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Twisted Eternity - Chapter 1

Hay guys, lol. 'Tis the first chapter. I hope you like it! It's pretty short, actually. XDDD
Feedback is greatly appreciated.
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Chapter 1 – Beginning With Light
In the darkness of night amongst the Forest, lights moved quickly and evenly through the trees. Although the light of day had faded long before, the candles illuminated pale antlers, and creamy-brown heads. Every fawn, doe and stag was adorned with these glowing beauties as they all made their separate ways towards a shining mass of stone.

The Ename Ruins were alight with candles deposited by those who had already reached their destinations. Twenty or so deer were grouped around and inside the structure, chatting, dancing and enjoying themselves. A few deer lifted their heads to greet those who had just arrived. Vipin was the first to greet Aeros and Naire as they stepped into the light. “Good evening.” His voice was deep and comfortable. Aeros inclined his head respectfully, murmuring a hello. Naire, however, just grinned and looked around. “Loop and the other guys here yet?”

Vipin ignored her rudeness. It was the way she’d been from the day she appeared in the Forest. “I saw Corsair with Emiva a few minutes ago,” he replied with a jerk of his antlers. “By the cage.” Naire nodded and trotted away. Her uncle watched her go with a sigh. “She’s getting more testy every day now.” He chuckled to himself. “I suppose I should expect it.” He, too, padded off to talk to Seele, nodding at Vipin as he went.
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HAY HAY HAY GUYS GUYS GUYS

I just wondered if you'd like to read my PotC fanfiction.
It's currently in the works, and I was thinking of saving it for NaNoWriMo, but I have a novel in plans that I could do then. :3 And I need the practice.
To put it short, it's about pirates.
They do piratey things.
Yay or nay? It'll be posted on my freewebs page.
[edit] Bumped for more opinions. Laughing out loud
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Updated bios lol

Name: Aeros
Title: The Storyteller
Picto: Here
How to Remember: It looks a bit like a tree on a ski. XD
Age: older adult
Gender: stag
Favorite set: The Orca pelt, the Long mask, and poppies in his antlers.
Build: A bit small for his age, with a large chest and slender legs.
Personality: Aeros is very quiet and calm. He prefers peace over anything else. He has been hurt severely due to his refusal to fight more aggressive stags. He likes to interact with other deer, but if they start spellspamming, buttonmashing, and acting like total idiots, he'll run off to be by himself.
Friends: Walter, Liekaface and a few more.
Family: Naire's his niece.
Mate: None
Favorite Location: In and around the Ruins
Favorite Pastime: Telling stories (duh)
Songs: Never-Ending story - Within Temptaion
Other: If he shoves his antlers at you, don't worry, he's just asking you to tone it down. XD

Name: Naire
Picto: Here
How to Remember: It looks like a box with a W in it. 8D
Age: young adult
Gender: antlerdoe
Favorite set: Gray and white pelt, Great Forest Spirit mask, and Real Deer antlers
Build: She's large for her age, and her body is long.
Personality: Normally, Naire's loud and obnoxious. She loves to party, and she can be a little aggressive. She has a pretty unrealistic view of the world and how it should be.
Friends: SILLIES. Liek Quammers. XD
Family: Aeros is her uncle.
Mate: Well...does a crush count? XD
Favorite Location: The Blue Bowl
Favorite Pastime: spellbombing others
Songs: I'm a bitch I'm a lover - whoever sings it lol
Other: She generally likes being around crowds, but sometimes she'll hang out with one or two deer.

Name: Loop
Picto:
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The end of the story slots, and a new deer!

Aeros

Current Mood: Weary
Being played right now? No
Set: Orca pelt, poppies in antlers, Long Mask
Current Form: Stag
Currently: Attempting to sleep

Naire

Current Mood: Caffenated
Being played right now? No
Set: Gray and white pelt, Real Deer antlers, Great Forest Spirit mask
Current Form: Antlerdoe
Currently: Feeling really insane and exhausted at the same time

Corsair

Current Mood: Aloof
Being played right now? No
Set: None
Current Form: Fawn
Currently: Talking with some does

Loop

Current Mood: Manipulative
Being played right now? No
Set: None
Current Form: Fawn
Currently: Scaring the other fawns

Tunafish
Being played right now? No
Set: None
Currrent Form: Fawn
Currently: Exploring
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NEW DEER LOLS
This is my fifth one. XD She's for whenever I just want to be myself in the Forest. I'll update all the bios and add hers later on.

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Okay, I have ONE spot left for the story I want to write. I'm actually having plot trouble right now, so it may be a while before it gets started. Lemme know what your deer's name and personality are, and I'll pen them in.
WOO.
1. Atiq (Atiq)
2. Blackwolf (BW)
3. Danii (Taliene, Rutilus, and Jared)
4. Seele (Seele and Auge)
5. Tabithaaa (Tabby)
6. Emiva (Emiva)
7. Pega (Toukan)
8. Sarie (Vipin, Aspen and Xylia)
9. Quammers (Quamar)
10. The Queen (Lieka)
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The beginnings of a story? [slots open] Plus pics from today!

