ok chapter two of my little story

bambie123's picture
as stones sister nibbled on the grass alll stone could think about was bright flames
"are you ok?" asked stones mother
''uh yes said stone i was thinking about...''
stones sister interupted
''mom! he is thinking about the forest burning''!
''oh my said stones mother(also known as acorn)
''NO!''said stone
''i,i was um''
''stone i told yu nothing will happen..."
all of the sudden they all heard crys of fear from the distance
''run!'' said stones mother ''FIRE!!!''
CydaLuva83's picture

This is good so far. A thing

This is good so far. Eye
A thing that might get more people to read it is run it through a spell and grammar checker. Microsoft Word is great for this. You can do a quick google search to find some good ones as well.
Other wise I like it. I'm very interested to see how this forest fire turns out.
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