Why The Old Oak is Hollow - As Told By Jergens

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Why The Old Oak is Hollow
As told by Jergens


It was still raining. I never liked rain to begin with, and I also never liked the creepy old oak thing. It was too bad that it was the only shelter around when it started raining. That weird echo noise that comes from it… ugh… it just weirds me out, you know man?

Anyway, I found myself housed with about… Man, I can’t remember… pretty sure it was like, six or seven fawns. I like fawns. I won’t admit that to everyone. Hell, sometimes I wish I could have kids of my own. Maybe adopt one of the little orphan buggers or something.

But I’m getting off topic. Anyway, all of these little fawns had one thing in common; they were getting out of the rain. I was the only adult there, so they all huddled next to me, curled into my curly red fur and whatnot. It was pretty damn cute, but I digress.

“Sir, tell us a story…” one of the little fawns asked me. Soon there was an entire chorus of them. “Story! Story!” they whined, pressing against me. Guh, that got me. These little buggers were just too cute.

“Okay…” I muttered, trying to think of something to tell them. Unlike other deer like Trees or Seed, my story-telling abilities, well… to put it in simple terms, suck. Royally. I had to try though… Poor kids…

I thought of something nice, then. Not very good, but it would do. “Alright, why don’t I tell you kids why the oak tree is hollow?” the fawns quieted down and cuddled against me, smiling.

“Once upon a time, there was a beautiful young doe princess named…” I paused here, and looked at one of the braver looking fawns that didn’t seem afraid at all. “What’s yer name, kid?” I asked. The little fawn wagged her tail

“Sterrrrre!”

“Okay… A beautiful doe princess named Sterre. She lived with her twin brother…” I looked at a little fawn next to her, one that hadn’t said a single word. Sterre bounced up and nuzzled him.

“Oiiiisss! Oiisss!” Ah… Now I remembered, Poltergeist’s kids

“Okay, she lived with her twin brother Otis. Now these two royal deer were loved by all of the other deer in the forest. Except for a big, mean deer named…” I looked around and picked out a nice looking little guy. “What’s yer name?” he flinched. Ah. The shy type.
“Z-Zanny, sir…”

“Alright, Except for a big, mean deer named Zanny…” the other fawns giggled at this. “Well, one day, the big, mean deer Zanny cast a big curse on the princess Sterre and the prince Otis…” the fawns gasped and huddled even closer (if that was possible).

“You see, the big, mean deer Zanny wanted nothing more than to kill the up incoming king and queen just because he wanted the throne all to himself. So ya know what he did?” I leaned my head down to get close to them.

“He cursed them! And imprisoned them in the oak tree that we’re sitting in right now!” the fawns squealed with delight, some climbing over me. “Now, keep in mind. It was so long ago, the great oak wasn’t hollow yet, so the prince and princess couldn’t just walk right on out. They were trapped forever.” Just then a little energetic fawn I knew personally, Kiraki, came tumbling into the oak, shaking herself off and spraying water everywhere before running off, giggling happily.

Well… that was Kiraki for ya.

“Anyway… With the prince and princess imprisoned, everyone was unhappy. The prince and princess were stuck in the great oak for years and years before a great hero decided to fight the big, mean deer Zanny. And his name was…” I looked around, and then spied a fawn I knew.

“His name was Ruscion.” I said. “A great, powerful worrier. He wanted nothing more than to kill the big, mean deer Zanny and save the prince and princess. So one day, he went down to the great ruins and consulted the wise and all-powerful twins…” I looked around again. “…Echria.” The fawns were giggling now, amused. I looked again. "...And Celeste."

“The great, wise Echria and Celeste told the great worrier Ruscion that the only way to take down the big, mean deer Zanny would be to free the prince and princess, who would teach him how to… be a nice person…”

Hey, they were fawns… Not like I could give them something gruesome.

