Story time!

Zazvat's picture
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Everybody else is doing one so why shouldn't I xD? I need a break from my stories (which one of them I still need to make character sheets for xD) and I haven't done anything fan-related for a while so I decided to a The Endless Forest fan story. I'll give an example of how well I can write (when awake, willing to, and editing/checking on it)

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An orange glow set itself on the horizon, indicating that the sun was just below its’ surface. Even though it was evening, dew spread atop the tall, lush green grass. An orange fox blended wonderfully with the glow of the setting sun, and it stood as proudly on top of the smooth green hill, just as much as the yellow sun would when it was at its peak in the sky. The male’s fur swayed as a soft breeze blew by. He shook himself, lifting a black paw and slightly inclining his head as if he were a deer on the alert. His black-tipped ears twitched in symphony with his blinking yellow eyes, and, after a few moments of gazing at the distant sky, it bounded towards the setting sun. The vulpine’s long, fluffy tail seemed to dive through the hill, the large white tip of it being the last to go. The shadow of the fox was seen running, leaping, and bounding in the distance.

It stopped when it was on the top of another hill, near the distant horizon. The vulpine looked back. His head lowered and his gaze set on the hill behind him, the one he had bounded off of, but then he chose to lift it so that he could get a better view. The red fox looked on, and his head lowered once more. He blinked. Keeping his eyes shut his breathing became loud. After a few moments they opened. Lifting his head and taking a deep breath, the male turned his head around, and bounded into the orange glow.

On the hill which the orange one was looking at, there stood a tawny male fox; he seemed to have stolen his pelt from a coyote. As soon as the fire-colored fox lifted his head for the last time, the coyote-colored one smiled and nodded once. When the younger vulpine vanished into the horizon, the other fox sat down, looking on with pride in his eyes. Every moment the smile slowly vanished. As soon as it was gone, his eyes were emotionless and unreadable, but he continued staring deeply at the slowly disappearing orange glow. The male’s two tails curled ‘round to his side as he looked on. . .

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Just give me a link to your deer's bio if you want in it and everything will be A-OK! You should probably tell me what kind of face you want, because I will only do the (real) deer face and the skull (deer) face, I don't exactly do very good with human/monkey/gorilla faces ^^; (I might draw some pictures to go with the story, ya' know x3). You can tell me if you want it to be like the face of, oh say, a lion? Make sure you have a good description in your bio or on here of how you want your deer to look in it. Generally you don't need a bio, I just need name (picto too if you want to post it), description (not just what the deer looks like, but its' age and gender too), and personality (you can also put what he/she likes and dislikes). So far I think I'm only going to allow fifteen slots, with some reserved for a few deer I know (remember their pictos, lawl Sticking out tongue) and would like in the story (or would perhaps be needed in the story xD), but these may be extended. (If you're on the requests it means I haven't gotten 'round to reading your bio/post fully, if it's in gifts than I'm hoping that you'll allow me to use your deer in my story x3, and if it's in accepted then, they are, of course, going to be in the story Sticking out tongue) Note: You can have more than one of your own deer/characters in the story, characters can also be animals other than deer (the animals can be in the endless forest or anything that can live in those types of habitats/biomes, lions definitely wouldn't be able to live there Sticking out tongue, I might accept fully-wolf characters, but they're kind of big and they are predators, foxes would be perfectly fine x3 - maybe you could make it into a kitsune xD). If you have a character of your choice in the story, then you can always put another and that will be in the same slot as your first
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Characters (gifts)
1.) Bellamy/Cyric
2.) Xylophagous ('ze shaman deer 8D)
3.) Adagio/Taiko
4.) LK
5.) Tae/Raffles
6.) Nem
7.) Quamar
8.) Reetno
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Characters (requests)
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Characters (accepted)
1.) Vipin
2.) Quad
3.) Scape
4.) Ephra
5.) Mazey
6.) Her
7.) Liëka and Hunter (FIU and Troll, too, if they're needed/find a place in the story, click on Hunter's link for their bio's)
8.) Silvery
9.) Wyvern
10.) Walter
11.) Halogen
12.) Dim
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15.)
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Edit: Oh yes, there will be talking in the story, but it won't be that fluent, unless you want your deer to be a fluent and fast-talker, lawl Sticking out tongue. If you want your deer to talk a certain way let me know! (For instance your deer could have a scottish accent or even be able to speak another language or something x3; note: If it's another language and you actually want 'em to speak it in the story, help me find a translator or something xD)
Edit 2: Note: Even if the slots for characters are full, go ahead and ask for your deer/character to be in it!
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Gorgeous! 8o Vipin,

