Story of Daitoro

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Awakened one morning by the sound of birds chirping outside my window, I was suprised to spot my father outside trimming the hedges. I was his first and only born son. He was never one to show emotion wich is why I think I can express mine so freely. One thing was for sure that morning was different than any other I had known.

As I walked down the stairs in the house my family had owned for as long as I could remember, I smelled the breakfast my Mother had surely spent hours preparing. "Good morning my handsome fawn" my Mother said as I approched the kitchen. She had called me her handsome fawn the minute I was born, I was once told by my grandmother who had passed away several years ago. "Please eat up, you and father are off to the forest to collect berries for my famous pie and you'll need your strength." She spoke as I began to eat. Once I finished I met my father in the front yard wich was still wet from that mornings dew. "Time to head out son!" He said to me as we walked towards the forest wich lay just outside the farm next to our house.

When we entered the woods my father said "Now don't wander to far son, take this basket and go find me some of the best berries you can." I began walking towards the area where I had always picked berries with schoolmates on the way to school, when out of the corner of my eye I spotted a shimmering light in the distance. Of course I had to examine it, knowing my father was to far away to see where I was going. As I walked towards the strange light I began fealing dizzy. I sat down ran my fingers through my hair and shut my eyes. When I opened them I felt strange, like something had changed in me. I stood up, still fealing dizzy and looked down at my feet. To my amazement there where hooves where my feet used to be! I was in completed shock, what was that light, where was I? It sure wasn't the forest I had known anymore. It was different, it seemed endless. I ran as far and as fast as I could until coming upon a small circle of mushrooms where several stag had fallen asleep. Somthing drew me towards them. For some reason I wasn't scared anymore, so I slowly walked towards them knowing in my heart I would not be harmed. Tired from all my running and the confusion of my new body I sat near them. As my eyes slowly began to close I realized that whatever happened this morning and although I was going to miss my family this was my new home and I would be happy...


(Please excuse my horrible typing and not so good storytelling, this is the story of my fawn as i see it Smiling Thank you for reading! I will soon right more as my fawn and me learn of this Endless Forest and the wonderfull deer who reside within.)
-Daitoro
Blackhoof's picture

I always thought of deer

Shocked

I always thought of deer coming to the forest in that way!
Where they start up as humans then wander into a forbidden or
creepy forest. COOL-EN!!!! Great job though! Your not bad
at story telling! Better than I am I can tell you!





Feed Me!

awesome story xD! that

awesome story xD! that reminds me, i have to post the story of my deer too.. (once...)
and your english isnt bad at all xD !

*i was a liar in every debate, i rule the forces that fueled your hate
daitoro's picture

THanks for the great

THanks for the great feedback guys!!! Can't wait to become a deer and write more storys as they happen, thanks again. Smiling