Suggestions?

phantomhelsing's picture
anyone have any suggestions about anatomy? Or are willing to redline this?



before I get too far and realize I did something stupid XD




better?
toboe's picture

Here's a suggestion: Make it

Here's a suggestion:
Make it be Rowan!! ROFL JK

No suggestions needed, this is amazing! I was trying to decide if his leg was too long, but I think it's actually fine now that I've looked! Man, your art is so stunning. : D

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Her's picture

The only thing I'd say is

The only thing I'd say is the front, posed leg's first joint from the hoof (the "elbow" on a human arm) is a little off, but I can't exactly say how. Maybe the curved line underneath of it should be shortened or taken away? I can't say. But that's all I see; otherwise it's absolutely stellar and I wished I could draw that well. ;__; <3 [saves for future reference]
phantomhelsing's picture

XD I don't really know who

XD I don't really know who it'll turn out to be....maybe nobody X3

thank you ^-^ I think it might be his butt region that is worrying me..............something is a little off, can't figure out what though. Could just be me.................then again I always do have trouble drawing the butt region of anything XD



okay..............first I gotta figure out how to do it XD I hardly ever touch it because no one ever talks to me there so I usually just ignore it X3



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toboe's picture

XDDon't sweat it Cato, I

XDDon't sweat it Cato, I think his butticular region (lawl) looks great! XD

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bubblywums's picture

I did a quick redline for

I did a quick redline for you of my suggestions, of course you don't have to follow them or anything. Sticking out tongue

---> http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/7281/redlinefr3.png

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phantomhelsing's picture

@ Her: hmmm....I kinda see

@ Her: hmmm....I kinda see it too.........I'll fiddle with it a little.
And thank you, but you are stellar as well <3

@ Rowan: lol XD that should be a scientific term



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noxen's picture

i think u should add moore

i think u should add moore mmmh meat to that deer? :'''D
make him a bit fatter >:3
i think he need moore wight
or maeby im just imagining becouse i just watched tv program about anorexic ppl D8
noxen's picture

btw i think its very nice ^^

btw i think its very nice ^^
phantomhelsing's picture

holy freak Jen, that was

holy freak Jen, that was fast! XD thank you, that does look better. I knew something was off, but I couldn't see it >< It's always nice to get some else's eyes to help with something .

Thanks again! <3



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Syltar's picture

Personally, I like the pose.

Personally, I like the pose. The only part I would critique on is the head....it's too rectangular. Like a horses' head. A deers' head looks like a triangle: http://www.texasbeyondhistory.net/st-plains/nature/images/Deer-tpwd-sm.jpg
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url not found :C but I get

url not found :C

but I get what you are saying.............seems horse habit keeps invading everything XD



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toboe's picture

Mucho better-o.

Mucho better-o.

*Nods*
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phantomhelsing's picture

gracias mi amiga! ^-^ Estoy

gracias mi amiga! ^-^ Estoy muy mejor ahora.


I will cease making a mockery of one of the prominent romance languages now XD




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toboe's picture

LAWL I actualy don't think

LAWL
I actualy don't think I've ever met you in-forest. O_o
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phantomhelsing's picture

yes you did, you were with

yes you did, you were with Reetno, my Atiq was jumping around like an idiot with Darcy XD

he was very hyper then............probably why he didn't freak out when he was left with a bunch of does later on XD



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toboe's picture

Oh, okay! Cool : D Darcy and

Oh, okay! Cool : D

Darcy and Reetno are muh buddies! And so is like...everyone else. XDDDDDDD

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trigger_mortis's picture

Looks pretty darn good! I

Looks pretty darn good! I would maybe juuuust suggest that you make the head slightly narrower...I see that you did in the second sketch, but even a little bit more I think could help. I try to think of deer being made of twigs and silk, they're that delicate!
toboe's picture

Heh heh heh, once you've

Heh heh heh, once you've hunted deer you'll know they're NOT delicate little pansies. (No offense meant there : D)

Deer are considered some of the most dangerous animals in the world, actually!

But when drawing them, I agree that they should be tiny little things. : DDDDD

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Shiori's picture

I dunno...I like the head.

I dunno...I like the head. It's not totally realistic no but if it's that style she wants to go with then great ^^ I know Cato likes making her critters a bit on the skinny side, so I don't think adding any more meat on it is necessary either.

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phantomhelsing's picture

@ Weasel: Actually, I went

@ Weasel: Actually, I went back into photoshop and narrowed it more right after I poseted the second sketch.......I just never felt like putting it up XD thank you very much though ^-^

@ Rown: too true.........and neither are horses.......unlike everyone else seems to think................try to tell me spurs are mean lrghighrihrhvmurf *grumbles*

@ Darcy: thank you Darcy. I do stylize my critters usually, but for the sake of learning purposes and challenging myself to the point of insanity because I'm weird, I want this one to be pretty anatomically correct. REALISM FTW! XD



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Syltar's picture

Much better on the head.

Much better on the head. Laughing out loud
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