Silence of White.

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Silence of white.

Deafening silence,
Leaves you with nothing.
Nothing to hold onto.
Nothing to linger on.

Close those eyes and
Count to three with me.
You'll wake up and
everything will be alright.


One..
White walls endless as ever.
Running forever, never tired.
have to escape, need to escape.


Two..
Starting to hear things,
Voices I've never heard before.
The white is fading.


Three..
I see a a sillouette of a stag,
I run towards him and before
I get to him everything goes black.


And then I'm awake.
Everything comes into focus.
Birds chirping, smell of the flowers.
no more white, no more silence.

No more.
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More or less how Teffy came into the forest.
She doesn't remember anything before that.

And the big silhouette of a stag may be her father,
from before she went into a coma.


Wow, this was really

Wow, this was really well-written!
It's so hard to imagine how some of the fawns came into the forest; I know people invent all sorts of stories for it, but this really captures the sort of magical, helpless element behind it. Poor Teffy.
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Yeah, it's pretty sad. She

Yeah, it's pretty sad. She doesn't remember anything or even how she got into the coma.
She was in it for about 2 weeks i suppose? where as her parents abandoned her because
they thought she wasn't going to make it. But Teffy doesn't know that.
She just woke up one day and they were gone. No sense of time for her. x]

Aw. Teffy kind of makes me

Aw. Teffy kind of makes me think of the runt of the litter in that regard. Even though deer don't have litters, you know what I mean. xD She beat the odds, though.