A New Beginning

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There was a rustling of leaves... everything was still and silent.

A young fawn was born. She awoke, and knowing nothing of the forest around her, attempted to stand. Back legs up first, one front leg, then the next, and raise yourself up slowly... PLUNK! The young fawn known as Adar stumbled and fell.

She lay there for a moment, contemplating whether she would get up, or go back to sleep. She decided she would prefer a change of scenery, see the sights of where she lived. She attempted standing up again, and she stood, humbly and serenly. She carefully put one front leg out, then a back leg, another front leg, and then the back leg. She walked.

She tried trotting, cautiously going a little faster, but she tripped up on her own legs. She stood, and tried again, this time successfully. She ran, and ran fast! Then she jumped. Quietly she looked around, not making a sound. She called out to see if she would get an answer... she waited, the forest was quiet today. No reply. She wandered around and found mushrooms, she tested them out. 'Mmmmm,' Adar thought.

She kept wandering and found the pond and took a long drink.

Feeling refreshed, she stumbled upon the ruins and some other fawns. She walked up cautiosly and curiously. The fawns welcomed her, and showed her basic things around the forest but then, Adar's curiosity came stronger. She had to wander on.

She came upon a statue, a statue of twins. Just out of pure curiosity she bowed to these rocks waiting to see what would happen, when nothing really happened, she decided that rocks don't do much so why bother with them. Thus and thus to this day she will not bow to that rock or wear the pelt of that rock, merely because it is just a rock.

This fawn wanders, meets many new deer but can't wait to be an adult stag. She now sleeps most of her days away but in her dreams she is already out of puberty.

Then that glorious day arrives...


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aww the PLUNK was

aww the PLUNK was heart-warming :')
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thanks. I just finished

thanks. I just finished writing the first part to Adar's story. The second part is called That Glorious Arriving.


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Jesus Didn't TAP!
God Bless!
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