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Please Critique and/or Redline

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July 24, 2011 - 9:51am — Bayleen
I need help sdlkjsdlkjdkf
I did this rather rushed though...but still. I doubt the results would be different if I was more awake. It's getting late and I'm probably going to go once I post this...

I think the only thing I like about this is the face ... :/

Please Critique and/or Redline...Preferably redline though...

Thanks in advance <3

July 24, 2011 - 11:43am — Midnightrose
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i like her face ad how youade

i like her face ad how youade her shoulders ^^
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July 24, 2011 - 2:19pm — DEERTH
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Very nicely done! I really

Very nicely done! I really like the face!
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July 25, 2011 - 2:57am — SilverBells
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Good start. (: Here are some

Good start. (: Here are some pointers and a sketch thing I whipped up in a similar pose~







-Ears are not on top of head like a cat
-The neck is not shaped like an hourglass
-Deer chests are less obvious and their shoulders stick out
-The back legs/hip area is less circle-ish and more box/triangle shaped.
-They have this pointy butt bone thing
-The place between the hip bone and "knee" is longer
-I am horrible at explaining
-Forgive me xD

My advice- Study deer skeletons! And sketches sketches sketches- That's always helpful. (:
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