Tell me, what is your name friend?
Why do you glow so bright?
I feel as if I've known you
Once before
tonight
Pray,
come into the moonlight
come here, love
sit with me
Listen.
all the air is breathing...
Friend, tell me what this means
I feel the glow around me
but why?
why can't I see
the moon sings loud but softly
while you lead me away
Tell.
Friend,
where are we going?
I cannot find a trail
This glow...
...this wandering moon-song
it leads me home at night
But, friend...
why are you fading?
Am I pulling away?
Pray, hope
friend take me with you...
...The ground is far too cold
Please,
Love, don't dissapear now
Your feet don't touch the ground
...How must I find my way back?
Back where I should belong
My friend,
Pray
Love
I'm hoping
Can we go home again?
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Please tell me what you think! I need a bit of constructive criticizing on my works....more to come soon (o_-)
Nice work! (:
This is beautiful
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I imagined this almost in a
I'm not very good at
I have no more critiques. |D I like the repetition as well!
(*^-^*) Yay! Thanks you guys
Ocean thanks, will try working on it. I'm just so awful at finding rhymes, lol