Meet Anna ( Chapter 1 ) completed

Time period 1854

They say my duty is to the farm,and that one day Ill marry.But first I must learn how to keep a house. They say the Indians are savages,but I disagree. I say they were here first. And they are somewhat wiser than us.You can call me a renegade or a rebellious girl. But some just call me Anna.
Im 16 and I live in Missouri on a farm with both my parents,and my two brothers Ted 9, and Mike 19.
We are not the only peolpe here. Some like us live in cabins along this countryside. Others live in the fort that is necessary for supplies. But the Sioux are also abundant in these parts.

Chapter 1
A beginning of something Different
These days seemed unreasonably hot or was it because I was standing in ther open right under the sun? Who really new. Weeding was not a tough but a bothersome job to due. The sound of hooves pawing at the ground made me stop and look up. It was my black stallion Midnight causing the rucus. Wisping over to him I gently cooed him. " Easy boy its ok" stroking him along his neck seemed to ease him. I was curious as to what caused his behaviour but I knew the boy were fishing. And dad was gone on a trip with mom. Puzziling as it was I soon found my answer as I looked the same direction Midnights attention was at. What appeared to be a Sioux boy around 10 was walking torwards me. I noticed a slight limp on his right leg indicating he was injured."Hello " I called out but I received no answer. Before the boy could reach me he fell on the ground. Running to him I put my hand on his forehead it was blazing. Taking both his arms I dragged him into the house,because he was to heavy to carry. I managed to get him in my bed, with some difficulty. I examined his right leg with care. Discovering something like a bullet had grazed his calf. Id not care what the reasons were ,but I knew I had to help him.I ran down to the creek to fetch some fresh cold water.Soaking some rags I placed them on his head. Now to disenfect ,and bandage that wound.Searching around she discovers some rags and some alcohol.At least hes asleep she thought as she applied the medicine to his wounds. Just as she was finishing up Anna heard the front door open. "Anna"her name was called. Dang it "In here"it was her brothers. "Anna we caught plenty for..."Her older brother stopped in mid sentence.Apparently in shock at the visitor."Ted go back into living room he ordered as he closed the door. Sighing Anna faced her brother.The look was rather hard"What on earth is an Indian doing in this house Anna"he said ."He was hurt what would expect me to do" she said defencivly."Id expect you to behave like any normal woman would and runaway not help him." he yelled shaking with anger. "Just because your 2 and a half years older than me gives you no right to tell me what I should do. And any normal person would help someone,much less a child who is wounded'"she said infuriated haer cheeks turning red from the anger. "Well..."was all he could stutter."You know dad would have taken him in Mike,besides what harm could it do ?"turning back to the boy she exchanged the cloth for a fresher and colder one."We could all be scalped." he muttered as he turned to exit her bedroom.At these words Anna gave her brother a shut up look." Go...go skin the fish she ordered.pointing to the door. "No problem" he said ducking out the door.Gahh why does he haft to be so ignorant. Looking back at her unconscience patient she thought why must everybody thats different must be labled and treated this way, moving a lock of hair from the boys face.Going into the kitchen to cook dinner she saw that Mike was not there,probably in the barn she mused."When will dinner be ready " Ted whined. "In a few minutes "placing the pieces of fish in a skillet. " Who was that boy in there" he questioned. Anna smiled "He is an Indian boy that I found that was wounded." she explained." Oh...can I play with him ince he feels better"? Ted looked at her pleadingly."We will have to see"she said while placeing the fish and various vegetables on plates to be served."Go call you brother in,I need to see if we can get our patient to eat something"she bustled around puttting the plates on the table.Rushing to get back to her room.Lightly shaking the boy"Wake up ,come on wake up"As the boy stirs Anna pulls a chair up next to her bed."Can you speak English?"she questions him."Yes"he answered simply eyeing her warily.Touching his forehead to chech his fever she said,"My name is Anna,you had a fever and you leg was injured so I brought you in the house."she sighed as she realized his fever was gone." My ,,,my name is Luta " he replied anxiously."Well Luta I imagine your hungry so here"handing him the plate of fish.Taking the plata Luta starts eating vigorously. Smiling Anna pours some water for him to drink. Once he finished eating Anna finally asked the question that had been burning inside her head ever since she found him."How did you get injured?"she questioned him."There were five of us hunting for deer. We came across some whites.They shot first" he confirmed. "Was anybody else hurt?" she questioned further.
"We retreated so no white man was killed"he said in a numb voice. Shaking her head "No thats not what I meant,what I meant was are your people injured?"she said with sincerity.Puzzled "Our warriors are not so easily killed" he said with a bit pride."good" she sighed with relief."Why do you care?'he asked hazily."Why shouldnt I ?"she retorted."Well I dunno its just dufferent he replied.
"you are going to have to stay the night here.And tomorrow we can see if you can move around on that leg,but why dont you get some rest"?taking the plate in her hands.Shaking his head the boy snuggled deeper into the covers.Tiptoeing her way out Anna tries to shut the doorquietly.Facing the room she discovered both her brothers were gone,probably already asleep she thought. Placing the on the table she heads out the door.The stray in the haylof would be her bed tonight ,but she did not really care.She stopped to gently pat Midnight's neck before proceeding to the barn. All she could hear was the sound of frogs,and crickets chirping.A peaceful sound that she heard as her eyes slowly
closed.Ending the adventure to this day.

