path of the past - poetry

Shulgalaj's picture

Into the blue memories
the morning mist has fallen
erase the pain of words and deeds
glistening on withered grass

forgiveness is not needed
yet remorse now has been claimed
those deeds are long forgotten
too long has gone to speak of it again

so silence, rule my heart once more
and so be it for now
let us cheer the coming of days
mourn the past no longer

I can't regret, what is long gone
for it does not change it's being
yet, had I known this was to come
the deeds were, if so, never done.

By Katrina Tapio 2010


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More of the same

This is

This is beautiful...esspecially the third verse.

I wish the community appreciated writing as the art it is. -sigh-

Shulgalaj's picture

Oh, thankyou very much. ^^

Oh, thankyou very much. ^^
Baal's picture

I'll have to go ahead and say

I'll have to go ahead and say my understanding of stanza and verse is very poor and I am not often a good judge of poetry, but I will say that I did enjoy reading this very much. The flow of your words are perfect. Often I find I stumble over verse and have to re-read it many times to figure it out but I did not have that trouble here.

The third part has to be my favorite. Smiling Something about it is inspiring? I'm not sure how to say it. Just know that I liked this. Very much. ♥
Shulgalaj's picture

Thank you so much. :'o

Thank you so much. :'o

♥

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^^

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