"that pain...all over my body"

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"Tally was so kind to me today. She is nice and jolly doe and I really like her company. After that fight I am recovering very slowly and to run for a long time - this is real disaster for me. I even try not to enter big groups of deer, because something like a fear inside me persecute me away. I am afraid now. Afraid of this forest. The second day the weather and nature play tricks on us. It looks like the Gods want to laugh. But that make me crazy, I am loosing my mind. I decided to show Tally that valley with blue flowers and giant pines around. I think that this place is one of the most romantic in this forest. While we was making merry, I've suddenly felt strong pain in my back. The panic covered me, when I understood that wound started to bleed hardly.



And I run away. As fast as I could. AWAY! AWAY! I didn't want Tally to see that horror, to see how I would writhe on the ground because of pain. I was running away and I saw that she cried. But I could nothing to do about it. The wound opened and all my neck and chest become red. I could hardly breathe. But there was so many deer in the forest that I didn't know where I have to go. So I run and run and run... Everything went dark before my eyes when I knocked down near the oak. There was no oxygen in my lungs and I was nearly killed by that long and painful running. And then I lost consciousness...

Esmerald sang to him a song. A beautiful song which he still remembers. That was the last hours of their happiness. And then she said
"Run, Rally, even if you cannot hear my voice, I'll be right beside you, dear."
And then all gone.




I opened my eyes. Everything was fuzzy and I couldn't focus at anything. Terrible hue-and-cry was coming from the ruins and that noise caused awful headache. I want to hide somewhere. Serenity - that was the only thing I need, that's my I struggled up and run. I didn't know to what place on the whole Earth I was running. But I dreamed about a cave, with no light inside. And then... Strong pain pierced me. Like a flash, it dazzled my mind. The blood gushed from my mouth and I could taste it- salt with rust. Something was cutting me inside; I felt that my body was tearing to pieces. And then I fell down.



I couldn't move even raised my leg. The heart was beating so fast, and it was so hot. And then so cold. I was tossing and there was no one who was able to help me. It was viscous silent and even sign of bird didn't break that. I was overcome with blood. The only thought of mine was to die right now and not to feel that pain. Tear rolled through my cheek and fell to the wet ground. It was enough for me. And then the darkness covered me..."

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Oh i see. Actually just saw

Oh i see. Actually just saw you run by me, i guess you didn't notice?

& i was wondering if you noticed Tally trying to tell you not to run. <:)
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really? no, i didn't

really? no, i didn't noticed. btw i am sleeping in the pond now. having a rest, lol.

i think that it was before Ralph and Tally came to the valley with blur flowers?
I noticed, but Ralph was possessed by showing you that "his" place, that I couldn't stop him running.
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Baww, Tally understands. If

Baww, Tally understands. If you read the bio you'll know shes spent quite a while with her dad Envy while he was sad/unjured.
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my game crashes just now,

my game crashes just now, sorry i disappeared. but i came back lol
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don't mind; Ralph is so weak

don't mind; Ralph is so weak now that he could hardly walk and he feels so uneasy, because you play and stay with him, even he is not the best company in the world now. thank u =^_^=