Read Left to right, top to bottom.
phrases wrap around.
Done in Microsoft Word.
I was inspired after watching routine broadcast burning up north.
Not particularly written about one deer but I had a few in mind when I was writing the rough drafts at 3 am.
You can probably picture one now. The 'loose cannon', the 'misunderstood rebel', 'the timid doe', the 'tragic past' or merely the 'lonely antagonist' whose minor infractions or 'strange behaviors' can lead to uncontrollable chaos and fan the flames of inspiration for the community. Negative or positive they surely make an impact.
Happiness and calm is fine and dandy, but where would be the diary entries, the poems, the pictures, the passion, the camaraderie without the occasional wild card to stir things up for a short while?
I attempted to convey it all with the simple image of a flickering flame run amok.
When contained they stimulate new growth and rejuvenate the dormant.
Carelessness, however, can lead to long lasting wounds that spread beyond any one person could imagine.
I was also thinking of the forgotten at the end part.
Those characters that had, or did not ever get, their 15 minutes of fame.
The deer whose players were so passionately infatuated with but soon became depressing or tiresome to play.
And, like the flames, their enthusiasm smoldered until they lay forgotten and dormant.
I figure I failed quite badly at capturing all that was reeling in my head so I just wrote it out; it is, however, still a nice sounding little poem about fire.
So I decided to suck it up and post it anyway.
And yes, it does not rhyme.
Such nice alliteration.
"And yes, it does not rhyme." .. yes, we have no bananas..
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I like this. I'm not really
There actually was a time
Ooh. And yes, the
And yes, the alliteration rocks.
I think I officially like alliteration now. |D
At least for the moment.
Kaoori- Typing the poem: 10
Attempting to move text to resemble a specific shape: 1/2 hour.
Having people appreciate the effort: Priceless
Ephra- I can't help it, I'm such a sucker for 'action' stories. xD
Whenever someone makes an 'evil' or 'quirky' character I get all excited to see where they're going to go with it.
The occasional wonder and exploration pieces are really refreshing now days.
Ocean- Provided you're not being forced to write it right?
Wonder and exploration piece.
If only I had time. D:
...Indeed. D:
I'm not the most poetic. xD
Neither am I really. I can't
I can't rhyme.
I use a rhyming dictionary. xD
Alliterations are my best friend. I write my English papers in alliteration sometimes just to see if my professor notices.
hmm... I want to say
I want to say something to this, becaus I like this. But I don't have any intelligent words at the moment. I can imagine how tricky it was to get the flame shape in _word_ (hatethisprogrammhateit)
hmm...
I like it, thanks for sharing.
Is that enough for the moment? .__.
This is beautiful... I wish I
I wish I had some better words to explain how amazing this is. Thank you for sharing it. <3
Whoah. This is so unique and
This is so unique and it flows so well.
Please make more. <3
Oh, this is just amazing! So
I love this. Dearly. I love
I think you did a great job!
literature/prose buff senses
this, is so freakin' clever. I like how the shape of the poem holds as much meaning and symbolism as the actual writing does. Just ties it all together and makes it very creative.
I tip my hat to you.
Thanks for the compliments
I can't conjure the correct
But I sure do love it. <3