Take;; poem...

Anzel's picture
No es
The way I stroll
The way I tremble down the pathway
No, it isn't
All the lies
And all the coldest nights I stray for
But it is
And isn't living
And I am
And not
Alive
And I pray you see the yearning
With the irís
Son my eye


I can't seem to find my face
Nor my hoofprints anymore
Shall the heartbeat stop its turning
Shall the windmill sing no more...?


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No es = It isn't
Son = With

Because they sounded better, and fit rhythmically.

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Bumping this since it was completely ignored x.x Thanks alot...:/ C'est la vie. This happened yesterday.

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Bad day...

A friend of mine thought I would seriously commit suicide (i would NEVER), reported it to the guidance counsellor...

What a fun day this has been...

But the good news...

I'm finally going to be able to talk to a professional about my moods...finally...:3...

Bad news...I'm afraid of who might have heard the rumor she's spreading...
toboe's picture

I read it. :3 It's

I read it. :3

It's beautiful, as are all of your writings.


8D I love it, as I told you

8D

I love it, as I told you <33 It's so different from all of your other poems, somehow...<3

-- Dannii <3
Fenqua's picture

Sorry hun, I just don't

Sorry hun, I just don't comment on everything I read... Especially poems, since they practically make me speechless ^^; I just don't know what to say.. except that I loved it. Good use of those words!

To pray is to believe, to believe is to purify one's soul


To pray is to believe, to believe is to purify one's soul