Gorgeous! 8o
Vipin, meebe?

http://endlessforest.org/community/vipins-new-bio

Magpie beak? 8D
Zazvat's picture

Yes he can ^^

Yes he can ^^
quadraptor's picture

I'd love to be in it!

I'd love to be in it! Eye

http://endlessforest.org/community/quads-biography

Real deer mask is my all-time favorite!
Zazvat's picture

If comments keep popping up

If comments keep popping up so quickly I might be too busy editting my post than looking at deer's biography's xD. Ah, no worries, I'll get around to everyone's bio for whomever wants to be in the story x3
Pegasicorn's picture

One of mine maybe? =] (Bio

One of mine maybe? =] (Bio linked in signature, and sets are described in it.)

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The Dragonfly Deer:
land|scape|goat
magnets don't always attract
4.9 on the Richter Scale
Ephra's picture

I feel like such an airhead.

I feel like such an airhead. Laughing out loud I must have skimmed over your first paragraph and went right to the story, and then I was wondering why there weren't any deer in it.

Anyway! If you need any more info on 21, let me know. I would make a biography for her, but I'm really a terrible writer and it'd come out silly. Sticking out tongue

Oh! can mazey be in it?! if

Oh! can mazey be in it?! if u need any info just contact me.
Zazvat's picture

Pegasicorn: I could put all

Pegasicorn: I could put all of them in the story, but I'm only going to use one just to make it easier to organize it and stuff xD
Ephra: Laughing out loud Would you like your old set (the spotted real deer pelt, real deer mask, and poptart antlers (Laughing out loud)) or your recent one (the brown real deer pelt with tawny underparts, real deer mask, and stubby antlers), and would you like the stubby antlers to be there or just have Twenty-one be a normal doe with no antlers at all xD. I'm going to use the name Ephra for Twenty-one in the story, then, is that alright xD?
Mazey: *Goes to take a look at his/her stuff*

Edit: Mazey, can you give me some info on your deer? Like maybe make a short description of what he/she looks like, gender/age, and personality, you know, that kind of stuff? The stuff that'd be needed to put your character in the story xD. Unless you just want 'em to zoom right past someone xD (I'm sure everybody wants more than that :3)
Edit 2: Pegasicorn, I'll use Scape since he seems to be your "main deer" x3
Pegasicorn's picture

Cool with me. Thanks!

Cool with me.
Thanks! =]

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The Dragonfly Deer:
land|scape|goat
magnets don't always attract
4.9 on the Richter Scale
Ephra's picture

I would prefer the dark

I would prefer the dark brown pelt with no antlers. I remember for a short while I was able to actually wear that set with a pair of glitched invisible antlers (although that didn't last for long. Sticking out tongue)

I like to think of my deer's secret, "true name" as Ephra anyway. 21 is more like a transliteration of her pictogram, the common name everyone knows her by.
Her's picture

[pops in bored] D8 My

[pops in bored] D8

My rambunctious doe's biography is here if you should need it; I believe it provides everything you need to know. If not, ask away! I'd also love if someone could truly capture Her and make her act and talk like the pirate she really is. Not the "arrgh matey shiver me timbers" pirate talk. Just simple "aye"s and medieval speech. D: If you get that.

