The encounter (violence warning)

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(everyting gets better with Lux Aetarna!)

Kiowa was lying and relawing in a pretty flower patch.
Suddenly the black male who 'liked' Kiowa's whife Faunet appeared from the shadow's.


"It's revenge time, nasty little moron"
"You again, I guess so..." He said with a smooth voice.
The two stags was standing and facing each other, they bowed to each other slightly.
They lowered they're rack's of antlers and were ready.
They charged. When the two pears of antler's hit each other, a extremly loud sound bursted towards the forest, making an echo back.
It was hitting each other with antlers, biting and kicking.
All the sound's attracted other deer, both buck's and does.
The flower patch was pretty much covered in blood now.
Both stags very bloody, wounded and weak.
The loser, had to be dead, or almost.

The turning point came, Kiowa had sunk his sharp skull teeth into the stags neck.
But, the stag threw Kiowa off and pinned him down with his antlers.
When he lifted his head, no movement from Kiowa, and the stag turned around triumfing.
All the other deer boo-ed and yelled that Kiowa had to get up.
The other stag was just laughing and checking up does.
But suddenly there was hope, Kiowa stood shacking up.
The stag turned around exactly too late, Kiowa hit his head hard with his antlers.
The stag sunk to the ground, with a crushed skull.
Chickenwhite's picture

Intense! OwO

Intense! OwO
z.m123's picture

I take it as a good thing ^.^

I take it as a good thing ^.^
Chickenwhite's picture

Very! >w< It's a little

Very! >w< It's a little short, but in this case that's good, because long fight-scenes have a tendency of being boring >w<
z.m123's picture

Why thank you! I thought

Why thank you!
I thought short ones were...
Snowsauria's picture

This was very good, so I

This was very good, so I would have liked it to be a bit longer, it was very interesting! n_n
z.m123's picture

Yeah ^.^', thank you (:

Yeah ^.^', thank you (: