Faunet

Ill bite my tongue
And close my eyes
For it isnt worth the petty fight
Whats the use of screaming
When whats said is said
Whats done is done
I wont forget
But that doesnt mean Ill carry on with it
After all its pointless a fight.
Ill walk away first
But that does not mean you have won the fight
Ill never surrender
For what I believe in is true
My friends you gathered together
And stood up for me
For this I thankyou
I can not say much about the person you were fighting
But now lets cease fire
And take a deep breath
For whats the point of continuing this battle
When we have already won the war.
Only more wounds will be inflicted
And rubbed with salt.
So lets wash them with water and walk away.




Guys ok sorry for posting that last night I was selfishly trying to stop Faunee from cluttering my writing blogs with her hurtful words.



( this is not all I have to say but I put it up later.)
Density's picture

/hugs Thank you for being so

/hugs
Thank you for being so mature with this situation <3
You know your work is amazing <33

I hate to say it but Im kinda

I hate to say it but Im kinda used to it.
Oh well

Whatever,,,,,,,,,,,,

Whatever,,,,,,,,,,,,
Latte's picture

I love your poems. They

I love your poems. They always seem to have a meaning. If that makes sense.

Since they come from the

Since they come from the heart they will always have a meaning.Smiling

Peace not only with

Peace not only with ourselves
But with others
Will give us happiness.

As a growing and maturing

As a growing and maturing artist you're going to face people who bluntly display their dislike for your work. Just as some people will connect with your pieces and enjoy them, some wont, it's the human condition. Still, don't let comments like that stop you, use them and let them encourage you to improve! Smiling

I know thats why I left like

I know thats why I left like I did last night Faunee said her opinion I only wanted her to rein in her language and stuff like that. But I cant control a person and I dont want to.Even though people say cruel words its apart of human society nowadays.

I'm glad you handled it like

I'm glad you handled it like you did, you were very composed.
It's just a shame some of the other members couldn't see you were trying to avoid more negativity, not generate it.

If I had kept going Im sure I

If I had kept going Im sure I would not have been as composed, another reason why I got off. Sometimes you just gotta sit outside on your porch and clear your head,

"Sometimes you just gotta sit

"Sometimes you just gotta sit outside on your porch and clear your head" <- that...right there!
Should be a new TEF mantra or something, would solve so many issues! lol

LOL . It would.

Laughing out loud LOL . It would.
onyxsoulclaw's picture

Wowow I missed the lama drama

Wowow I missed the lama drama that this came from so If I may I am ONLY commenting on this Peace of expresinate writing.

This Peace Shows many of your emotional sides which helps bring the reader closer to you and help them relate to you and your art. I admire that fact that you call for peace, and how you use a straight to the point Phrases. Your writing has bounce and rytheme, it rolls of the tounge nicly. There is also a sence of maturity about it I see you standing proud when I read this. At the end all i can do it nod my head it seems the right thing to do.

Over all A well thought expresinate peace with good discriptions and balance A+.
Keep it up and happy galloping.

*skips in a circle A+ whaaoo*

*skips in a circle A+ whaaoo* Smiling

Thanks thats exactly what I wanted my work to represent in this case.

Spreads you wings Be brave

Spreads you wings
Be brave enough to fly
Theres is no denying
That it takes courage
To face the relentless wind
But with trial and error
You will certainly discover the joy
Of learning
And the triumph of succeding.
onyxsoulclaw's picture

Wings spread wide Filled with

Wings spread wide
Filled with unresisting pride
Heart full to bursting
Rise above the cursing
Soul Glowing bright
Able to face all deamons of the night

A victory is grand
no matter what the size
But always remember
There really is no prize

What is broken
must be fixed
With heart , mind and soul
Otherwise shall open a deepest type of hole.

Thyne wisdom shall glide ye to the true gold.
Latte's picture

I just love poetry.

I just love poetry.

These wings They allow me to

These wings
They allow me to glide
Airborn in the sky
Flying high
I feel free
Yet with a better sight I can see

What others have not the opportunity to see
With gracefull twirls I direct my flight
Listening to the lullibyes
Of my friends
They sing with joy and happiness
Fulleing my flight
Until I stop to perch and rest
To sing my song
And let my voice be heard.
onyxsoulclaw's picture

Your wings be strong Your

Your wings be strong
Your flight is full
Your head is high and gay (old english means Happy)
But in the vastness of the blue
You are not only you.

Beneth your wings they glide
Like golden shimmers in the air
They hold such feeling for surely they do care.

