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December 19, 2010 - 7:54pm — zaltana
WIP
still not sure what i want to do with this character
so things will be changing a lot as i develop him
also might try doing a simple css(suck at it though xD) for this when i get the time

ONLINE/offline

health: 100%
energy: 100%
mood: annoyed
thoughts: "doe get yourself straight.i will not fight for your affection or play these games.and he leaves you alone you've made a wonderful choice my dear.this time love i will not come to you,if you seek me and my forgiveness you must come to me."

Name: zaide(z/ai/d/eh)
Age: unknown
Gender: stag
Orientation: heterosexual
Species: demon
Set: magpie pelt/skull mask/real deer antlers
Picto: x
Voice 00:7 - 00:11
The other piece of the heart: sugar
Talks in this color: #121569

Appearance:
-twice the size of the average stag
-long top canine teeth
-mane longer than the rest of his fur
-the breath from his nostrils is always visible
- Foggy white pupil and eyes looks as if he is blind
-grey/white under belly
- Long horse like tail
-black tipped tail
-regal strong build
-deep blue colored fur almost black
-black triangles going up his jaw on thed skull on both sides
-black “socks” fading on the upper most parts
-grey whitish dots on neck
-black line going down back to tail
-black tongue and gums
- large sharp thick black antlers

Reference: x
(line art)

Personality:
- Calm
- Protective
- Confident
- Assertive
- Incorrigible
-truculent
-proud
- reserved
-understanding

Past:
my soul is stained with their blood…..that knowledge squeezed at my heart.
Stupid doe! Giving me these feelings! If she weren’t already dead I’d rip her apart again.
Yes….i killed her but at the cost of my strength. I could no longer kill mercilessly I flinched at the thought of killing another deer now even though my body ached and begged for it . I stared at my chest feeling the new incomplete muscle pumping blood and emotions threw my body. Giving me only half a heart…..what madness was that!? I was now stuck searching for the other half. With her dyeing breath she told me I was now at the mercy of the creatures I killed…..that my other half of the heart was to be found in one of these pathetic beings. I was to learn to live to love.
(going to redo this x.x i didnt like it much or i might do something idk )

relationships:
Sugar- he sees this doe often and enjoys her company though refuses to admit he has grown fond of her. She brings out the more cuddly side of him. With her he doesn’t mind showing affections or even frolicking occasionally. He is protective of her and won’t hesitate to fight stags giving unwanted attention to his sugar.
"lovely doe you satisfy my hearts hunger.....come come sit a while and rest your head i will watch over you."

windsor - unsure of this stag approached him when he was with sugar but didn't show aggression.caught him in an odd moment of play so he took a more defensive action towards him and walked away.
"young stag watch your step it is rare for me to walk away.thank sugar for that."











December 21, 2010 - 10:58pm — zero123

Yay I get the first comment!

Yay I get the first comment! Track Track. <3
December 21, 2010 - 11:09pm — zaltana

lol yay ^-^ he's such a lazy

lol yay ^-^ he's such a lazy butt with her tough xD he always worried he's boring her and if he does she doesn't have to stay he'd probably just follow to protect her if she just wondered off.

edit: ahh shes naked *covers zaide's eyes* xDDD no i think he likes it >.> lmao
December 21, 2010 - 11:14pm — zero123

He doesnt bore her at all.

He doesnt bore her at all. She likes sitting around with Zaide. I dont knoow what happend to her set it just freaked out. But right now she is kind of worried cuz zaide isnt around.
Edit: found him. all better
December 21, 2010 - 11:14pm — zaltana

ahh sorry O.O we were

ahh sorry O.O we were following a naked sugar copy then now we found you idk i was confused but eh its all good now ^-^
December 21, 2010 - 11:17pm — zero123

Lol ^^ guess what? Zaide is

Lol ^^ guess what? Zaide is it! Lets play tag.
December 21, 2010 - 11:30pm — zaltana

xDDDD mkay /fail lolz

xDDDD mkay

/fail lolz
December 21, 2010 - 11:31pm — zero123

lol Sugars legs started to

lol Sugars legs started to hurt from running but it was fun. Smiling
December 21, 2010 - 11:33pm — zaltana

lol yes it was but zaide

lol yes it was but zaide didn't really know what was going on till late but he enjoyed it :]
December 21, 2010 - 11:39pm — zero123

Lol im glad he had fun too.

