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Once upon a dream {Short Story, comment please. Violence Warning}

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June 11, 2009 - 4:36am — Vira
As Vira awoke to a new day, the thick mist close upon her skin, the chill of night still hung in the air.
As eyes flutter open, a world of darkness, wolfs, and bats walcomed the fawn. Yawning and stretching she called out to anyone who may be in the forest. Only a lonley wolf's howl answered her back.

Fear strucken, the fawn made a dash twords the ruins,
darkness closing in,
bright glowing eyes chasing her,
the sound of rappid footsteps chase her.

A pain in her chest forced her to slow, but the will to survive was still strong.
Skidding behind a broken down wall and into a ditch, she heard the footsteps crash around her till there was nothing.

dead silence.

A snort caused the fawn to glance up, eyes widened in fear as they glanced upon a large black deer, large sharp antlers carried the torn, bloody skin of countless deer.
Before she could scream the power of two mighty feet came crashing down upon her head.



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silence.

there was no pain, as Vira's eyes fluttered open she saw only mist, only the darkness of the night.

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Yay for a badly written story ^^
It seems that the current strange wheather had scared Vira into seeing things. Poor dear.

PICTURE ADDED, hope you like it Laughing out loud
I worked hard on it :3
June 11, 2009 - 4:40am — Wind

Aww, hallucinating ish not

Aww, hallucinating ish not cool D:
Poor Vira xD

Ooooohhh, pictures? That would be a nice touch :3
June 11, 2009 - 6:27am — ocean
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The picture IS awesome. Poor

The picture IS awesome. Poor Vira. *wonders about her past*
June 12, 2009 - 3:35am — faunet

I love the story and the

I love the story and the picture both haunting.
June 12, 2009 - 3:38am — Vira
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Thanks guys for your nice

Thanks guys for your nice comments ^^
I may write another story later on, but im not sure

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June 12, 2009 - 6:59am — Baal
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That sounds quite a

That sounds quite a frightful vision right there! I do hope the poor dear manages to avoid such things in the future. Smiling

Certainly a menacing fellow there. Somehow makes me think of what a deer version of death would be.