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Story thing

(This is the story thing of my character, Drake.
Please feel free to give me some advice on how to improve my writing Smiling )



Shivering the newborn male baby felt himself being picked up from the comfort of his mother’s arm and he feebly flailed his arms.
He heard a deep voice grunt and he opened his faded blue eyes and he saw himself being carried through a passageway, the male carrying him he couldn’t make out since there appeared to be no source of light, minus the spiky hair of the male which was glowing a faded blue color.




Finally after what appeared to be an hour the baby could see a glowing light ahead, his eyesight was fading and he felt his body start to change.
He squirmed and screamed in fear as he found one eye was completely blind and his other he could hardly see through.
He closed his eyes, wishing he could open them and he could see again when the man gently placed him on cold stone, whispered something he could make out as a good luck, tucked a feather behind his tiny ear, and left him behind.




For a few seconds he was silent, then screamed when his body started to dramatically change.
His legs became thinner, longer, and fur started to sprout everywhere.
He felt no change to his face but the rest of his tiny body began taking the form of a newborn fawn.
Thankfully, the feather his father had given him was still there. With his not completely blind eye he squinted at it and saw what looked like a straight, black feather. (The feather of a raven)



”Where……where am I?” He breathed, a little surprise he had the ability to talk. Heck, he was surprised he knew how to talk! He shook his head, as if to shake all the worry and questions from his head and set off to explore beyond the ruins of what appeared to be a temple of some kind.

Noob needs help please

Well as you can see I'm really new to this game (:
I'm enjoying the forest well but I have some questions....

How do you change some of the text color for blogs and stuff?
I noticed some people can make their links not appear like this,http://tale-of-tales.com/TheEndlessForest/register/pictogram.php?username=Hellohello99,how do they do that?


I'll probably have some more later but this is it for now XD

Little fawn biography

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Healthy,little antlers getting bigger.Growing steadily,but not so quickly as before,muscles beginning to show and fur getting thicker.
In a cranky,depressed mood



Name:Drake
Size:Above average
Sex:Male
Age:Early adolescent,immortal
Species:Death Demon/Human/Endless Forest Deer

Personality
  • Timid
  • Shy
  • Polite
    • Curious of everything
        • Gentle,unless mad or afraid
            • Can be thrown into fits of rage (Extremely uncommon but is possible if you anger him enough)
              • Likes to play with other fawns
                • Has a fear of water and never ventures to deep water
                    • Enjoys meeting new deer but rarely gets attached
                        • Makes a "murr" sound when happy
                          • Gets embarrassed quickly,will be likely to leave deer if feeling awkward



                            • Appearance

                              • Left eye is silver,blind in that eye
                              • Right eye is faded blue,poor eyesight in that eye
                              • Pelt the color of gingerbread
                                • Fluffy,fur fluffs out in bad weather and when scared or nervous
                                    • Stout-looking fawn body
                                      • Unnaturally large
                                          • Little fawn antlers,barely visible.Hides antlers with flowers,usually



                                            • Facts

                                              • Part demon,makes him very powerful in a fight (Note he will only be able to physically hurt another deer when he's a grown stag)
                                              • Almost completely blind,depends on scent to tell deer apart
                                                • Doesn't know his own strength
                                                  • Tends to groom his fur when nervous
                                                      • When almost dead he'll reach a physical state where he can't be harmed and will hide for several days to recover
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