Dying

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I have decided to kill Jeremy off.I barely play him anymore and I made a lot of mistakes with him,I hope you all can forgive me for the many mistakes.

Jeremy trotted towards the Playground,it was a nice and warm day.There he lay in between his favorite pile of rocks.
He drifted off to sleep....

Hugh?
...It was now night and a few fireflies danced in a nearby flower patch.
He stretched his muscles and gave out a loud yawn.Thirsty,he stumbled,still only a little more asleep than awake,to the Pond.He sipped his water loudly and noisily.
A low,hungry growl made him instantly awake.
He looked up and searched for the source of the sound.What could make that growl?Not a deer....a wolf?.....FOX! He ran back to the Playground and hurriedly climbed the biggest rock.
There.Now I am safe and can go back to sleep..
He was about tao lay down and shut his eyes when he heard the sound of sharp claws against rock.
THE FOX!!...I hope it's to stupid to climb.. That was the last thing he thought before the starved fox jumped onto his face and began ripping his skin and eating him alive.
Blood poured everywhere and it was a nasty fight that seemed to last hours until...
The sound of a loud yelp and a proud sigh came.
Jeremy was worn out...he may be big and tough but this fox had been pratically starved and diseased.
Nodeer could fight a animal like that easily.
His wounds were probably infected,his fur torn and ripped from his skin,huge ugly wounds were still bleeding,he was losing to much blood.

With a gasp he fell from the big rock to the hard,cold ground.
He shut his eyes...Still alive but to be dead by the next day.


(You may RP with him here if you want)
AngelWings's picture

Being lazy and not coloring

Being lazy and not coloring speech. nice story but sad

Zoro walked past, and scented Jeremy. Also blood. "Jeremy? JEREMY!" She rushed to the rock at the playground and lay down, tears starting to stream freely down her face.
-Tabby
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Ty Jeremy lifted his

Ty

Jeremy lifted his ear.
Zo-Zoro?....Don't cry.
I don't want the last things I see is sadness alright?Be strong for me,please.

His eyes gave a last sparkles before his ear went down and he closed his eyes again.
His breathes getting weaker and weaker...



Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
AngelWings's picture

"O-ok...I'll be strong...and

"O-ok...I'll be strong...and I don't think there is anything I an do for you to help right now." she tried to stem her tears, and succeeded eventually.
-Tabby
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With no more energy to talk

With no more energy to talk he just lay there,blood dripping and breath weakening faster than ever.
With at last some energy left he said softly,Goodbye...I....love...you...Zoro...tell Reika....I...love
her...too.

With that he let out a final breath of air and drifted into the most peaceful and eternal sleep ever...


:'O
*sniff*
So sad )=
*eats popcorn*

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
AngelWings's picture

awww goodbye

awww goodbye Rascal/Jeremy!

"I will....I promise..."
-Tabby
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Reika's eyes widened as she

Reika's eyes widened as she sniffed out the cent of cold crimson blood. Her heart stopped. Everything around that revolved and spun her world had just stopped. What happened?
BouncyDeer1's picture

(There is a RP telling Reika

(There is a RP telling Reika what happened ^^)

Though the body had been buried by dirt and grass,his soul was still somewhere near it.
A warm breeze swept over Reika to comfort her,his soul looked at her.Though she could not see the spirit he could see her.Jeremy's nuzzle touched her mind and gave her the memory of his death so she could know where he went and why.The stag's spirit vanished into the ground soon after.


Just a little way of telling Reika why her mate is gone...*dramatic tears*

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
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Reika whimpered "No! NO! This

Reika whimpered "No! NO! This can't be!" she fell to the grass and lie there hours and hours on end, she stayed close to Jeremy's warn away body and protected it. Reika stopped eating and drinking, all she did was lay there.
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His spirit appeared once more

His spirit appeared once more and saw her,weak with hunger and thirst.This isn't what he wanted...not what he wanted at all!
Reika....Reika... He said in a whisper,but in her mind so she could only her him.
No....You must be happy....okay?......Be happy for me.......When I am in Heaven I don't want to see you like this......Be overjoyed I am at peace......I love you.
Then a warm breeze swept over her again and a flower landed at her feet,it's glow was magnificent and a leaf next to it read.
This flower represents our love from the day we became mates remember?When you forget me this flower will wither,live your live and forget me.For I am gone and at peace and you are alive with a future ahead of you.Always remember that my love.
-Jeremy/Rascal

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
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Reika understood but didn't

Reika understood but didn't want to accept. "No...I want us to be together forever...if dying is the only way to be with you, love, than that's sa risk I'm willing to do..please understand...I don't want to forget you either.. I am doing this for you, Jeremy ," she struggled to get up and feel the breeze some more.
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This time the spirit let the

This time the spirit let the wind tell her,it sang her a song about life and how she must live it fully and love her friends.
You will find love again Reika.....Just not with me.Please understand,I don't want you to die.....Think of your friends and how they would feel if you died.....Don't leave them.You will be with me when your time comes...It said softly in her mind.

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D