Lol im glad he had fun too.
December 21, 2010 - 11:54pm — zaltana

hmm yes :] would you like to

hmm yes :] would you like to rp?but be warned i'm not that great at it xd lol
December 22, 2010 - 12:05am — zero123

Sure and thats ok I'm not the

Sure and thats ok I'm not the best either.
December 22, 2010 - 12:07am — zaltana

heh would you mind starting

heh would you mind starting ^-^"
December 22, 2010 - 12:16am — zero123

A small doe stands grazing in

A small doe stands grazing in a clover path. Her red fur glowed softly and she shivered whenever the wind blew. The were almost no clovers in the patch and her belly growled terribly.
December 22, 2010 - 12:26am — zaltana

today was very windy more so

today was very windy more so than normal the stag's mane blew in different directions.he closed his eyes just feeling the wind.when he opened his eyes and looked to the side he spotted a beautiful coated red doe.the sight of her caused his incomplete heart to react. it wanted her company and he had to obey. he approached slowly not wanting to scare the grazing doe.once he came within her view he stopped giving a slight bow. "hello."
December 22, 2010 - 12:34am — zero123

The doe looked up at the

The doe looked up at the large stag. She bowed slightly. "Hi." She looked him over. His dark blue pelt and foggy eyes lured her in. She wanted to press into his mane and search his eyes for answers. She wanted to be close to him but she looked away fighting the urge.
December 22, 2010 - 12:46am — zaltana

the stag moved closer slowly

the stag moved closer slowly still afraid to frighten the doe and he couldn't have that. "may i join you?"he asked. he stared at her intently but she didn't notice. she was looking the other direction.he didn't mind at all he must frighten the doe and he accepted the thought.
December 22, 2010 - 1:08am — zero123

"Sure."The doe moved back a

"Sure."The doe moved back a step or two and starting grazing on the small amout of clovers. She glanced at the stag and her heart felt like it was going to burst. She had to calm down.
December 22, 2010 - 1:23am — zaltana

he moved into the patch of

he moved into the patch of clovers leisurely grazing.he wasn't hungry he just sought the company of this doe. he brushed her side accidentally and froze,his body and his heart fighting.his body wanted to kill her to cut that pretty little throat his heart wanted nothing more but company and maybe love but he pretended not to notice the contact.he looked at her from time to time to see if she noticed his hesitation. as far as he could tell she couldn't but who knows. "may i ask what a beautiful doe's name might be?"
December 22, 2010 - 1:28am — zero123

She leaned into him when he

She leaned into him when he brushed against her. " Sugar is my name. What is yours?" She fought the urge to nuzzle him and play. She had to stay calm. There was no way he felt the same anyway.
December 22, 2010 - 1:40am — zaltana

he stiffened slightly as she

he stiffened slightly as she leaned into him. he had to lean to better control himself and balance these new emotions with the old.sugar? a lovely name it was and it suited her. "my name is zaide.do you mind if i ask why a lovely doe such as your self is all alone?" he stared into her eyes as he swallowed a piece of clover he had been chewing on way to long due to his emotions.
December 22, 2010 - 1:48am — zero123

She looked back at him and

She looked back at him and smiled a little. Zaide. It was a strong name. Just like him. "Alone...." Her eyes glassed over for a second but cleared quickly." Well sometimes its nice to be alone...and I dont have anyone would keep me company so that is why."
December 22, 2010 - 2:02am — zaltana

he saw her eyes reaction to

he saw her eyes reaction to it even if it passed quickly.he wouldn't press the subject.it seemed to be a sensitive topic. he look up to the sky and replied "i understand the want to be alone," he looked back at her."but if you grow tired of it you can always seek me out." he lowered his body slowly to the ground and sat.
December 22, 2010 - 2:08am — zero123

"Thank you." She didnt

"Thank you." She didnt understand why he was being so nice to her. She sat a foot apart from him and nibbled absently on some clover. She wasnt hungery anymore."Do you ummm like the winter time?" She didnt know why she asked him that. It was a stupid question but she didnt want to bore him.
December 22, 2010 - 2:18am — zaltana

he closed his eyes and

he closed his eyes and replied "yes i find winter rather beautiful despite how cold it can get." he opened one of his eyes and glanced at her. truthfully the winter reminded him of himself. it could be calm,accepting,beautiful and it could be murderous and vengeful.you never knew which you would really get but one thing was for sure it was cold. though he doesn't see him self as beautiful in any sense. "do you?"
December 22, 2010 - 2:24am — zero123

