Gather around children... Vessel has a story to tell

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i just finished watching Watership Down and it was FREAKING GREAT. so i formulated a little story about the beginning of the Endless Forest. no, i dont believe in it, so dont label it as a crazy religion. i just felt like writing it. its kinda stupid and you probably wont like it XD HERE WE GO

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Children of the Endless Forest, lend me your ear, and I shall tell you of a story that has been long forgotten. It is true that the origins of the world are yet unknown, but there is one story that has tested the intellect of many a mind.

In the beginning, there was a great god.

This god created the universe: the planets, the stars, the moons. And the god designed each planet to his liking. One planet he decided to put life on. He created trees, plants, waters, the sky. He created every form of life, from the simple animals to Man. But he also created five special creatures, giving each of them his face.

One was the Dog, who had a longer face and tail. Another, the Cat, with large fangs and sharp claws. The Bird, with great beating wings and beautiful feathers. The Rabbit, with powerful legs and great cunning. And the Deer, with great and mighty antlers. These five creatures were given their own territory and intelligence. They soon multiplied, and filled the earth, alongside the other creatures of the land.

The god was happy that his creations were living together in peace. But as the earth filled, the five Great Animals started to quarrel. The Bird bragged about her ability to fly, which angered the other four. The Cat and the Dog started to fight with each other, arguing over who was the better hunter. Even the Deer and the Rabbit, the most peaceful Animals, faught over which could run faster. Soon, the Dog started to chase the other four, the Cat hunted the Rabbit and the Bird, and the Bird hunted the Rabbit.

Even when the god brought them together, they fought. They demanded for the god to destroy the other Animals, and gave enraged arguments over who was the dominant Animal. The god had enough of this. He knew his creations could no longer live together. He soon created new places for the Great Animals, and no place was anywhere near another. Each of the five lived in their own paradise, specially designed to their liking. The Birds were given many high trees; the Rabbits, large fields; and so on.

But surely the god would not leave these places unsupervised. He appointed the very first Great Animal as a god of their land, to keep rule and watch over their people, for they had the most wisdom. And so, through this tale, a possible answer to the Endless Forest's origin is given. And what of the other four, you ask? Well... I'm sure they are living just as happily as we are. We are the children of the Great Deer, and we rule over the lesser creatures. But that does not mean we can step out of our land. For that would bring great danger upon us.

But... If you do happen to see a rabbit with a flat face, do tell me. I would like to meet that rabbit. He would be the evidence behind this tale. But truly, only the Twin Gods know for sure.

Only because they were there.

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lol, dumb, right? its not very well thought out, but i thought it would be a cool thing to think about. this really only came to me because i drew a human evolving into a rabbit (kind of inspired by what Anzel drew) and i thought "that would be kind of a cool game XD"... i literally said "XD" LOL no im kidding XD but think about it... what would it be like to be a BUNNY?? anyway, im rambling. hope i didnt waste your time XD
Neiko's picture

Aww, its not dumb! If you

Aww, its not dumb! If you think about it, tons of book writers had to make up their character's beleifs. Like Tailchaser's Song, for instance, by Tad Williams (AMAZING book, kind of similar to Watership Down, except with cats).

I had to do the same thing for my own story.

Also, this is wonderful x3 you wrote it like it really IS the actual beginning. It sounds like one of the cosmologies of different cultures.

Now I want to watch Watership Down.
Kanaf's picture

go to Youtube and find the

go to Youtube and find the videos by xblackrosex if you can. he/she has the entire movie divided into 10 sections <3 (the Great Frith is probably my favorite character, only because he has a wonderful voice XD )

but thanks very much! im glad it doesnt sound TOO unoriginal XD i wonder how M&A would react to this little theology... maybe they'd make another game featuring rabbits with human faces XDD
Neiko's picture

I personally like Hazel's

I personally like Hazel's voice the best <3
Kanaf's picture

i thought Hazel sounded like

i thought Hazel sounded like Obi Wan from Star Wars XDD but he does have a very fitting voice.
Neiko's picture

Haha! Now that you mention

Haha! Now that you mention it, he does sound like Obi Wan xDD
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I missed this blog, I didn't

I missed this blog, I didn't see it! Well written, Vessel XD

Water Ship Down is really awesome! I watched it recently for the second time and I almost had to cry. I watched it in German, because English was too hard for my lil' brother sitting next to me (he's half German)

My story's title was inspired by the beautiful song called Bright Eyes <3

'what would it be like to be a BUNNY??' <--- I'll ask my rabbit soon XD

To pray is to believe, to believe is to purify one's soul


To pray is to believe, to believe is to purify one's soul
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i know! i saw that song in

i know! i saw that song in the credits and i thought "HOMGBRIGHTEYESTHATSFENQUASSTORYXDDD" i love that song (even though its a bit... out of tune?) its still pretty <3

I DRAWD A BUNNY WIF A HUMAN FACE X3 it actually looks pretty good. if we end up choosing what our avatar looks like on the game (as far as species went) id suggest it. because bunnies are AWESOME

(lawl, Keehar "YOU SHTUPID BUNNEHS" XDD)