Seed's Poetry Corner: Nevilly's Sonnet

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Happy Valentine's Day, My Dearest.


Nevilly's Sonnet

Love's hard grindstone had worn
me down, when I had known it in the past.
The wind was bitter, biting chill, the sky overcast --
For love had teeth that left me torn,
For love was over, and I forlorn.
Rosy dreams and the world stood in day-night contrast --
Each petal shredded by the wind, and at last
I dropped love's hope and let myself mourn.

'And then, like gossamer Spring, you came;
You with your surprised eyes and cautious smile.
I learned your face and radiant name,
How you were bright and free of guile.
And if love's blaze is fragile, at least it's a flame
That can cast warmth in our hearts for a while.


(( This has been a special holiday edition of Seed's Poetry Corner Today's part of the secret phrase is "ve."))

Aw this is such a touching

Aw this is such a touching poem, I love the line "and if love's blaze is fragile, at least it's a flame" perfection! Smiling
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I'm not sure it's all

I'm not sure it's all that.... But I thank you for the sentiment ^^

Bawww!

Bawww! <33 I love the line Tera mentioned, too ;w;