Sketch

Vicros's picture
Though I noticed right now that the ears are totally off.. This is a sketch I drew and thought I'd share.
I think it captures the real creepiness of the fawn's faces. >.>

Consrtuctive criticism is encrouaged. :3


Oh, and my scanner hates me. >.>
- Vicros
Kinsmate's picture

You kidding? I love the

You kidding? I love the face, he looks like "Uh hi...." I could never draw any kind of human face, ever. Great job!
(P.S. My scanner hates me too Eye)
Verycrazygirl's picture

Ah lets see. You've done an

Ah lets see.
You've done an incredible job on the face and neck, the ears look exceptional as does the general anatomy, you seem to know where most of the bones are. Eye

You've done a good job, but you can improve. And as you've requested critique, I shall try my best for ya. :3

The front leg that's in the air appears to have the bone structure of a wolf/lion/other carnivours. You see, deer have knee joints just slightly above the middle of their front legs, and then they have another joint just before their hooves. Smiling

This handsome fellow offers you an example.

With the other front leg, you could kinda circle out the joint a little, aside from that it looks good. <3

The curve of the fawnies spine could be improved. A little less curve, and make it a little softer, you've gotta think how the spine works too. :3

And the hind legs, they're a little too round but hey, I agree that hind legs are incredibly difficult anyway. xDD

I hope to see more art from you in future, you have so much potential going for ya! 8DDD

Vicros's picture

Haha, wow. You're very good

Haha, wow. You're very good at critique,has anyone told you that?
I can see where all the things you pointed out are and next time, I will definitely pay close attention to those areas.

You just wait, I'll draw you a deer with perfect anatomy and you'll be proud of me. :3
Verycrazygirl's picture

Last time I offered someone

Last time I offered someone critism, I felt like a butt afterwards. xD
Thank you so much for accepting it! Smiling

I'm sure you will. Eye GOOD LUCK! 8D

Reyy's picture

I like the imperfection in

I like the imperfection in things; it's what makes the artwork so unique!
So I love this a lot.
(: