The Rain of a New King

Blackhoof's picture
Yeah, short story to go with it.
Might be some words spelled wrong...
When drawing this I remebered how me and Big Game would
talk about deers, and how bucks would fight.
adhasjh Print paper!!! It's scetchy....not really
finished yet....NOOODDDDLEEEES!
It would be cool if their would be antlers
like that in the forest....Just thinking.

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FernFire stepped out of the bushes
scanning the Broken Church. He smelled
another stag; Falcon. "Well, well if it isn't
FernFire."

"Falcon, I'm tired of your foolish games. You
treat me as a child, and you treat others strangly," Fernfire
reared his head.

"What games? I do nothing, I am the King of this fores, and
no one says I play games," Falcon scoffed.

"We will see. When I become king it will be a new rain. And
a new fealing of defeat for you," Fernfire lowered his head and charged, he
aimed his antlers. Falcon was swift and lowered his antlers in time to catch
the blow. Dust flew as hooves and antlers frailed.

Even though Falcon was older, and stronger. Fernfire was able to mangle
up some strength from his fustration and anger.They pushed each other back, Falcon gasped
for breath "You've grown alot, haven't you?"

"No, my hatered of you has grown," Fernfire snorted.

"Falcon," a doe walked frightfully out of the bushes.

"What are you doing here," Falcon looked over his shoulder and stared.
Fernfire saw his chance and charged once more. "You-," Falcon swung his head around,
but it was too late. Fernfires' antlers slamed into Falcons' neck.

"Falcon," the doe yelled. A fawn stumpled out of the bushes, chasing after her mother.
Falcons' bodie laid motionless. They sniffed at it, their eyes watered. The doe looked up to
see if the stag was there.

But, instead he walked away proudly and said " Tell your freinds
their is a new king....

.....and he has no faults."
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Thats Life for Ya!
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hARD TO SEE THE PICTURE BUT

hARD TO SEE THE PICTURE BUT LOVE THE STORY

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Blackhoof's picture

Yeah I know, it's

Yeah I know, it's mainly
because dirt and stuff gets all over the
paper and I forget to brush it off before I
scan it.

And it's lightly drawn....Sticking out tongue
Her's picture

CAN I BE THE DEER THAT GETS

CAN I BE THE DEER THAT GETS BEAT UP PLZ.
Blackhoof's picture

Why, of corse you can. Poor

Why, of corse you can.
Poor deer, He was once King....
I was thinking about the story and
thought it would be a good story to finish up.
But for right now, the next part of the story remains unknown....
....Probably should think of a title....
Her's picture

I meant in the picture.

I meant in the picture. Unless that's what you meant, too. I have a headache and feel like getting beat up so. C: I thought I'd let you know I was mad today for no apparent reason just to get sympathy in order to make myself feel better which is actually happening in every post I've made since a few minutes ago, though getting-the-sympathy part was only given by those that read between the lines and failed at making me happier even though I could do so myself if I only knew where to start.

Ignore ^
Blackhoof's picture

Yes I know you meant da

Yes I know you meant da pic.
I just have to scirble some stuff out
and stuff
Fenqua's picture

Your story reflects the

Your story reflects the harsh life in a REAL forest too! And the drawing is pretty cool, is it going to be colored?

To pray is to believe, to believe is to purify one's soul



To pray is to believe, to believe is to purify one's soul
Blackhoof's picture

I probably should? It

I probably should? It might
make it be easy to see? But then
my scanner eats colors....Sticking out tongue....
It hates colors like brown,blue,red,
all those primary colors....hmmmm...
I could try though....