They hold you steady
never letting you fall
They smile and dance around you
keeping your cool.

They turn the north wind aside
They Guard your name from those who lied
They stand over you through the poring rain
They sit beside you and feel your pain.

Though they are but names upon a brezzes
whispered form time to time
Traveling within dreams
Guiding and giving
There and gone
No matter where
They will stand
Surround you
Till the song is sung
Till the end of time.



I sit on this perch Singing

I sit on this perch
Singing my melody
A familiar tune my bretheren hear
As they dance grace fully in the air
Carefree unbound
For there wings
And there hearts Knows no bounds
They have never been caged
Such a thing
Would bring shame to their name
Which for many years they have built upon
Their hearts would grow stale
Wrotting in a cell
But they know no such things
And now my songs will be sung
They will be heard throughout the test of tome
While I watch them flying with prde and freedom
Forever the memory will stay with me in my heart.
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In a tree weighed down with

In a tree weighed down with blossom
Made light by grace of song
No prison holds the mind
As the mind is alway strong.

A song as old as time
A heart golden as the sun

Surround buy those who dance
Prace and play
These are the ways to spend the day
Golden wings reflect the light
Banished are the fears of night.

Free sprits gather Under the brightness of this one.
To share a pleasure of a scone. (sorry just having lunch)

A voice like medow lark at dawn
Throws to the darkness all it's scorn.

The Darkness knows to fear
and melts in to the light
For the strongest weapon in the world
is the friends we hold so tight.

As my song continues on The

As my song continues on
The sun slowly sets
On the horizon its brilliant colors
Shine for only a little while
Introducing the night
To us all
The night arrives with spirits in the air
Curious am I to know
About them
But hesitant am I to ask
For fear of misunderstanding
These dark nights
Allows no light
To burn or shine
Fear is its friend
Its constant allie
For with fear he controls
He holds tightly to it
Afraid to let go
Least we all rebel
His reign is only for a few hours
But even so little time
Brings us horendous nightmares
My songs will stop after sunset
For even they can not penetrate the night
But as the morning breaks
And the sun peaks
Then will my song begin again.
Finding happiness within the light.
quaesting's picture

Very important words.

Very important words.
Latte's picture

*Claps*

*Claps* Smiling
onyxsoulclaw's picture

A wish for the sun The

A wish for the sun
The dawn
The light
A song to end the blackest night

One swan song is alone
Sometimes the flock must gather
though they may drown out this swan
The core shall always be strong

Sometimes never heard
Sometimes never seen
But there all the same.
To sing and dance a merry game

The words of the song matter not
Though they say a lot
It is the emotion that seaps from heart and mind
it that fills all from dumb to the blind.

A mute may still sing with their heart and soul
All we have to do is fill the in the hole.

Once it begins where does it end?
The price is set
the answer
a friend
Though not of blood
flesh or mind
They still have a desire to be to you
kind.

At the break of dawn A new

At the break of dawn
A new song begins
Not of my own but by another
Whos feather are white and pure
Much like the heart
She use to voice her song
The emotion of the song
Over power her strong words
Once its begins it never ends
But it does not matter your lost for word
Your gaze locked
Captivated by beauty of song
The means goes deeper than one could imagine
Seeping into your body
Like a dull novicane
It takes over
There is no telling when it will ware off
This pretty pure novicaine
Kind meaning of a song
Sung by a swan
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I swan can only fly though

I swan can only fly though
Not shake hands
Hold or embrase
A failied beauty
A flaw in the plan
Cause by the lust of man.

In this world of darkness and dispare
with none to care
when all feel alone
remember the light
It will guide you right
and call your name through the night

Friend.

I'm off now Thankyou for your words . May the song be sung for always.

The shadow of beauty It cant

The shadow of beauty
It cant be touched
Least it shatters
Like glass
Only to be seen
Through the lust of mans eyes
The song is pretty though it can not be captured
It is free
Like the gentle breeze
Flowing on forever
In darkness and in light
Its voice shall be heard

No problem.

May it fly freely and be heard,let it touch the heart of many and console all who need it.
Kiraki's picture

Oh my goodness you two!!

Oh my goodness you two!! Please do continue another time, this is beautiful <333

If onxsoulclaw will agree I

If onxsoulclaw will agree I will as well.

Some other time
In a far away place
We shall continue
This interesting game
All that is needed
Is these two players
An imagination
that has no limits
And a crowd cheering them on
With simple grace
As long as they meet
And have good intentions
Then nothing shall go astray.
Kiraki's picture

Yay