HOORAY.
[anticipates]

P.S. She's also a bit of a romantic. She nicknames everyone no matter how unacquainted they are. As in, she refers to Esll as "Romeo", "dove", and the such; Kaicow, "Mr. T", "pet", and others, etc. Normally it's just "pet", "lamb", "dear", "love", or sometimes "mate", though, if it's not a close friend.

I'M DONE CONFUSING YOU NOW K <33
Zazvat's picture

Sure Her! (*Possibly

Laughing out loud Sure Her! (*Possibly random question* Have you been watching too much of pirates of the carribean xD?)

And there won't be any pictograms here (making 21 an odd name since Ephra won't have a pictogram x3), and in case anybody does have the same set in the story, I'll make it so that everybody's set looks at least a little bit different from each other (which means they could look a bit different from what they look like in-game).
Lyeekha's picture

Oh! Story! (completely

Oh! Story!
(completely missed this >.<)

You can definately have Liëka (is trying to kill the name Serpanther Sticking out tongue), and Hunter... and all of them, if you wanted! Laughing out loud
Zazvat's picture

Oi, thank yous ^^! If the

Oi, thank yous ^^! If the other two (FIU and Troll) are needed or have a place in the story, I'll surely put them in Sticking out tongue
Fenqua's picture

I'm currently thinking about

I'm currently thinking about making another deer. So when I have him/her finished, could he/she be in your story? If other people are first, that's no problem ^^

But I already let Fen in too many stories XD

To pray is to believe, to believe is to purify one's soul


To pray is to believe, to believe is to purify one's soul
Scythe's picture

How about my doe Wyvern? ^^

How about my doe Wyvern? ^^ She usually sports the orca mask, but feel free to give her a real deer face if you would like to.

Here's her profile: http://endlessforest.org/community/wyverns-profile

Many thanks in advance! This story looks promising. Smiling
Lyeekha's picture

KITSUNE FTW I <3 them. ^^

KITSUNE FTW

I <3 them. ^^
Zazvat's picture

Lawl

Lawl Sticking out tongue
Verdalas's picture

Aw, thankyou for putting

Aw, thankyou for putting Walter in it. ^^ I shall have to find somewhere to stick your deer into my story as well. =3
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halogen's picture

Halogen could be in it, if

Halogen could be in it, if you want... He's kinda creepy.. like in the standing too close to you way and smiling too much, except not the nice kind of smile... and he tends to mumble and whisper to himself... When he does speak up, he's got a soft, quiet voice, though. The set would be the zombie pelt with orange flowers in his antlers, like in this pic.
Fenqua's picture

http://www.endlessforest.org/

http://www.endlessforest.org/community/fenqua-and-silverys-biography

Silvery is my new deer! I hope she's interesting enough for the story ^^

To pray is to believe, to believe is to purify one's soul


To pray is to believe, to believe is to purify one's soul
Zazvat's picture

Oh dang! I'm sorry I

Oh dang! I'm sorry I haven't gotten around to starting the story yet, but I kind of haven't been in the mood for story-making and I'm not entirely sure of the plot, I know a bit of it, but not all, but I shall be sure to know as much as possible and to get started on the story as soon as possible!



P.S. Halogen sounds like a deer who has a dirt-dirty little secret or something xD
Fenqua's picture

I see you put Silvery in but

I see you put Silvery in but still have the reserved space o.o You can 'free' that space, because Silvery is the deer I meant ^^;

To pray is to believe, to believe is to purify one's soul


To pray is to believe, to believe is to purify one's soul
halogen's picture

Cool! Take your time.

Cool! Take your time. Laughing out loud

(Maaaaybe... Laughing out loud)

Could Dim be in please? c:

Could Dim be in please? c:

His Bio
Reetno's picture

Wait... what? Reetno be in

Wait... what? Reetno be in the gifts part? NO ONE TELLS ME NOTHING! *spazzes*
lol... makes me wonder where else his name has popped up...

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Emiva's picture

Emmy would llike to be in

Emmy would llike to be in ^^



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