She looked at him then looked

She looked at him then looked away again. "Yes and no. Winter is cold and frighting." She paused and smiled soflty. "But it is also gentle and lovely." Sugar flicked her ears and laughed softly. " Listen to me. I sound like a old doe. I'm sorry."
December 22, 2010 - 2:40am — zaltana

he smiled slightly at her

he smiled slightly at her laugh it sounded wonderful.~i wonder what her screams would sound like~.the stag's body trembled. he shook his head at the thought and snarled. if only i could give in relish in my old ways but my cursed heart would have none of that. " it's perfectly fine and your quite right winter is unpredictable" he rested his head on the ground closing his eyes.
December 22, 2010 - 3:09am — zero123

She was flinched when he

She was flinched when he snarled and shook his head. "Uh huh." She was a little afraid. Had she done something wrong. She looked up at the sky. She found nohing to say. It was like her voice had left her.
December 22, 2010 - 3:20am — zaltana

he looked at her and realized

he looked at her and realized he had scared her. damn."i...need a drink...." he got up and slowly headed for the pond. i needed to clear my head. git rid of all this raw emotions that are fighting each other.i jsut hope i didn't scare her to bad.

(>.< got to go i'll try and get back on later)
December 22, 2010 - 3:30am — zero123

(awwww ok) "oh...ok." She

(awwww ok)

"oh...ok." She was sad to see he leave but she needed a chance to calm down. Sugar shook her head and curled up. She rubbed her face against the ground and yawned. She didnt understand it. The way she was drawn to him and yet scared of him.
December 27, 2010 - 11:21pm — zero123

Miss you

Miss you
December 28, 2010 - 9:30am — zaltana

ahhhhh!!!! i'm so sorry i

ahhhhh!!!! i'm so sorry i keep being active then dieing for a while school(and the holidays of course) keeps me busy >.< but this time i'm determined to stay active for more han a few days


once he reached the pond he took slow deliberate drinks from the water occasionally looking over his shoulder back in her direction.he slowly started to enter the water closing his eyes as his body became submerged into the cool clear water dipping his head in from time to time to calm himself. "doe any stags weakness but i can't let her get to me but my current state isn't helping at all." he said to him self shaking his head slightly and laying it down in the shallow water. he stared in her direction......she looked so calm and peaceful.......
December 28, 2010 - 7:02pm — zero123

Sugar lifted her head

Sugar lifted her head slightly when a buck walked up. He leaned down and sniffed her. She flinched back and stood up. The buck stept closer and tried to nuzzle her. Sugar stumbled back and shook her head. "Please, leave me alone." The buck stomped his hooves and lowerd his antlers. "Stop it...Hey! She staggered back when he shoved his antlers forward hitting her shoulder."Ow!"
December 28, 2010 - 8:08pm — zaltana

his ears perked up when he

his ears perked up when he say the buck approach.he didn't think much of it until the rodent started getting rough with sugar. he rose to his feet quickly snarling and charging towards the buck. it's back was to him he didn't even notice him approaching stupid beast.he swung his antlers into it's side digging deep pushing him sideways and away form her. firmly placing himself between the buck and her he reared and lowering his antlers to try and intimidate him.she didn't need to see him fight.surely it would scare her away but if need be he would.rather have her alive and scared of him than dead.
December 28, 2010 - 8:24pm — zero123

Sugar was frozen were she

Sugar was frozen were she stood. Her gray eyes were wide and she shook slightly. The buck reared and tried to get around Zaide. He thrust his antlers at Zaide without a second thought.
December 28, 2010 - 8:36pm — zaltana

the bucks antlers grazed

the bucks antlers grazed him.he didn't flinch at the slight sting or how close he came. the bucks head and antlers were still raised high form the force of the swing.he swiftly lowered himself almost under the buck and shot up quickly snapping at his neck.the large upper canines searching for flesh to be ripped.
December 28, 2010 - 8:41pm — zero123

The buck reared back to avoid

The buck reared back to avoid his snpping jaws. He brought his hooves down and struck part of Zaides face. He thrust himself into Zaide trying to move him out of the way.
December 28, 2010 - 8:50pm — zaltana

foolish buck he didn't feel

foolish buck he didn't feel the blow to his face he hadn't one but the skull but felt the pressure on his neck. he took the hit refusing to move and held he place between the two. he swung his own pair of heavy antlers towards the buck's chest striking low to avoid the defense of it's antlers.
December 28, 2010 - 8:56pm — zero123

