Polished, You Shiver When Shined, Forgotten And Seething Inside.... [Kaoori]

Bylah's picture
...everyone falls for this, I knew it, I knew it.

Some of them were easy. Some of them were so trusting - and why wouldn't they be? They thought they knew. They thought they knew sweetness and light. They thought they knew a little innocence, a little naivety. A little song, a little dance, a play put on for them to watch while machinations were set in motion.

They really had no clue.

It started with Takeshi - a simple slip, a little accident, a little push, a fall, a sprawl atop a too sharp rock.

Oops.

And of course, there'd been the alligator tears, the consoling touches, the murmurs of reassurance.

It was an accident. It had just been a horrible, terrible accident. She could not be blamed.

From there, it had been nothing but child's play. A pied piper couldn't've played it better.

It was a dirge, a funeral pyre put on display.

The attention she showered on the skull of her once lover bordered on affectionate, for love had never once entered into the equation with him.

"You always thought you were smarter than me," she murmured in an ear that would never heard her again, "didn't you?"

The small doe straightened, looking at the long line of corpses, bloated bodies growing fat with gas. Soon, she'd be able to count the crows that pecked out their eyes.

It was enough to make her smile.

This time? She meant it.
thelittleraven's picture

Woah. Just. Woah. I love the

Woah. Just.

Woah. I love the way you word your stories. ;u;
Kaoori's picture

ajkwajkhdjkf okay, This

ajkwajkhdjkf

okay, This creeped me out. ;___; excellent job. I always loved how you described things. I never want to meet this Kaoori. ;_;
IoRez's picture

Golly.

Golly.

Awhell. Gah, I love this.

Awhell. Gah, I love this.
GingerNut's picture

I bloody envy your fast-paced

I bloody envy your fast-paced style. That you're able to get so much information across in so little time and yet retain that same chilling tone is brilliant.
Bylah's picture

Kaoori: I'm so glad that you

Kaoori: I'm so glad that you like it.

Everyone else: <3 Thank you so much for the lovely compliments. I'm so glad you all enjoyed it!


I definitely felt a chill go

I definitely felt a chill go up my spine when I read this. Holy shit. <3

EDIT: WHY DID IT LOG ME BACK INTO THIS ACCOUNT?

THIS IS LACIEBEAN.