Sorry it's taken me so long to get this out. My scanner busted.

Anyway, critique?

Sorry for the tiny size. I can't work out how to get no background >|

Anyway, how can I improve? I tried to do the movement of the head, tail and back but it kinda failed =| I think I need to make some of the frames faster..

[e] Better version;


I still need to fix the back.

I'm not posting this because I want attention or pity, nor do I want any attention/pity for my deer over this.
This is a ventart, I don't usually post ventart , the only reason I posted this one is because of pride.
I'm not angry/upset at anyone at the moment. ^^
Maybe I should consider thicker lines more often. Hmm.