magic's peom and story (my first peom but it is sad )

sunset1234's picture

Magic and her fawn Maggie
im happy and im proud what could
go wrong i never let anything near
but i was gone maggie was alone
but she fowlloed me with out
me knowing but once this never
had happen but this was the day two let go
but i did not let go i kept maggie with me
one day i did i left her when she was sleeping when
she woke she was worried she was scared and the
next day maggie died and never returned she
was the greatest fawn their can be i returned
where she was sleeping she was gone i ran and
tryed two find her but she was dead i notice that.
made by Sunset1234(me)

well i made this and my friend said "ask your mom or family members two get this game" but i allways go on my grandma's laptop so i have twoask her magic is my only deer i have well her fawn is well my friend with no simbole the other one with no simbole but im waiting for her two come back so i could ask her

the peom im kinda bad with peoms but this may make tears in your eyes
sunset1234's picture

no one likes it?(i got from

Sad no one likes it?(i got from chickensmoothie
and sorry for duble post)
Q:what a furso?
A:its like a pet thats you likesomuch that you wont give and you call is a furso
Q:what is impressive title?
A:its a type of game that you can play as a lion you can chat their is mutiplayer and new game but for mutiplayer you have two
Lebeau's picture

I liked it. c: Give it time,

I liked it. c:
Give it time, not everyone knows that there's a new post or two lying about. This poem is nicely written, makes you seem drawn into her worries, hoping that she'll be able to find her. But no luck. I feel for her. Poor baby.
Welcome to the site, by the way.
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whitespirit001's picture

same here sunset1234 but it

same here sunset1234
but it does take time you cant rush people all the time i mean like if you rush people of posting they might not post on your topics im the one with no simpole who ever saw me please tell meh
i have no simpole i did exactly what it said but no screen saver so now i see nobody
my deers/'s are white and spirit

spirit(is born her mother is white)
white(Full adult and is a female with antlers females think she is a male! ><)
Lebeau's picture

@whitespirit001; Did you log

@whitespirit001;
Did you log in when you started the game? Go to the main menu then click on network. There you should connect and then sign in. Also, this site is going to need a flash update to show the second generation pictos. So hang in tight! :]
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whitespirit001's picture

69 what about the simbole i

69 what about the simbole i cant get it and now no one knows me hmm.. how do you fix that?
and how do you change the set of your deer?
my deers/'s are white and spirit

spirit(is born her mother is white)
white(Full adult and is a female with antlers females think she is a male! ><)
Lebeau's picture

@whitespirit001; For your

@whitespirit001;
For your symbol, did you update the game client? Michael did put up a link on the hope page for users to update so that the second generation pictos will be seen. And to change the set of your deer, which would be a fawn, you just simply get another user to sit next to a sleeping deer, wait for a bit, they'll stand and come your way, and cast it on you. Fawns don't keep the pelts permanently like the adults, but you just need to wait a month before your fawn turns into an adult. By then, spells will stick to your deer and they can keep whatever they wear.
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whitespirit001's picture

well i got the update so i

well i got the update so i see the new deer name thing so ill im on the game
my deers/'s are white and spirit

spirit(is born her mother is white)
white(Full adult and is a female with antlers females think she is a male! ><)
sunset1234's picture

@whitespirit001:hey is your

@whitespirit001:hey is your deer white a fawn? just asking magic is a fawn i cant wait tell i get her pelt
@69:thanks (for likeing it i did not reply i was bussy)
Q:what a furso?
A:its like a pet thats you likesomuch that you wont give and you call is a furso
Q:what is impressive title?
A:its a type of game that you can play as a lion you can chat their is mutiplayer and new game but for mutiplayer you have two
gloryofdeerforever's picture

Hello, I like this poem!

Hello, I like this poem! Mistic likes your deer's name it's simmiler. ^^

See You In the Forest!

i dont like it I LOVE IT and

i dont like it I LOVE IT
and like
hey did you see me whitespirit001 cuz i think i saw you????