Morning Water (plume attempts a bit of poetry :P ) *fixed something*

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Twinkle, twinkle dewdrops
Droplets 'pon the grass
Slip and glide
Down the slide
And quench my throat so dry.


Footbeat echo
Flick the stems
Emerald blades shall
drop their gems.


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*awkwardly scuffles ground, embarrassed* Well... It isn't much. ^^; I'm not the best at poetry. For sure there are deer who are so very very talented in writing, I'm in awe!
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It's just...i...with the

It's just...i...with the brackets.

:3

*tilts her head*

(i'd likely have something for her to say! ...but i'm braindead. joyous. lol)
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xD; Thanks. I'll edit it

xD; Thanks. I'll edit it now. I'm sure I tried that, though...

*tilts head back*

Aww, I was hoping for taint to say something. If you think of something edit plz. :3
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She will say something,

She will say something, eventually Sticking out tongue Just not right now. I'm feeling too distant from myself. I...can't get into the right frame of mind, or whatever you call it.

To use italics you use the I

To use italics you use the I and /I tags, but add [] around the I and /I. :v

Edit: Just realized the text above IS in italics. Oh dear.
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(psst...Drop...not drop,

(psst...Drop...not drop, right?)

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Twinkle, twilight teardrops
Dripping 'pon the grass
Part aside
Furrèd hide
To chill the skin so dry.


Thunder echo
Through the stems
Shake the forest and
Break the gems.
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Oh... beautiful, Taint! It

Oh... beautiful, Taint! It is amazing how you took my (bad) poem and changed it to something completely different, but still the same... Oh, I can't explain it.
It is sad, too... But I think I understand it! *nodnod* Yes, yes... it is so deep.


(oh, woops. xD I don't want to bump this again, though.)
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I'd reply, but my stupid 17

I'd reply, but my stupid 17 year old cat is yowling >_<; I can't concentrate...