Aeros

Current Mood: Content
Being played right now? Yes
Set: Orca pelt, poppies in antlers, Long Mask
Current Form: Stag
Currently: Closeup-taking

Naire

Current Mood: Loud
Being played right now? No
Set: Gray and white pelt, Real Deer antlers, Great Forest Spirit mask
Current Form: Antlerdoe
Currently: Running around with no goals

Corsair

Current Mood: Aloof
Being played right now? No
Set: None
Current Form: Fawn
Currently: Scaring fawns (even though he is one)

Loop

Current Mood: Calm
Being played right now? No
Set: None
Current Form: Fawn
Currently: Attempting to Watersit

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Everyone's been writing really kickbutt stories lately, so I'm thinking of doing my own. :3 The plot's secret at the mo, but I do need a few deer who are willing to interact with each other.
Just toss me a screenshot of your deer in his or her favorite set. ^^

1. Atiq (Atiq)
2. Blackwolf (BW)
3. Danii (Taliene, Rutilus, and Jared)
4. Seele (Seele and Auge)
5. Tabithaaa (Tabby)
6. Emiva (Emiva)
7. Pega (Toukan)
8. Sarie (Vipin, Aspen and Xylia)
9. Quammers (Quamar)
10.

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I took some closeups during a short jaunt to the playground. Added to that is one I took yesterday at the ruins. Dunno who any of these guys are, though. XD








And then some group pics.



Closeups at the Ruins. :3



We are the Deer in Black. XD Sarie, Peepo, me, and two others I don't recognize.

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Lol stoled too :3 Plus a short story.

This looked...really useful so I hijacked it.

Aeros

Current Mood: Sentimental
Being played right now? No
Set: Orca pelt, poppies in antlers, no mask
Current Form: Stag
Currently: Thinking about the good old days

Naire

Current Mood: Irritable
Being played right now? No
Set: Gray and white pelt, Real Deer antlers, Great Forest Spirit mask
Current Form: Antlerdoe
Currently: venting to herself

Corsair

Current Mood: Obnoxious
Being played right now? No
Set: None
Current Form: Fawn
Currently: Bothering Naire

Loop

Current Mood: Calm
Being played right now? No
Set: None
Current Form: Fawn
Currently: Looking out at the others

And I decided to write a short story about a deer who's since passed on, and is looking at the forest.

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What It Was by Fayne

He was walking amongst the trees, silently, and without haste. His form was wavering and transparent to those who could see him - and even they, the birds, squirrels, and other small creatures weren't disturbed by his presence. The other deer paid him no heed. They had no idea he was even there. A part of him appreciated this, for he could stand and watch without incident. Still, the rest of him wanted desperately to be one of them again.
Two fawns sat paralell to the Ename Ruins, while a mature stag with six tines on each antler told them a ghost story. In the old one's time, the ruins had been a glorious castle, filled with Them. Now there was nothing left of it's former glory. The stag dipped his head in a silent sigh, and stretched a leg out to move on.
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Corsair and Loop! Plus some more updates

Name: Loop
Age: 16 human years (older teenager)
Gender (if we had any): female
Pictogram: Tricky minx's picto
How to remember it: two arrows with a curve at the bottom and a LOOP in the middle. xDD
Favorite set: none yet
Personality: Cunning and sly, with a tendency to blend in with her surroundings. She does enjoy searching for groups of fawns, and then playing hide-and-seek or tag. Her tag signal would be a bow, a nuzzle, and then a RUNAWAYREALLYFAST. Which means you're it. Hide and seek is the same way. She can be hard to spot.
Build: small, with a big butt.
Friends: Aeros and Naire
Family: Corsair (brother)
Theme song: Real Wild Child
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Name: Corsair
Age: 22 human years (young adult)
Gender (if we had any): male
Pictogram: Ugly little wart's picto
How to remember it: looks like a smiley face with a beard, or something. Plus a swirl to represent water. ^^
Favorite set: none yet
Personality: Daring and...very piratey. xDD Can be very much a gentleman, though. A little bit dark.
Build: compact, and a little small for his age.
Friends: Aeros and Naire
Family: Loop (sister)
Theme Song: He's a Pirate (WUT.)
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Name: Aeros
Age: adult (maybe 43 in human years)
Picto: Mr. Buttaface's Picto
How to Remember It: It looks a bit like a tree, or an umbrella.
Description: Aeros is a stag. His favorite set is the orca pelt, Long Mask, and poppies on his antlers.
Personality: Aeros is kind and gentle. He loves to tell stories, but other then that he is usually quiet. Although he prefers to keep for himselfm, he will stand up for his friends and loved ones. He is complacent and calm, and not given to getting frightened.
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Tentative new deer.

I'm thinking about adding two new deer to the lot. To put it shortly, the deer will be chosen depending on what mood I'm in each day. Aeros might have a bit of an update as well as Naire. Smiling
I can only tell you that the new names will start with a C and an L. xD
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WEWT.

Today I came across Walter and Cutlery! Cutlery and Naire nuzzled for a little, but Walter ran away. >:C Grumpy old retired stag.
SOMEONE SPELLSPAM ME, PLEASE.
[edit] Cutlery, you meanie. Sitting up there on top of the idol where I can't reach you to bite your-I mean, to hang out. It's getting boring down here.
[editedit]THE DEVOUTS ARE SPELLSPAMMING ME
NOT YOU GUYS
RUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN
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Dream Set Help, please?

Spell-spammers, be on the lookout for Naire!
She needs the gray and white pelt to complete her dream set. If you see this deer coming by (or at least, a deer with this picto), MASH those buttons.
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