Tenley's Day.

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Her head was hanging low to ground, her hooves dragging behind her. She was so deppresed since it had happened. Poltergeists death. It had left her shocked and sad. She didn't know poltergeist, but she was still strangely sad. She stared at the ground as if were staring through it. Her tail hung between her legs, swinging back and forth. She stopped and looked up at the sky. " look up at the stars huh, polt?", she smiled and lifted her head slightley. She looked around to see if she could spot others around. none. She sniffed the air, shifting uncomfortabley. She lowered her ears and flicked her tail. She looked around cautiousley, looking to spot any danger. SHe licked her lips and walked forward. She trotted up to a mushroom tree and and scratched at the dirt at the base of the tree. SHe lowered her head and tucked hard at the partially dug up root. She tugged and tugged, finally ripping it out. She chewed it slowely for a while, thinking about why she cared so much about a deceased stranger. She was lost in deep thought when she soon realized she still was chewing the root. She swallowed and kept digging and eating. After she had eaten all she wanted, she turned abruptley and started walking towards the pond for a cool drink, but saw a deer standing there. She stared at him for a long moment and whispered,"hi...?", she lowered her head and cautiousley approuched him. She raised her head and flicked her ear. She sniffed his neck and looked up at him." Hello!", he replied. She smiled slightley." Your the only deer i have seen around her for quit a while!", her smile faided. her ears dropped and she closed her eyes." whats wrong?" the stag asked, also dropping his ears."nothing", she acted happy and changed the subject."so, wanna hangout?", she said randomley. "sure!", He raised his ears happily and smiled, turning to trot over to another group of deer. She didn't know they were there the whole time. She turned her head over to them, veiwing the differant deer in the group. She didn't know anyone there. But she should have. She turned and trotted over to them. "hey", she called to the deer. They looked up at her and flicked there ears at her. She haden't been for social lately so this felt very awkward to her. She looked around at them. There was one stag that caught her eye. He had a smooth, grey pelt and a rather large-sized rack. HIs face was warm and welcoming, but he looked quite. She walked over to him and awkwardley said hi." hi, whats up?", she tried to smile but she couldn't. He was rather tall.He loooked down at her and whispered,"hello". She smiled and greeted all the others. Today turned out pretty non-depressing.

Good, needs work though

Good, needs work though

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I know, bad vocab and

I know, bad vocab and spelling problems. Aswell as everything else -.-'
Walking into a room and saying, " I should clean this! " Then walking out. -lily