I Will Always Return

Hi every one! i just wanted to write a fun little story about endless forest. this did not really happen in endless forest its just made up and it has a little twist in it. If i get at least 15 coments by the end of October Ill make another one. Well enjoy! Smiling

Hi I'm Freedom. I was born not to long ago but I was born differnt from the other fawns...The other fawns had normal pelts but mine looked like a cows. I was often teased or mistaken for a cow. I had only one friend, her name was Lissa. Lissa didnt have any other friends but me. One day when Lissa and I were walking in the forest we herd some one say " Cow! go get it!". lissa said that it was probialy one of the other fawns teasing me.We staerd at each other for a moment ontill a huge stallion and two dogs came out of no were. Lissa and I screamed and Lissa was able to run away I tryed to follow hre but the stallion jumped in frount of me. The stallion said "Your not going anywhere!". When I turned and tryed to run the other way the two dogs started barking like mad. After a few seconeds I heard another horse. When the horse came out of the bushes, it was a mare with a man with a rope riding on her. I was mostly afraied of the rope. Once again I tryed to run away, but the other animals surroned me. The man through the rope and got it around my neck. I started thinking: Who ropes cows any more?! The farmer said 'We got it!! Lets head back to the farm!!!" The other animals followed him I was forced to follow them. Every time I tryed to break free one of the dogs would nip my ankel or the stallion will rear and all most stomp on me. When we got to the farm the farmer put me in with all the other cows in a huge fence outside. The farmer said to me and the other cows " Ill call you Besy."and he walked off. At first all the calves wanted to play with me but their parents stoped them. For some reason all the cows stayed away from me, mayde they knew I was a deer? It became night time and I looked at the moon.I sighed remembering how Lissa and I would sit down and look at the moon toether every night. I adventualy fell asleep. in the morning the farmer let us out to play in the huge field just outside the farm. I could see the forest from were I was standing. I nibbled on some grass for a while, untill the farmer said "Milking Time!!!" all the cows cheared but I sat there and thought: what?. When we got in the barn all the older cows were hooked up to these wired macheens. All the calves had to stay in a little pen and so did I.The calves spoke to me. one calf said " We know why our parents wont let you speak to us." I got up and said "Why?" The calf replied "Well the farmer might think your a cow but all the animals can sence your a deer." I sighed and said "Ya its true." We all layed down and took a nap. We had to get up when milking time was over. Later on in the day the farmer took me and all the calves to the barn. The farmer siad that it was time.All the calves jumped happy about some thing. He called the calve I had talked to in the barn up first and he put some thing in the fire and left it there for adout 5min. It looked like it was on fire because it was all red. The farmer took it out of the fire and said "Well hear we go." and he put it on the calf's waist. The calf screamed alittle at first but then calmed down. Now this mark says that your mine the farmer said.I was last to go. all the calves watched. Before he could put the thing on me I moved forward so it missed me he did it again and again and keep missing. I was tied up so I couldnt move. That should hold ya the farmer said. He got the thing again I tryed to wiggle free but it no use.... I keped trying and I got one of my back legs out. just before the thing hit me I cuted the ropes with the sharp part of my hoove and a ran around the barn.I broke through the doors and ran to the forest. I heard the cows mooing,but I keped running. I made it to the forest and called for Lissa. She called back and I ran to the sound.I saw Lissa and she saw me. We ran to each other untill we were face to face. Lissa said ''Welcome back i knew you would return''

I think this is pretty good I

I think this is pretty good I like the ending Smiling
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Haha, this was a very cute

Haha, this was a very cute story, though a little sad!

But don't let the amount of comments determine whether or not you keep writing -- you should keep writing no matter what! (:
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Haha I agree with Lemon.

Haha I agree with Lemon. <33