Souls of the Fathers

Quatar glowered at the blue backed fawn on the grass. This was stupid. Why am I so mad? I have no real reason to be. It's not like the little whelp did anything to me. Damnit! Get a hold of yourself!! Silently admonishing himself, Quatar shook his antlered head in frustration. This was getting him nowhere. Turning his face skyward, sniffed at the flower scented night air. Peaceful. But why? Why such unrest within my soul? Why am I in such turmoil?
The heavens lay dark in the great expanse above as the many ancient souls glittered. What is it? What secrets do you wield that I should be so troubled? I don't understand.
It had been years since he had felt such foreboding. Blessed with the gift of the heavens? Was that a gift? The ability to feel the magic of the Fathers? Was it not better to live out ones life in ignorant bliss? And now the sudden appearance of this blue backed fawn. Were the Fathers trying to warn him? But what great troubles were to come to the Celestial Forest? The most sacred of forests.
Gazing up at the Souls of the Fathers, questioned aloud. "I have been the Forest Guardian of this sacred place for nigh unto an hundred millenia. And I am no longer young. Why? Why does these troubling times come in my era? Do you wish to punish me for something wise Fathers? No. I know, I know. Ye do not control the wrongs of this world. Ye were tasked with one thing and one thing only by the Divine Ones, to watch over the Children of the Forests. I know. All too well. Such a simple command, and yet so hard. And what am I? A go between? A prophet? Hardly. A guardian. Yes. I know what I am. I have been this for so many years. And yet I still find it such a heavy burden. Oh, but I'm prattling at myself. Never mind. Never mind." Sighing heavily, Quatar felt suddenly tired, feeling my age probably, and nestled down into the tall swaying grass.

I've always been a story

I've always been a story teller. I love to write stories. I love to enthrall in the realm of the imagination. I only hope that this bit of a story will please others that read it. I hope to write more, however, if no on really likes it, I don't think I will.

If you like my blog Souls of the Fathers, please comment. Your comments shall determine whether or not I continue with my telling.
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I like the Souls of the

I like the Souls of the Father. I like how you took the descriptive narrative of forest life and added a layer of the divine that pull we feel when we are wondering around and gave it a name. Where did the Souls of the Father come from? Has it always been so in the forest? Does every deer feels this or only a few that have by trial and error developed a sense for it? Smiling

The magic of the Souls of the

The magic of the Souls of the Fathers are always there, I believe that every deer has a spiritual connection to it, just some can feel it stronger than others. Or, to put it another way; every deer can feel the magic, just some are conscious of it, while others, their awareness of it is on a subconscious level.
Some deer are given a gift by the Fathers, The Gift of the Heavens. The ones with this gift are the Guardians. They are what the Fathers use to warn the Children of the Forests when danger is bound their way.
The Souls of the Fathers, in truth, was not completely thought out. I found myself thinking of the stars, in the ancient days, the stars were believed to be souls. And from there, my mind simply wandered into the thought of the ancestors. And that sparked some inspiration. And so I launched myself into the realm of the forest dwellers. And as I placed those first words onto the page, the rest came, forming in my mind to spill out onto the page.

Thank you for your support Theano, I really appreciate it.
Is this... what it's like... to die?... It feels.... scary....