Tally-eyed

Fahnette's picture
watching you run
waiting for you
to return
to me

i don't see you
you don't know me
since i set
you free

i'll come to you
be here with you
walk beside
you now

can i make you
stay here with me
won't you tell
me how

i can't miss you
if i find you
all alone
today

should i not try
say my goodbye
leave you to
your way?

--for Tally, with open eyes
Tally's picture

My my my, this is lovely.

My my my, this is lovely. <3

Tally simply was not feeling well & i had no idea you took it personally. Her friends weren't visiting much and her crush had been well...crushed. So she helped her old friend Beliar and was on her way. Kaoori mangaged to cheer her up so shes feeling better now, try again another time, im sure she'll be more social.
Fahnette's picture

Oh, this isn't about

Oh, this isn't about me!
Tally's bio really hit something deep inside me. It's like all the things she wants to say to all the people who have ever left her alone.

To fling my arms wide in the face of the sun, Dance! Whirl! Whirl! Til the quick day is done...
To fling my arms wide in the face of the sun, Dance! Whirl! Whirl! Til the quick day is done...


Tally's picture

oh i see, sorry that i

oh i see, sorry that i always fail! |D
Do you mind if i add this too her bio? Its absoutley beautiful and fits her well.
Fahnette's picture

It's more my bad, it's a

It's more my bad, it's a rather vague piece. Smiling
Go ahead! Glad you like it.

To fling my arms wide in the face of the sun, Dance! Whirl! Whirl! Til the quick day is done...
To fling my arms wide in the face of the sun, Dance! Whirl! Whirl! Til the quick day is done...


Reyy's picture

What a beautiful way of

What a beautiful way of writing.
It was like it had it's own rhythm<3