(mel-aan-kol-ee) - For Munkel

GingerNut's picture






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Melancholy (mel-aan-kol-ee) noun - (obsolete) black bile: in medieval times considered to be one of the four humors of the body, to come from the spleen or kidneys, and to cause gloominess, irritability, or depression; the condition of having, or the disorder supposed to result from having, too much black bile. Sadness and depression of spirits, a tendency to be sad, gloomy, or depressed



















"Obsolete?"















"Not likely. Such a feeling, a result of which from such experiences that lower the spirits of one's heart.... It is much like the sickness it so once meant."
















"I... I know how it feels..."














"You do?"














"Y-Yes..."














"It claws at you, it feeds off of you, it tears and works itself underneath your skin, it curls your smile into a frown..."














"No... It feels... It feels bad, yes. But... It also kind of feels like an empty feeling... kind of down in my stomach... Uhm... Like I'm hungry, but not really..."














"Psh! Childish... But true... You're small... How old are you?"














"I-I don't know... s-sir..."














"I am minutes old myself, yet I have already felt this emotion. Such are the cruel ways of this world..."













"M-Minutes, sir?!"
















Two deer sit side by side
One is small and white
The other is tall and brown















"Minutes, yes..."














"How do you know so much...?"














"Simple. Because, like you, I've lived before, just not in this prison of this world.... rather somewhere else..."














"...!!!"














"Ha... You look so surprised...~ We've all, or at least most of us, have lived before... Don't you know that?"













"H-How do you...?"
















Two deer sit side by side
One carries a shining light atop his head.
The other carries no such burden















"W-Who are you?"















"A nameless, surely you know that...? You've seen many like myself before... Have you not?"














"Y-Yes... but y-you're..."















"You've never stopped to talk to one. I can tell."














"..."
















Two deer sit side by side
One frowns, and comes closer
The other simply stares















"...I... I am now..."
















A smile















"...You are.~"

























So is a friendship formed
Though it does not last
The white stag knows this
And while he is sad
He knows that, for once...























It is not his fault

























(I have no idea what this is. I just wrote... and this... thing came from it. Is this a gift? I honestly don't know... If it isn't, I'll do another one. Happily. This is... I'm not sure... what it is... I spent hours on this, and I have no idea what it even is...

But, even if it's bad, Happy birthday, Munk... <3 I can try something else if you wish~ I owe ya~

Definition comes from yourdictionary.com... not mine~)
Munkel's picture

This is... more than a gift

This is... more than a gift actually. It's wonderful, and very special...
I love the idea of him speaking to a nameless, and the shape of this nameless ah... you show the truth behind nameless deer in general.
And it's cute how Cry sits closer to him, that's totally him x'3
And as always... I looove how you write, yesss &hearts
It's such a wonderful gift, thank you so, so, so much!
And it's not bad at all, it's mel-aan-kol-ee... and that's how he is : ) and it's very beautiful.

I'll read this on and on~
I love you.
GingerNut's picture

I've always wanted to write

I've always wanted to write about nameless deer... really... and Cry offered a nice outlet for that. I'm glad you like it, though... makes me feel special ;w;

I love you too, sis~
Happeh birffday. <3
Munkel's picture

You are special, so is your

You are special, so is your writing, and all your characters &hearts

Thank you so much again, I love it &hearts
Nix42's picture

Wonderful writing, I really

Wonderful writing, I really like the 'Two deer...' pieces inbetween the conversation, kind of sets the mood without being too detailed. It also keeps the attention drawn to the dialogue, which is in my opinion a very strong one. I didn't really get the hints about it being a conversation with a nameless deer until I read in one of the comments above, that is kind of a downside to me. But maybe I just missed the clue myself... XD
''A spark neglected makes a mighty fire."
GingerNut's picture

Munkadunk~ I'm so happy...

Munkadunk~ I'm so happy... you're welcome ;w;

Nixxerz~ Oh, thank you! I tried to make it so that it didn't seem lazy or unorganized... and I'm sorry if my own clues weren't clear enough ;; Maybe I'll edit it a bit later when I feel up to doing somethin'. Thanks though, serizly. c:
Nix42's picture

You're very welcome! Nixxerz,

You're very welcome! Nixxerz, I like that. XP
''A spark neglected makes a mighty fire."