The Serpent's Mark [matured minimal nudity]

[Mature content: Titty-bitty-manbutt]



"He dreams of the pit again. The ground sundered in a single grand chasm, red fire and steam rising up from a river he feels is there but that he can not see.
He dreams of the pit often. It follows him into his days, a red ribbon fluttering in the breeze will catch his eye and set his heart racing. Everywhere he sees it and eventually he hears the roaring of the bloody waters, feels the hot smoke on his face and chest.
His father takes him to the temple, hands his fever-damp body to the priest. The boy cries as his father leaves him.
Even his tears are hot.

There is only the pit now. The boy knows there was once a waking world, where the wind was cool and did not scorch his skin. He knows he had a father and mother but their faces have been burned away by the angry red all around him.
He stands on the earth at the edge, feeling the warmth bleed into his bones and his feet stained red with clay.
He sits by the edge and tries to remember how he came here.
He lays down, resting his tired head on his arm.
He no longer thinks of leaving."


More short writings about Queze can be found here.
Kaoori's picture

QUEZE BUNS YOU HAVE MADE MY

QUEZE BUNS


YOU HAVE MADE MY NIGHT

I'm not sure why Queze

I'm not sure why Queze expects people to take him seriously when he refuses to wear pants...I'm glad your night was made! lmao
ocean's picture

I was all, "Where's the

I was all, "Where's the nud-...ohhhh."
He's adorable, though. I love the atmosphere and his tininess just adds to it. (:

TEENY BUTT ♥

TEENY BUTT ♥
BouncyDeer1's picture

Dat buttox...beautiful. Love

Dat buttox...beautiful.

Love the atmosphere it brings mystery in the drawing =]

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
Hart's picture

That's a curious literature.

That's a curious literature. Is this in Queze's dreams or his human reality? Maybe even a state of mind.. Hm, it seems very emotional to me.
Hope he's okay!

The picture is awesome, very atmospheric!

'Dat ass
Verdalas's picture

/drool

/drool

Thank you all for the lovely

Thank you all for the lovely (and funny) comments! xD

Vee: The best way to describe The Serpent's Mark would be that it is Queze's mental landscape. It is where he goes when he meditates, the writing is his first time 'being there' when he was a young boy with a fever. He's perfectly fine, even if it looks scary and ominous it's a comforting place to him.
theano's picture

I love how the man is facing

I love how the man is facing the pit, but not actually part of it. His muscles state that he is strong and ready to continue the battle no matter where it takes place. His hands and arms are set in a position of defiance. No matter what his fate is he will not give in. It is the man who can walk through hell and not flinch that counts not the fact that the fates have put him there. Smiling

Your analysis is very true

Your analysis is very true Theano! Thanks for sharing what the piece says to you, it's very helpful feedback.
Bintaroung's picture

...Can he make it dance for

...Can he make it dance for nickels?

No. But you can bounce them

No.
But you can bounce them off it. Eye
ocean's picture

Quote:No. But you can bounce

Quote:
No.
But you can bounce them off it.


Redface
Queze can have all my nickels.
/runs
Bintaroung's picture

Oh my. I do declare.

Oh my. I do declare.

/flustered face fan