Fog and Flowers (Hushabye)

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Still awake and really inspired from the fog this morning when I walked my dogs, and also I wanted to write something in return. I was going to write something about your deer but couldn't find a whole lot of info about him so I hope this is okay. Eye

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Fog and flowers, morning mist
Veiled in beauty, lovely bliss
Here you are, blossomed before me
Though far away no eyes shall see
I traveled afar in search of my light
To protect me from the demons of night
And now here I am, in shrouded awe
To the flowers before me with none a flaw
And thus the curse lifted, my eyes clearing
Gone were the darkness, the demons, the fearing
The fog thus lifted, and petals gave wisdom
So I kissed them for my wondrous freedom
And since then, for every flower that I see
I reminisce of visions and deep endless beauty
So a lesson to us all, shall we always be reminded
Keep strongly the treasures this Earth has provided
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The hardest lines for me to

The hardest lines for me to decide what to write were:

The fog thus lifted, and petals gave wisdom
So I kissed them for my wondrous freedom


For whatever reason I just could not think of what I wanted to say while making it rhyme.

♥ This is

♥ This is exquisite.

So a lesson to us all, shall we always be reminded
Keep strongly the treasures this Earth has provided


And such a beautiful message there.

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Those lines were inspired by

Those lines were inspired by a Chinese proverb I have on a bookmark:

"When you've got something special, never forget it."

Thank you for the comment!
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This is beautiful Quad! And

This is beautiful Quad! And honestly, though you may not have been able to find much on my deer, I think you just wrote a wonderful ode to a deer I once held close to my heart whether or not it was intended.

"And since then, for every flower that I see
I reminisce of visions and deep endless beauty"

These lines in particular make me smile. They make me smile a lot. Thank you Quad. ♥ ♥ ♥