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May 4, 2014 - 9:02pm — Hadou
trying to make some little bouncy buddies for my signature.

though, i'm not sure if i like how this came out, even if i did rush.
this is just a test but i'm horrible at drawing cute chibi fat things, which this is.
soooo PLEASE tell me your opinions, like too fat, too tall, this that, the legs are weird the face is weird TELL ME like i don't care if it's rude. i seriously want to know. i won't be all weh about it.
like if you want to tell me how to make it better, i am all into that. seriously. do it. yes.
like, if you legit help me & give me opinions i will make you one. or two. or five.
ok
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thanks.
have a nice day :v
May 4, 2014 - 9:07pm — Pelicann
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I actually think it's

I actually think it's adorable. Just the face looks a little funky, and the legs could be a little..idk. Maybe try making them thinner or something. Other than that, it looks fabulous.
May 4, 2014 - 9:10pm — LambFleece
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Personally I find it pretty

Personally I find it pretty cute c: I can't imagine the cuteness it'll hold when your not in a rush.

But it doesn't look very bouncy for whatever reason. Maybe it's just not bouncing in the right spot of the leg... If that makes sense. I dunno. :/
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May 4, 2014 - 9:13pm — Hadou
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ah thank you both ;v; very

ah thank you both ;v; very helpful

hmm, the face is odd, i see it. i'm not sure how, is it the shape of the face or pose?

aaand, perhaps if i break it lower it will be more bouncy like.
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May 4, 2014 - 9:14pm — Pelicann
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In regards to the face, I

In regards to the face, I think it's that the features are placed a little high. Try lowering the eyes and nose.
May 4, 2014 - 9:23pm — /

Oh well, honestly; I find the

Oh well, honestly; I find the face to be sort of weird, I don't know how is the character's face meant to look like but I find it to be sorta confusing, I can't see/recognize well the facial features that much, also the ears look a lil' like they're growing from their mane and not their head, it may be an easy mistake to make but I see it that way. The back leg seems to be a little misshaped and the overall build looks a little too much bloated/tough in my eyes, but that may be just me. Other than that, I think it's really nice - good job to you!
May 4, 2014 - 9:24pm — LambFleece
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^^ agreed. The nose should

^^ agreed. The nose should definitely be lowered, that's kinda throwing the whole face off for me.

Yea, maybe a lower break would work. Also possibly making the shift larger? But not huge, just another pixel or two, if you'd like.
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May 4, 2014 - 9:30pm — Hadou
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ah ok, lowered the face a


ah ok, lowered the face a notch, i honestly am horrible with human faces, baha.
and i'll fiddle with the animation to see if i can make it bounce better, maybe throw in another frame.

jennie: hm, the body is a bit thick but only because it's suppose to be a chibi like, [chibis are fat right, i dont even know omg] style does it look buff as well?
the ear, where do you think it should be moved, though his ear is usually surrounded by his 'mane' or hair.
annnd the back legs, how so, is it the top joint or the lower part of it?
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May 4, 2014 - 9:38pm — lin

Hm. Give the face some forms.

Hm. Give the face some forms. It looks fatly.
What about his ear, why it grows from the neck?
Then, bone on the back leg is too low
Lol, my bad english is too bad right now, but I tried.
Hope it will help you a bit
But in fact, I really like it <3
May 4, 2014 - 10:30pm — Hadou
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ah thank you lin ;v; <3 i've

ah thank you lin ;v; <3

i've edited everything but the hind leg, i just can't get it right.
if i can't get the leg correct soon i'll just post it without the hind leg so everyone can make sure the rest is ok.
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May 4, 2014 - 10:49pm — /

I'm not sure about that,

I'm not sure about that, again it may be just me since I always draw my deer thin but I think is also looks a little as if inflated, especially the sides as if they had liters of air in their lungs [lol], not sure if it the shading responsible for that or something else.

I'm not sure how to fix the ear, I understand it is meant to be mostly hidden under their fluff but it still looks like if would grow from it, I would either rotate it heavily or redo it completely, not sure how exactly it shall be fixed right now.

To the back leg; perhaps I would try to make the knee area a little more pointing out and fixing the curve a little? The curve looks sort of sunken, could have been more up and perhaps a little more of shape to it.