June 22, 2011 - 6:00pm — BluedeerLegend18
I see... black...
The doe heard a quiet, wounded voice in the distance.
Hello?
Help...me...
The water suddenly turned black. The doe started to swim up, but then a current pushed her down, and soon she was just buried, in black ground.
What's going on!? Where are you?
Where....where am I?
Peirce!?!?
Red exploded everywhere. The blackness faded away. The water was red. Everywhere. The doe saw the buck, with a pure white sword stabbed in his belly. He was crying... tears of blood. Suddenly he roared, sending black bubbles everywhere. His bright green eyes were now a glowing black.
Peirce!
The buck closed his eyes. He felt his life fading away every second. He also felt the doe push him up to surface. He opened his eyes and gasped for air as the doe put him back on the ground.
Peirce... how did this happen?
The buck did not answer, just coughed up some blood.
Where's your mask?
The buck didn't answer, just closed his eyes and fell into a long sleep.
Oh no... what should I do!?
The sword was still jammed into the buck's chest. The doe pulled into it was out, and gave the buck some herbs to stop the bleeding.
Peirce...please...be okay...
selfish bump is selfish
BAH! *is creeped out* I swear
*is creeped out*
I swear I commented on this! I even remember exactly what I put!
... but where is meh comment??
oh well, have a fresh one ~
Poor Pierce :'(
Nicely written though : )
Maybe the comment didn't like
Thanks!