i need your critiques, and opinions ~

Hadou's picture
okiedokie, hi hello again,

i had time to do some doodling and this is what happened, I actually love the style and junk i used,
i'll start using gimp more often i love pixels so much.

anyways, i was some critique on this, anatomy and anything, like i am pretty proud of this, bahaaa, so i wanna know what you all think.
since y'all are amazing artists, lemme hear your opinions.

now be honest, for real i don't care if you have something negative to say, say it.
i wont be hurt, i swear i want to improve so constructively criticize me. please and thank you.

this is the first time drawing the face like that, usually i do profile.

LIKE IF THIS SUCKS LET ME KNOW SO I DONT LOOK LIKE AN IDIOT, PLEASE?

anyways, thank you for reading, have a nice day/night c:


Gloomycluster's picture

sexy. mmm.

sexy.
mmm.


Hadou's picture

>.> i want legit critique you

>.> i want legit critique you booty
butthankyouilubby
WonderfullySarcastic's picture

I'm not too good with

I'm not too good with anatomy, but if you're really wanting critique, I have a..critique of sorts.. Forgive me, because I'm horrid at explaining things <3

Well, that back leg, more or less, the hip area. Now, the overall leg looks great. But the hip looks a bit like, well, a frog's- farther set from the pelvic area? I think the reason it is so, is because the of that sharp downward curve instead of it flowing with the rest of the body? x x x
Now, I assume you've meant for her to be sitting more atop her back legs than having them kicked out to the side, since her spine is curved up to accommodate for this, and her right rear leg is not visible? If so, I believe she'd probably have her left rear leg tucked under her more than away, otherwise her balance would be all off. But even so.. I think she'd still have at least her right hoof visible (she seems thinner than an average doe, so no tummy to obscure it from view) and her front hooves/, with it appearing that she's kinda leaning to her right? x x x
Her shoulder could probably be a little less pronounced, too..?
x x x

As for the face, kudos for trying something new and showing it off!
The only thing I can think to suggest, is instead of making it square-ish, maybe more of a rectangle that tapers slightly beneath, with a little more room for the forehead, though this is highly dependent on the species. x x x

I hope I helped kinda! <3
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din's picture

mm, i love. i think the shape

mm, i love. i think the shape of her head and her mouth/eyes, look a bit wonky..kinda flat, but everything else seems spot on. do do love this style, especially the emphasis on the bodyhair. ;u;
Hadou's picture

ldsfkasf thank you so much

ldsfkasf thank you so much WonderfullySarcastic, <3 exactly what i was looking for!
yeah the head does look boxy haha, i shall try again, i need more head drawing experience.

thank youuuu din <3 ;u; i didnt even know what i was doing at first, but half way through i was like yeah i like this.
WonderfullySarcastic's picture

Mmm! <3 Yea, seems like

Mmm! <3 Yea, seems like everything is boxy about a deer except their darn heads.
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