Faunet story 3(in the mist)

Opening her eyes to the new day Faunet is caught off guard. Threre is no sun not even the faintest hint of happiness is around to comfort her.Fog surrounds every thing leaving only the scent of fear The other deer she sees are wary of every newcomer. She ponders what could have destroyed the forests peace and tranquility. It is not long before she sees another group of deer approaching the others. These deer were different they were not scared but were infact hostile. These deer imediately started to attack the others. Bewildered Faunet can not take her eyes off the violent sceen. In the mist of the violence Faunet spots her friend the male deer she once played with. It was not hard to see the regret in his eyes the nor monster that she saw. Faunet easily realized that her supossed friend was in charge of this whole attack. There was no sign of friendship in this greeting leaving Faunet to wander if they were ever friends. Before she could think any more on the past she ran. She ran as fast as she could to get away from the violence and the memories that would haunt her for life. She stopped only to hide under the bridge . Even then she started to shake from what she just witnessed. In the back ground a wolf howls and is only an echo of her heart. Shaken and scared Faunet blacks out not knowing if she will see the light of day ever again.


I know my writing is not that good but please write your opinon.


See you in the forest.
xhunter's picture

this is infact good. let me

this is infact good. Smiling
let me guess the fog the other day inspired you to write this?
very few times i see people writing storys about the mist. ether that or i have not spotted the storys with the mists and all.
all storys are great its only when you think there bad when they become bad.
Good luck on your next storys if you wright more. Smiling

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is staring at you. *star*
inspirer writing and poems //// if you like dragon eggs you can look at mine. at http://dragcave.net/user/xhunter Smiling

Yes the fog did inspire me.

Yes the fog did inspire me. And I hope I will be able to continue this one never knows though.
ocean's picture

I really like the

I really like the descriptions, yet again. You described the mood in the forest well. Glad you're continuing with these! Laughing out loud

Thank you for your kind

Thank you for your kind complements.
yoru-chan's picture

i really cant say anything

i really cant say anything besides "i love it"ffff
Paralda's picture

<3 nice composition!!

<3 nice composition!!


Thanks :0

Thanks :0