"Where... Where am I?"
"I feel so cold..."
"Jergens? Are you out there?"
"I'm sorry..."
"I'm sorry I got angry with you..."
"Do you..."
"Do you still love me?"
"..."
"Whos there?! Jergens?!"
"We are here."
"We?"
"Yes, We."
"Who is 'We'?"
"We... The Twin Gods of The Endless Forest..."
"You... exist?"
"Yes."
"Why are you here?"
"We've come to punish you."
"Punish me?"
"You killed one of our children. You must be punished."
"The blind deer?"
"One of our children is dead because of you..."
"It tried to kill me..."
"Our baby..."
"I'm sorry..."
"Our child..."
"I'M SORRY!!!"
"We have decided... that you shall be reborn..."
"Reborn? How is that punishment?"
"You shall be reborn into the body of a newborn fawn... Never to grow... And never to die... Your pelt shall be of white, a mockery of us. Your fellow deer will stop at nothing to kill you for it."
"I don't deserve this..."
"Your hooves shall be of solid gold, so you will not easily run away from your foes. Your eyes shall be of blood red, to represent the needless blood you have shed."
"..."
"No matter how much your body is mangled, torn and ripped, it will never die. There will be no death for you.
"I want Jergens..."
"He is dead."
"No..."
"Your birth is coming. Prepare yourself."
"Jergens..."
"He abandoned you. Why do you want him?"
"JERGENS!!!"
I love dialogues like this.
#4b5160
I love seeing the Twin Gods
I also like the crisp, just dialog style of this.
Sithersss~ O, Y thank ya.
Teraterbethersss~ I feel bad for it, actually. xD I'm sure they're both wonderful people in real life.
-has been silent reader-
o3o now it all ties together...
:3 great job on the stories, always a cliffhanger!
BambooKirinersss~ Not
x3 lol oooh another story!
oooh another story! =D If I could make a suggestion... Perhaps Jergens ran into the forest before he died? (idk how he would turn into a deer though)
On an unrelated note- You NEED/not want/NEED MSN
-pokes-
Bamboooerssss~ Well, in my
I think I have an idea though. It just might work =P
P.S : Hur, I should x3 Maybe I will someday when I'm less lazy *SHOT* Okay, okay... I'm going! D:
Idea! -does happy dance cuz
-does happy dance cuz Gingernut is gonna get a msn-
x3 tell me when you get it so I can add you
-is hyper-