anybody? anywhere? cx

hey there! Currently no tablet connected to the computer, otherwise I could do a redline, but here is some hopefully helpful advice. Overall I think it's a good start, especially the neck and the part between the front legs.

I think the biggest problem is the legs and their joints. I'm not sure what sort of creature you are going for here - canine or ungulate? If it is a deer, look at deer pictures and see where the joints are, that would probably be helpful (and make it easier to find a good pose too!). If your program allows it, try to make the canvas bigger or scale down the figure so it fits better. More freedom that way.

I found some pictures with similar poses, there you can see how the legs and joints work too.

http://www.nigeldennis.com/stock/images/mammals/species/springbok/25135.jpg
http://travelblog.portfoliocollection.com/images/Jumping_Springbok.jpg
http://www.biocyclopedia.com/index/general_zoology/images/images41/001.jpg
http://www.aspinallfoundation.org/sites/default/files/styles/latestnews_...

(If it's a canine, look at pictures of canines instead, obviously)

Hope that helped a little. :>


e; and yeah like SoliloquyChryseis said, the back leg has some weird thing going on where it meets the belly, it should be rounder; right now it almost looks like an extra joint.

c: thank you so much !
that's very helpful, I'll fix it right up, and post that, and see if it's closer to what it needs to be .3.

but, yes I'm going for deer, I didn't look at a reference, which I obviously should have cx, and I'm going to be doing that more often aha.
and the program I use doesn't let you do that /: sadly.

lkjdfn still though, thank you so much c:

-Rells the red line also helped !