“So the great worrier Ruscion walked up to the big oak, took his mighty antlers and started to pound against it. Slowly, he wore his way into the wood, creating a deep hollow space. In the middle of this space were the princess Sterre and the prince Otis, perfectly alright.”

“After the prince and princess were free they set out and met up with the big, mean deer Zanny and told him that cursing them wasn’t a very nice thing to do. The big, mean deer Zanny, amazed that the two royal folk broke his curse, declared that he would no longer be the big, mean deer Zanny, but the great, nice deer Zanny.”

“And that, kids, is why the old oak is hollow.”


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I'm sorry, Quad. This went way overboard for me. I tired adding in as many fawns as I could. I know I didn't even get half... and I'm sorry.
Whether or not this will qualify, consider it a gift for the fawns here. I love you guys.
(For Quad's Forest Fables project)

Seele's picture

Ohgod this made me giggle so

Ohgod this made me giggle so much ;_; X"D SO INCREDIBLY ADORABLE. Now Sterre is going to have to act like a prinsess, yes girl. <33 No really, this was a joy to read, so friggin cute ;_; You're an awesome writer. <3
GingerNut's picture

This gave me an exucse to

This gave me an exucse to write about them. Guhhh... they're so friggen adorable <3
Thanks, bud, glad you liked it x3 hehe~
quadraptor's picture

This is great! Thanks for

This is great! Thanks for writing, I really enjoyed reading it. I liked how you used the fawns' names in the story, too.
BrownLupine's picture

Dawww, this is so damn sweet,

Dawww, this is so damn sweet, I love this story. I think, he is great story teller. And I like it that it was more suiting story for fawns and not ended up in some gruesome fight scenes

Want to hear more story from him XDD


What nature divides, the spirit unites.

GingerNut's picture

Quad~ Hehe, thank you. This

Quad~ Hehe, thank you. This project was so much fun to work on ^^

BrownLupine~ I might do another 'fawn-oriented' story when I get back from my vacation. Thanks so much for reading. Jergens is just incredibly awkward around little kids xP

Aw, how adorable. :'D Lovely

Aw, how adorable. :'D Lovely story. :')
Seed's picture

That, that right there? It's

That, that right there? It's adorable ^^
GingerNut's picture

Ehria~ Thanks~ Glad I got to

Ehria~ Thanks~ Glad I got to throw yours in ^^

Seed~ Thank you so much! : D

Mean Zanny, rotfl You did an

Mean Zanny, rotfl

You did an awesome job Gingernut (~hey, isn't that a cookie?)

Thanks, I think Echria was

Thanks, I think Echria was happy to be a part of the story. :')

*Dies a little from the

*Dies a little from the cuteness!* I didn't even see this before. X- D

Did you mean to use my Zanny? o.0; Or was that a coincidence? Is there another Zanny out there I haven't met? X- D

Anyway, this was really cute. :3
GingerNut's picture

PrairieWolf~ No, I

PrairieWolf~ No, I deliberatly just picked around the board and found a bunch of fawns that could cameo xD Your Zanny ended up being one of them :> (thatandbeingapuppetbrokindainfluencedittoo)

Kittyo8~ Hur, thanks :B

Echria~ A pleasure *bow*


Ah! lol That works. X- D

Ah! lol That works. X- D <3<3<3

I'll have to add a section for Fan-ish sort of links on Zanny and Atu's bios... Hmmm... Maybe under their screenie section. *Shrugs*

Thanks for including little Zanny. :3
Ruscion's picture

Oh, how cute story :3 Little

Oh, how cute story :3 Little Ruscion as a brave warrior, that's adorable n__n
GingerNut's picture

Glad you liked it. xD His

Glad you liked it. xD His name is amazin'
gone's picture

*fit of giggles* Thanks for

*fit of giggles*

Thanks for including Celes in there xD
eyestrain's picture

I liked how much this truly

I liked how much this truly felt like a story being told to children. There is a good honest quality to it, as well as fine pace and atmosphere created by the little details of reaction and interaction between teller and listeners.

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