January 12, 2013 - 3:26am — bambie123
as stones sister nibbled on the grass alll stone could think about was bright flames
"are you ok?" asked stones mother
''uh yes said stone i was thinking about...''
stones sister interupted
''mom! he is thinking about the forest burning''!
''oh my said stones mother(also known as acorn)
''NO!''said stone
''i,i was um''
''stone i told yu nothing will happen..."
all of the sudden they all heard crys of fear from the distance
''run!'' said stones mother ''FIRE!!!''
This is good so far. A thing
A thing that might get more people to read it is run it through a spell and grammar checker. Microsoft Word is great for this. You can do a quick google search to find some good ones as well.
Other wise I like it. I'm very interested to see how this forest fire turns out.