Lucy was wandering the whole day through the forest. She didn't know what was wrong with her but
she could feel a difference. Her body was weak now and trotting seemed to get harder and harder.
Lucy breathed quick and heavy. It didn't sound healthy.
She had to slow down and was now just walking. With no special goal she walked around the forest.
First she head to the pond. It was night so she could see the fireflies. Normally she would enjoy this
unique view but this night she kept on walking.
The last place she visits was the crying idol. She could barely stand and walked slowly to a place
behind the statue. Her legs gave up and she fell on the ground. Breathing was painful. Lucy laid her
head on the ground. Her life started to fade away.
Her whole body tensed up, the procedure was exhausting. Tears ran down her face. The time had
come. It was the time to leave this body. Lucy couldn't feel the pain anymore. Her eyes were blank
and her muscles stopped moving. "It is silent now.."
Thank you for reading.
Part Two
This scares me... The
The heartbeat was very fitting choice of sound for this. It felt like mine was trying to keep up a pace.
It even kinda felt like I could feel it in my own chest. My breathing sped up as I read further.
Thank you Whey. I really
/edit: urgh stupid second account...
This was intense, and very
First I really wanted to get
And thank you both again (:
English isn't my mother tongue and I was never really brave enough to post such a long writing.
This is so sad..I loved it
thank you so much ♥ I
Proud because you two are guarding her <3
And sad because I can just see how desperate they are.
Mmm :c Although Umay wasn't
Although Umay wasn't the closest friend to her, she still cared. Loosing any friend to death is like the end of the world to her.
<3
I'm just speechless..So sad
She was such a gorgeous doe. :c Lucyyy../fails at commenting, this is really sad and beautiful done.
@Pinkpaws yeah.. I know what
yeah.. I know what a shame they weren't close friends D:
It's really touching how you guard her (:
@Nopje
waa thank you so much <3
I really tried my best with this writing and I hope I caught the right words and atmosphere (:
I read this in complete
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She stares down at her friend and falls on her knees, tears running down her cheeks as she sees her friend laying..dead on the ground..She comes closer, her muzzle touching her ear. "L-Lucy.." She whispers, her voice trembling, just like her whole body did, and te tears kept coming and running down her cheeks, she closed her eyes and looked down, her forehead touching her cheek. She layed her head on her neck and stroked it gently. Believing one of her closest friends died would be hard, and accepting it would be even harder. "Why..Why you.." She whispers. She lays her head on her friend's shoulder, those tears wont stop running down her soft cheeks. Lucy had always been dear for Waarhijd, loosing a friend of her, is like loosing a piece of her heart. Missing her, yes she would. She would miss Lucy forever. She loved her, and they had a gorgeous time together. Rest in peace..
♥..
@Zeekii thank you for
thank you for reading it :3
That makes me even prouder to hear that from you.
@Nopje
♥
You know I love that
It was so sad to read, poor
I'll miss her.
thank you for reading
It's lovely to see 6 next to her ♥
Altough Rhad didn't know her,
I had the goosebumps after reading this. 8C
Felt like making this..
aww thank you
Whaaat?! :<
:<
Ohh... it's really sad. I
You expressed these last moments very good.
thank you you two (: ♥
Poor Lucy... Even if Amika
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haha you should read the next
I wasn't around when this
But Kaides - now Merida - is going to miss her a lot.
She was one of the first deer to show any of mine kindness and friendship.
I'm sorry that this is late. Just thought I would write something.
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She'd been away for so long, she had not even heard of it until the whispering of the trees and the wind had passed her ears as she neared the crying idol. What? Her friend was gone? She stopped behind the carved rock, eyes down on the ground, watching as the poppies swayed slightly in the breeze. Was she really gone? Gone forever? The young caribou moved to settle herself down quietly, ears down as she rested her head on the cold ground, kept in the shadow of the idol. She could feel the tears dampening her fur, letting her eyes close, body shuddering with a sob.
"Ich werde euch sehr vermissen, mein Freund."