tail-
And feathers fffff. YAY.
she's the same kind of deer
8D
I already commented on DA too but I wanted to luff on it here
Your aaaart. It's
Kaoori; Ohmygod, thank you
Ohmygod, thank you ♥. I'm glad that you like it! I might post more art more often, I dunno. I just always get so nervous xD
Serenai;
You are one of the only people in the world that think this. Thank you ♥.
Pegasicorn;
Sfgbnakj! Took forever, too.
Thanks Pega, it means a lot ♥.
Ocean;
WELL FINALLY.
Thank you Oceann! Yeee~ ♥
xDD I'm glad you like us :3
Yuth, feattherssss
EDIT; Damn internet failing to reload the page, :CCCCCCCCCCCCC
Matthieu;
Yeee ♥ I THINK THEY'RE SO PURTY.
Thank youu~!
Saanra;
Because I'm absolutely terrified. It took me over half an hour to post this. I had to make my sister press the button.
Thanks so much ♥!
No need to be nervous, no not
Bonus points if you know/recognize what that was a reference to :B
;A; ♥ Nope. Sounds
Nope. Sounds vaguely familiar, however. No brownie points?
Fffffffff, Nathanaël thinks
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Nathanaël looked the grey blue, smiling, and said : "Hello, Miss ! I'm nice to meet you."
Oooh ♥! I just went
Thank you C:
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Her eyes fell downward, resting upon the fawn. Its fluffy fur, brown and spotted and its small stature were enough to speak of its youth, though his words were of a more mature manner. She returned the smile, appreciative that he showed manners. Disrespect in youth, spoilt behaviour, that was something that irked her, especially when there was nothing she could do about it. "Hello, it's nice to meet you too. In fact, I'm glad of it, you're very lovely. She spoke softly, in a manner that could easily be deemed as affectionate.
Oh, and sorry for disappearing, my internet got turned off for a bit there. |D
Haha
Nathanaël smiled again to the grey doe. He thought she was really nice. The others deers he had met were nice too, but not as the doe was with him actually. "Thank you very much." He blushed about the compliment, because it was the first he had. I'm called Nathanaël. But you can call me Nathan, it's faster !" He giggled. He didn't like his laughing, because it was a fawn laughing, as his voice. And he hated how it was. But he didn't say anything. He felt that the doe was nice, as well he felt she was motherly. He looked the sky, thinking to his family who left him. But then, he looked the doe again, for to forget.
By the way, if you find some big mistakes, could you tell me, please ? So I can progress (:
No problem, I understand, my internet connexion is crashing sometimes for me too XD
Really? I've been told it is
She lowered her head, so their heads were at equal level and she was not looking down on him. "You're perfectly welcome." Her ears perked, intently listening to every word that crossed his lips. "Nathanaël, what a nice name. However, if you prefer Nathan, I'll call you that. Both are lovely - they suit you. My name is Wind... I don't know if you can really shorten that. Call me whatever you please, Nathan.". She couldn't help but smile at him, so young and blissfully innocent. She nuzzled him softly, joining his giggle with a soft laugh. It wasn't really a pretty laugh, at least she didn't think so. When he looked to the sky, she followed his gaze, looking up into the beautiful expanse of blue. Her eyes drifted over the soft clouds, through that blue that never ceased. Never ceased to be beautiful. She let her face part with the sky, smiling thoughtfully and once again faced the fawn.
Okay 8D The plural of deer does not have an 's' on the end. It's just deer.8D English is mostly 'What looks/sounds better?' XD
Also 'He looked the sky' perhaps, 'He looked to the sky'?
'But then, he looked to/at the doe again, for to forget.' (I hope I made sense there. |D)
I'm not exactly sure what you could change that to, but it doesn't make a lot of sense. 'To forget'?
Your English will only get better :3
Those are the only 'big' ones, but even they aren't too bad. The rest is pretty good.
I'm born in the french
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Nathan's ears moved. "Wind is a lovely name too, Miss !" The fawn smiled, always looking the sky with his big green eyes. The clouds looked so soft ! He would like to live in the sky, to fly like the birds, in these moments. He closed the eyes and felt the wind in his fur. "And I love the wind alot !"
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Thank you ! But could you explain me why some plurial words take S and another no ? XD All the plurial words take S in french ;A;
Ooh! French is a beautiful
By the way, personally has only one n. You're actually learning really well, I think.
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The compliment touched her, for Wind was very fond of her name, and found it suited her more and more. She liked how their names worked, just like art. "Yes, I think so too." Selfish as that may sound, it was true and felt like it needed to be said. Of course, that didn't mean it did. The sky, an expanse of never-ending comfort. Nathan's eyes were drinking every aspect of it up, and as she watched him explore the wonderful sky, Wind felt her heart warm toward him further. "The Wind loves you. " She smiled as this was said.
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Ohgod, I don't even know. |D English has words derived from many different languages.
Words like the ones I listed below have their singular as their plural.
moose
deer
sheep
bison
salmon
swine
More examples silly plurals: the plural of 'tooth' is 'teeth'. It is not 'tooths'.
(singular) Foot = Feet (plural)
Mouse = Mice
I think words like that are very, very old English. If that makes sense... |D
I'm not an expert on why. I think people just used whatever sounded better, and made that the plural.
Ohmy, it would make so much more sense if all of English plurals ended in 's'. Rather than the -en, -s, -es, -oes, or how they change in the middle, like with 'feet'.
Gosh, I'm sorry I do not explain things well ._.
Haha, someone already told me
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He looked at Wind again, a little bit frowning. "How do you know ?" He smiled a little bit. He liked Wind, maybe because she didn't seem to see him as a fawn. All the others deers did this, and he thought it was totally normal. Because he was a fawn physically. Not mentally, though. Or almost not.
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Haha, I understood, thank you (: You're explaining it well !
No problem! Mm :3 -; "What
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"What reason does it have to think otherwise?" she answered, "Isn't my name Wind?" she asked, tilting her head at him. If children were never treated maturely, how were they to learn? She shook her head, a feather falling from her crown and riding air currents to the ground. Dark brown till the tip, where its colour brightened so that it resembled a wedge-tailed eagle's feathers. She watches it fall in spirals as it descends trough the air.
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Good :3 Glad to be a help, to be honest. 8D
Nathan smiled softly. "Yes,
She returned the smile, and
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intriguated,
correct spelling 'intrigued'.
I'm pretty certain that's what you meant <3
eye. c. u. dere. just because
great to see one of yours in-forest again.
omg no. wasn't stealthee
Good to see you too uwu.