Chapter 2
Two worlds collide
Chapter 3
Something you can never tame
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Indians!? 8D -stalkerrrrrr-

Indians!? 8D
-stalkerrrrrr-

yep Indians

yep Indians
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This is looking great,

This is looking great, Faunet. I really enjoy reading this!

Ive always loved Indians so I

Ive always loved Indians so I though why not.
Im glad you like it.
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This is interesting. Makes me

This is interesting. Makes me wonder if there's more too. XD;

Ill add more later

Ill add more later definitely.
Actually Pega Im suprised I can not recall when you have commented on my work before.
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I don't think I have before.

I don't think I have before. |D; I'm pretty bad about commenting, since this site gets posted on so fast I have to look at things on the run or else it'd take hours to go through.

(No subject)

Smiling

Should I keep all the stories

Should I keep all the stories here ??

It would be nice if you make

It would be nice if you make a separate blog for each, yet keep one blog where it links to all of them...if you know what i mean... like: a main blog where it has links to all the new chapters and it leads you to another blog page to actually read it. (: that sounds nice. Or is that exactly what you meant? (sorry if i dont comment on all of your work, ive been feeling "ill" lately)

Hmm I dont know how to do

Hmm I dont know how to do links so I think ill just keep them all here.
I hope you feel better.

I will...try to. Thanks for

I will...try to. Thanks for your concern...and : here... ill try this: how to post a link to a new blog is:
(of course without the spaces in between url and the [ ] ) Sorry if this sounds confusing:


[ u r l=http://endlessforest.org/community/reed-0]Write the name of the chapter here[/ u r l]

http://endlessforest.org/community/reed-0 would be the blog you are directing the people to.


Try posting a new blog named chapter one of so and so and then go back to this post, click on edit and eneter the actual url of the blog you want the people to link. (in my case it would be http://endlessforest.org/community/reed-0)



if you still dont get it, ill try explaining it in an easier way tomorrow since im dead tired....or if someone does it before me then thank you. (:


Aww thank so much Mikuru. Ill

Aww thank so much Mikuru. Ill do that. Now I just need to finish this chapter up .Smiling

No problem (: Hope everything

No problem (:
Hope everything goes fine for you... and now i shall go and sleep or else
Ill act like a zombie early in the morning :/
Good night &hearts.
Ill hope to read more of this later.

Feel better

Feel better Smiling

Chapter one is finished! I

Chapter one is finished!Exclaim
I hope you like it.

updated with chapter 2

updated with chapter 2

Chapter 3 complete

Chapter 3 complete

If I might politely put this

If I might politely put this what in the hell does this have to do with TEF. It does not sound like she is one of your DEER characters so why the heck are you writing this?

Well um first off cause I

Well um first off cause I want to and I thought the story would interest others.

A story childishly written

A story childishly written would hardly capture much attention, the first chapter yes but the others not so much. Its pointless and boring bull@@@@
How could people EVER LIKE THIS?

Please refrain from posting

Please refrain from posting any more comments on my blogs please.

Updated cause I started

Updated cause I started another chapter