The buck staggered back when

The buck staggered back when the antlers hit him. With a angery rawr he stomped away.
Sugar watched the buck leave with wide eyes. She shivered and glanced at Zaide. She couldnt move. She was in shock and pain. The cut on her shoulder wasnt deep but it sure did hurt. She flinched when she saw the cuts on Zaide. The small crack in his skull wasnt good either. It was all her fault. The stag had been following her around all week.
December 28, 2010 - 9:06pm — zaltana

he roared and taunted at the

he roared and taunted at the retreating buck.a warning that if he came near again he would rip its throat out. he approached her slowly seeing her wide eyes and wounds.he nuzzled her softly still breathing heavily from the adrenaline.he sniffed her shoulder and tried cleaning her wound "it doesn't look too bad. how does it feel? are you hurt anywhere else?" he inspected her carefully.
"i shouldn't have left you alone...
December 28, 2010 - 9:15pm — zero123

Sugar thrust her head into

Sugar thrust her head into his neck fluff. She shook her head. That was the only one. It didnt hurt that much. A few tears fell and she nuzzled him. "Not your falt...Not your falt....I shouldn't have gotten you mixed into my mess." She whimpered hiding her face from him. " Are you ok?" She mumbled peeking up at him.
December 28, 2010 - 9:25pm — zaltana

"it wasn't your fault

"it wasn't your fault either.you didn't get me in it i jumped into it myself " he closed his eyes enjoying the feel of her against him.only opening them to look down at her as she peeked up at him. "i'm fine nothing but a mere scratches" thats was a lie the wounds were more than a few scratches but he wouldn't admit to it he was to proud and this new body was weaker than his true self without the other half. "come lets go to the pond and wash out the wounds."
December 28, 2010 - 9:31pm — zero123

She nodded softly and limped

She nodded softly and limped a little as they walked to pond. She made sure she could always feel her fur against his. She enjoyed his touch, it felt right to her.
December 28, 2010 - 9:39pm — zaltana

he stayed next to her for

he stayed next to her for support if she needed it and because he like her feel.he wouldn't admit to it much less tell the doe.his ears were perked the whole time listening for any signs of danger he couldn't let her get hurt again.once they reached the pond he slowly lead her into the water and tried to help her into the water.
December 28, 2010 - 9:50pm — zero123

Sugar laughed softly. " It

Sugar laughed softly. " It only a cut Zaide I can get in the water by myself." She sat in the water and licked her shoulder softly. It didnt hurt that much anymore, the water in the pond made it feel a little better. She turned from her shoulder and looked at Zaide. "Feels better."
December 28, 2010 - 10:02pm — zaltana

he smiled slightly. yes maybe

he smiled slightly. yes maybe he was over exaggerating and protective but he couldn't help it. " i guess you are right heh how foolish of me" he shook his head. "good well the wound should heal up nicely it isn't bad at all"
December 28, 2010 - 10:09pm — zero123

She smiled and looked out

She smiled and looked out across the pond. A fish jumped out of the water and fell back in with a splash. Sugar had just gotten the best idea. She stood up slowely. She looked at Zaide and shook out her fur getting him wet. She giggled and splashed around. The water felt good and she wanted Zaide to have fun. She wanted him to forget the fight and smile for her. For her... She felt selfish. She shook her head slightly and continued to splash around. She wanted him to smile. Was that so bad.
December 28, 2010 - 10:17pm — zaltana

he had seen the fish jump as

he had seen the fish jump as well.he make a questioning expression has he saw her get up.what was she doing?zaide's head pulled back and shook as the water hit him. he watched her plash around for a bit and got up scratching at the water making a few splashes. it wasn't full blown running around like a fawn but it was a lot for him. her laughs had encouraged him to do it he wanted the sound to continue.
December 28, 2010 - 10:26pm — zero123

Sugar laughed when he

Sugar laughed when he splashed around a bit. She jumped in front of him and large shower of water hit him. She giggled and bounded away splashing water as she went. She got him now it was his turn. " Cant get me!" She taunted him splashing and jumping around.
December 28, 2010 - 10:34pm — zaltana

his eyes narrowed and a smirk

his eyes narrowed and a smirk and its way across his face. he was determined to catch her. " we will see" he bounded after her unintentionally causing large splashes the whole way. he was within reach of her and attempted to splash her.
December 28, 2010 - 10:41pm — zero123

Sugar laughed and bounded

Sugar laughed and bounded away again. The water fell absently were she had stood. She splashed him as she ran by laughed. " Still cant get me!" She jumped around behind him splashing and laughing. This is fun.