hunters are in the endless forest.

A big grey stag tall, strong and, majestic jumps of his rock. He is the leader of the forest. As he walks down wind he smells something, something strange, something he has never smelled before, he is confused but yet he is curious. He goes deep inside himself and gathers all the his strength and continues to walk down wind to find out if it is a threat to the forest and to his people. He gets about 50 yards from were the other deer are and then he hears a challenging grunt forum another deer. He freezes and listeners in the direction of the grunt. Not one deer to be found. He continues to walk. He hears the noise again. He freezes and listens in the other direction. Suddenly he feels a sharp piercing pain through his shoulder and hears a loud boom. He kicks and thrashed around trying to get the cause of the pain off. He then stands still and collapses, he has confronted this problem be for in his memories as a young buck, he squeezes the last few breaths of air into words. He said " the hunters are back."
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I expected more text, but

I expected more text, but well...it doesn't matter. ^-^
Thank the Gods, there's no hunter in the game. X3
By the way, "He kicks and bucks and thrashed around", you should replace the first "and" by a comma, it's weird when there's two "and" in one sentence.